This is a really cute picture that has a lot of bright colours and a cool idea behind it.
You put a lot of detail into trying to get the leaves to look right and the look really nice. The coins look cool and like the ones that we see in the animations for the move. I like that you have filled the piece with the details and cool effects. I really love your use of the rule of thirds to make the focus, Hoppip, more interesting, its a valuable tool to use. I would have liked a little more depth in the background though.
I love your use of many colours, which makes the piece very fun and energetic. While having lots of colours, you've also kept them toned down a bit too, which is nice to see that the colour isn't overpowering. Your shading on Hoppip is very well done and there isn't any complaint with that. I really would have loved to see some better shading on the leaves and coins. They look very plain with no shadows. I like how you used colour to bring out the focus, by outlining in black but everything else in colour.
Hoppip looks really well done and exact to the original art.
In the end this is a really nice piece that has some little flaws and can only get better! You get a 50 on this and a Hoppip!!! Have fun with it!