12th January 2013, 08:32 AM #1
VeloJello's Splashing Sculpture
Target Pokemon: Magikarp
Target Points: 25+
Hand-crafted from glaze and ceramic clay, this lousy sculpture was created in a spur of boredom during art class. If someone wanted to grade it, that would be swell.
Among my frivolous thoughts,
I believe there are beautiful things seen by the astronauts.
The indications reveal
That few of us realize life is quite surreal.
22nd January 2013, 03:01 AM #2
Re: VeloJello's Splashing Sculpture
Can I just say, this is awesome! I'd totally put something like this on my desk or something. So cute ^^
Okay, onto the grading. Most of the colors of Magikarp are accurate, but you did forget his bottom fin, unfortunately... But I do see that you did the fin stripes, the scales, and even the little line behind his head and before his side fin. I like that attention to detail. I also noticed that you made him pretty big, too, and boy do I know how tough it is to get the colors to glaze just right. I really like how you got his side fin to stick straight out like that, as if he's in mid-swim. The sculpture is really good in this. One thing I could pick on is probably that he's less... roundy, and more squared-off, but that's most likely because you did him mostly on a flat surface.
Score: 55/100, which means Magikarp is caught, then polished and shined to perfection. Good job on this :)