The Fox's compositions and covers. Need advice/criticism

Hey guys, I've been writing music for a while now, and I thought I'd just showcase some of my best for a little critiquing and analysis from you guys. I'd love some advice on how I can improve.

These are some of my originals:

Only Breath - Slower, Emotional sort of piece

Carpathia - A piece of film music I wrote. I tried to capture the wonder and mystery of the mountainous area in Hungary/Transylvania known as Carpathia, hence the name

Those Blues - Just a fun, edgy song with a bit of attitude

Method to the Madness - Another mellow song. I can't sing and I don't know anyone who can, so vocals are replaced by a synth

Better Day - My first proper comp'. A bit of a synth-rock/concept/idea/thingamajig I had a while ago.


And I've also done a few covers too:

House of the Rising Sun - An edgier version of a classic song. Again, vocals are replaced by a synth

Eleanor Rigby - A more contemporary cover of the Beatles' Eleanor Rigby that I did when I was bored


Let me know what you think

I am also open to suggestions as to what song you think I should do a cover of next, Pokemon music or not. Go ahead, surprise me and I might surprise you ;)

Cheers Guys,

The Fox

Those are some pretty good compositions. Even though there isn't much variety in the songs in terms of the emotions being conveyed (and instruments as well, but it's just a preference for me, so never mind ^^), they still are very catchy and fun to listen to. Especially Better Day.

However, you need to work on the mixing a bit more. For example, in Only Breath, the bass reverb is drowning the rest of the song out. I never used to mix songs much before, but it really is important. It helps bring out the best in a song.

Thanks for that JJM.

I originally had the bass a lot quieter than it is, but I felt that I could not get a full enough sound, so I increased it a bit, but I agree, I think I put it too high.

Any tips on how to convey emotions better? I'd like to improve in that aspect as well. It's always been a weakness of mine.

Once again, thanks for your help