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    Hello, I just created this team and it's my first one on a more competitive level then the basic in game teams. I would greatly any constructive criticism and advice.

    Infernape Focus Sash
    Blaze: "Powers up Fire-type moves in a pinch."
    64 Atk / 252 SpA / 192 Spe
    Hasty (+Spe / -Def)
    ~Fake Out
    ~Stealth Rock
    ~Fire Blast
    ~Close Combat

    Rotom-W Choice Scarf
    Levitate: "Gives full immunity to all Ground-type moves."
    252 Spa / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
    Modest (+SpA / -Atk)
    ~Thunderbolt
    ~Shadow Ball
    ~Trick
    ~Hydro Pump

    Kingdra Life Orb
    Swift Swim: "Boosts the Pokémon's Speed in rain"
    208 Atk / 136 SpA / 164 Spe
    Rash (+SpA / -SpD)
    ~Rain Dance
    ~Waterfall
    ~Hydro Pump
    ~Draco Meteor

    Gliscor Life Orb
    Hyper Cutter: "Prevents the Attack stat from being lowered"
    40 HP / 252 Atk / 216 Spe
    Jolly (+Spe / -SpA
    ~Swords Dance
    ~Earthquake
    ~Night Slash
    ~Roost

    Shaymin Life Orb
    Natural Cure: "All status problems are healed upon switching out"
    252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 SPE
    Modest (+SpA / -Atk)
    ~Seed Flare
    ~Earth Power
    ~Hidden Power Fire
    ~Leech Seed

    Drapion @Life Orb
    Battle Armor: "The Pokémon is protected against critical hits"
    252 Atk / 4 Hp / 252 Spe
    Jolly (+Spe / - SpA)
    ~Swords Dance
    ~Crunch
    ~Earthquake
    ~Aqua Tail
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    Default Re: Rate my first team

    Quote Originally Posted by infectious_Vendetta View Post
    Hello, I just created this team and it's my first one on a more competitive level then the basic in game teams. I would greatly any constructive criticism and advice.

    Infernape Focus Sash
    Blaze: "Powers up Fire-type moves in a pinch."
    64 Atk / 252 SpA / 192 Spe
    Hasty (+Spe / -Def)
    ~Fake Out
    ~Stealth Rock
    ~Fire Blast
    ~Close Combat

    Rotom-W Choice Scarf
    Levitate: "Gives full immunity to all Ground-type moves."
    252 Spa / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
    Modest (+SpA / -Atk)
    ~Thunderbolt
    ~Shadow Ball
    ~Trick
    ~Hydro Pump

    Kingdra Life Orb
    Swift Swim: "Boosts the Pokémon's Speed in rain"
    208 Atk / 136 SpA / 164 Spe
    Rash (+SpA / -SpD)
    ~Rain Dance
    ~Waterfall
    ~Hydro Pump
    ~Draco Meteor

    Gliscor Life Orb
    Hyper Cutter: "Prevents the Attack stat from being lowered"
    40 HP / 252 Atk / 216 Spe
    Jolly (+Spe / -SpA
    ~Swords Dance
    ~Earthquake
    ~Night Slash
    ~Roost

    Shaymin Life Orb
    Natural Cure: "All status problems are healed upon switching out"
    252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 SPE
    Modest (+SpA / -Atk)
    ~Seed Flare
    ~Earth Power
    ~Hidden Power Fire
    ~Leech Seed

    Drapion @Life Orb
    Battle Armor: "The Pokémon is protected against critical hits"
    252 Atk / 4 Hp / 252 Spe
    Jolly (+Spe / - SpA)
    ~Swords Dance
    ~Crunch
    ~Earthquake
    ~Aqua Tail
    Very balanced team with some neat pokes and attacks. Attacks themselves on the pokemon do not all have perfect coverage but one pokemon's problem is another's plaything so you did great there.

    It is a hyper offensive team since def. and sp. def. seem to be invested the least. Might I suggest putting in a wall or bulky defensive pokemon in there just so that you can switch it in to sponge attacks? also to spread around status, throw out entry hazards, phaze, maybe explode? whatever suits you best. if you switch pokemon in your battles they are gonna get hurt from big attacks because none have much investment in defense. You could make a more defensive gliscor (you gonna need to find one with poison heal however for best effect), or if not that, then try physical defensive pokemon like gliscor or donphan. Or specially defensive pokemon like eviolite chansey (if gen 5) or blissey. There are plenty more out there.

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    Default Re: Rate my first team

    Quote Originally Posted by AshK View Post
    Quote Originally Posted by infectious_Vendetta View Post
    Hello, I just created this team and it's my first one on a more competitive level then the basic in game teams. I would greatly any constructive criticism and advice.

    Infernape Focus Sash
    Blaze: "Powers up Fire-type moves in a pinch."
    64 Atk / 252 SpA / 192 Spe
    Hasty (+Spe / -Def)
    ~Fake Out
    ~Stealth Rock
    ~Fire Blast
    ~Close Combat

    Rotom-W Choice Scarf
    Levitate: "Gives full immunity to all Ground-type moves."
    252 Spa / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
    Modest (+SpA / -Atk)
    ~Thunderbolt
    ~Shadow Ball
    ~Trick
    ~Hydro Pump

    Kingdra Life Orb
    Swift Swim: "Boosts the Pokémon's Speed in rain"
    208 Atk / 136 SpA / 164 Spe
    Rash (+SpA / -SpD)
    ~Rain Dance
    ~Waterfall
    ~Hydro Pump
    ~Draco Meteor

    Gliscor Life Orb
    Hyper Cutter: "Prevents the Attack stat from being lowered"
    40 HP / 252 Atk / 216 Spe
    Jolly (+Spe / -SpA
    ~Swords Dance
    ~Earthquake
    ~Night Slash
    ~Roost

    Shaymin Life Orb
    Natural Cure: "All status problems are healed upon switching out"
    252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 SPE
    Modest (+SpA / -Atk)
    ~Seed Flare
    ~Earth Power
    ~Hidden Power Fire
    ~Leech Seed

    Drapion @Life Orb
    Battle Armor: "The Pokémon is protected against critical hits"
    252 Atk / 4 Hp / 252 Spe
    Jolly (+Spe / - SpA)
    ~Swords Dance
    ~Crunch
    ~Earthquake
    ~Aqua Tail
    Very balanced team with some neat pokes and attacks. Attacks themselves on the pokemon do not all have perfect coverage but one pokemon's problem is another's plaything so you did great there.

    It is a hyper offensive team since def. and sp. def. seem to be invested the least. Might I suggest putting in a wall or bulky defensive pokemon in there just so that you can switch it in to sponge attacks? also to spread around status, throw out entry hazards, phaze, maybe explode? whatever suits you best. if you switch pokemon in your battles they are gonna get hurt from big attacks because none have much investment in defense. You could make a more defensive gliscor (you gonna need to find one with poison heal however for best effect), or if not that, then try physical defensive pokemon like gliscor or donphan. Or specially defensive pokemon like eviolite chansey (if gen 5) or blissey. There are plenty more out there.
    Thank you for your advice. I am definitely going to make a more defensive gliscor and try it out. I will look into having a wall but I must say I don't know much about them and even who would be a good option to take out of my party to replace with a wall. If you have any suggestions on that I would greatly appreciate it, but I will definitely do some research on my own and work on it.

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