Help on description!!

Help on description!!

  1. TeamGalacticMercury
    TeamGalacticMercury
    I know from experience that description can be really hard for young authors. Here is a great place to help spice-up chapters in no time! You can ask for help or give pointers on how to do it!!!
  2. Erdrick
    Erdrick
    Well, I would like some help...
    My fanfic that you can post in without getting an infraction is called Pokémon Trading Card Game-Fanfiction.
  3. LightningTopaz
    LightningTopaz
    An exercise for describing:

    Pretend your audience is not familiar with Pokemon (or your fandom of choice). How would you describe the characters to them?
  4. TeamGalacticMercury
    TeamGalacticMercury
    Here are some questions that you might ask yourself;

    What do the characters look like?

    What season is it?

    What is the geography? (forest, mountains, beach, desert)

    What time of day is it? Sunset? Moonhigh?

    What does your character see?

    Use different words. Instead of said use any of these-
    exclaimed
    replied
    screamed
    hollered ect.

    Hope this helps!!!
  5. ghaskan
    ghaskan
    Quote Originally Posted by Fire
    Here are some questions that you might ask yourself;

    What do the characters look like?

    What season is it?

    What is the geography? (forest, mountains, beach, desert)

    What time of day is it? Sunset? Moonhigh?

    What does your character see?

    Use different words. Instead of said use any of these-
    exclaimed
    replied
    screamed
    hollered ect.

    Hope this helps!!!
    For the "avoid said" matter, I've found this site that contains 214 words to use instead of say.

    http://www.spwickstrom.com/said/
  6. TeamGalacticMercury
    TeamGalacticMercury
    I know. There's a lot!
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