I myself choose Luigi
Type: Posts; User: Captain_Kaos
I myself choose Luigi
That was a cool way of reintroducing rainer, beside what SCND said it was a very well written chapter and i cant wait till the next chapter
Hey Specs Pikachu welcome to BMGF, I hope you enjoy it here and have tons of fun
Author name: Cooking king
Fic name: http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/f227/nicks-epic-journey-146515/
Summary: Nick has started his Pokemon adventure and nothing is as it seems
So a journey fic don’t get much notice oh well the show must go on
Okay, this is the second and hopefully more awesome chapter, the last one was a little rushed but this should be good.
Chapter 2 ...
Just in general don't tell us this outside of the narrative, let us know in the story.
okay, onto the story itself.
Whilst there were some good things, your structure needs quite of bit of...
This I admit is a journey fanfic but there are those people who like them so what the heck. This is my first fanfic or anything posted in the workshop, so offer feedback if you feel the need.
Wow that is awesome description and wording I have to admit that battle scene seemed just perfect. Keep it up
Yea I am just working on the end of the first chapter then i might get someone to take a look at it, hopefully it turns out well and i got tons of free time over the weekend
This is the best at the moment i think it is really detailed with just enough action I can't wait till the next chapter is posted
Yea i can use a hand, i am struggling with making my story flow like it dont make sense
Right now i have already got some advice but I want a whole lot of advice, so can anyone give me some advice to writing a fanfic cause mine sucks at the moment
Vote: Rio Kamishiro
Well me and my friends were on a patio thing held up by wooden things anyway when i got caught we all screamed at the same time then ran inside and couldn't get to sleep cos we were scared damn
I'm craving cookies
1 cup of Rice
300g of bacon
150g of onion
3 cups of water
Half a Capsicum(optional)
I take mine white with marshmellows
I'll join if you have a spot
Hey can you make fanfics that are not based around pokemon
Cool do you know anyoneelse @#$%^^&& that can join this
You can call me cal i dont mind
So do u know anyone else that would be interested to join