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Fanfic Help: A place for those in need.

  1. Jabberjaw
    Jabberjaw
    If you need help with your fanfic, this is the place to be. Comment on what you are writing about and what exactly it is you need help with. Interact with the other users of the club. Soon, you will meet other users, and even be able to message somebody to meet you here when you need help.

    Suggestion: If you want to borrow somebody's time to help you with your story, offer payment. Let them use your signature to support their fanfic for an agreed amount of time. (example: 1 weeks, 2 weeks...)

    Discussion. I need help with the fan fic I am writing.
  2. Jabberjaw
    Jabberjaw
    Double posting:

    "I thought I would go ahead and post this now. c:
    I actually need help with a ST09 one, if anyone knows enough about it."
    -Bullfinch

    Can anybody help him?


    Also, for any of you who have read the first 3 chapters of my fanfic The Rise of Roark: A Sinnoh Story. Do you think I should ever make Cranidos evolve? I have my mind made up but I'd really like some feedback on your opinions.
  3. Thundagere
    Thundagere
    Quote Originally Posted by Jabberjaw
    Double posting:

    "I thought I would go ahead and post this now. c:
    I actually need help with a ST09 one, if anyone knows enough about it."
    -Bullfinch

    Can anybody help him?


    Also, for any of you who have read the first 3 chapters of my fanfic The Rise of Roark: A Sinnoh Story. Do you think I should ever make Cranidos evolve? I have my mind made up but I'd really like some feedback on your opinions.
    Not sure what Bullfinch is, but as to your second question.
    I can see the quandary you're in. Roark has to be strong to beat gym leaders, but he's weak in the games. So, here's my suggestion.
    Let Roark battle and catch a couple more Pokes, and a couple of gym leaders. Then, you can make it so that Cranidos evolves, and Roark eventually becomes a gym leader. Then, because he is a relatively minor leader, league rules make him use a basic pokemon. For this reason he uses something like his Rampardos's offspring, OR a totally different Cranidos.
    You can also make it so that Rampardos wants to stay and train somewhere during his travels, so Roark has to use a weaker one for gym battles...I guess.
  4. Jabberjaw
    Jabberjaw
    Bullfinch is a member of our group and that was his question.

    The thing about the games is I don't wan't to overcomplicate things like that. To me, the ONLY reason his pokemon are at the level they are at is because it's a requirement of the game. In actual "Sinnoh" all the gym leaders would be relatively strong. They wouldn't let ANYBODY be a gym leader. I'm using a character from the game and putting him in a more "realistic" Sinnoh. I don't want to add rules (like he must have weak pokemon as a gym leader) or loopholes that would supress his character and the story. See where I'm coming from?
  5. Kavidun
    Kavidun
    I think crainiados shouldn't evolve, and that Roark should get another Rampardos seperate to his Crainiados.
  6. Jabberjaw
    Jabberjaw
    Quote Originally Posted by Chao-der!
    I think crainiados shouldn't evolve, and that Roark should get another Rampardos seperate to his Crainiados.
    Chao-der! I have a question, I read in (Loading... Please Die) that you had 2 fanfics before this one that you decided needed to be "let go". Was it hard to keep up the others? this is my first fanfic...
  7. Thundagere
    Thundagere
    The thing about the games is I don't wan't to overcomplicate things like that. To me, the ONLY reason his pokemon are at the level they are at is because it's a requirement of the game. In actual "Sinnoh" all the gym leaders would be relatively strong. They wouldn't let ANYBODY be a gym leader. I'm using a character from the game and putting him in a more "realistic" Sinnoh. I don't want to add rules (like he must have weak pokemon as a gym leader) or loopholes that would supress his character and the story. See where I'm coming from?
    In this case, screw what I said. I thought you wanted to follow game canon, and that's why I said what I said. Instead, I think you should let him evolve, and just write our own path.
  8. Bullfinch
    Bullfinch
    lol, I love that everyone thinks I'm a guy. xD
    Girls can has read Bulfinch's Mythology too. cl
  9. Flaze
    Flaze
    Well, it's your fic, so maybe you should try this, you can have Cranidos evolve and Roark can become strong, then when you get the the part where he becomes a gymleader you can make it that there's a rule that says that gymleaders can only use their weakest Pokemon during challenges, so you can have him catch another Cranidos, Geodude and Onix.
  10. boondockArtist
    boondockArtist
    Not trying to spam with other group links but you cancome here to get help with fanfics or to help others
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