As is obvious, you used an existing or similar box from Froot Loops as a reference image. The Kelloggs logo is nicely done and accurate to the real one. Something that stood out to me is the lack of dark outlines on ‘Froot Loops’, which made it stand out in comparison to the rest. Lines seemed a bit shaky in spots, and color bled into areas it wasn’t always supposed to. Would have liked to see more box art, details that would have broken the monotony of the red.
With the limited view we get of the pokemon, it doesn’t necessarily convey the main aspects of it. Its mainly just a green version of Toucan Sam instead of a Natu-esque crossover.The eyes and coloration were good choices, but it would have been nice to have more of the pokemon, and perhaps using different box art to more centralize the pokemon as the focus of the piece
In this image, there isn't much shading at all. Granted its a box, but it could have more light on one area. Could have gone well sitting on a table with a bowl of these oft loved loops that tase of fruit.
1. Centralize the pokemon, or show more of it in the image.
2. Add shading, details, or an environment to break up the image