I'm on my third chapter, technically, not second, but there's a part in the middle that I'm not happy with, since it's a little boring. I need to go in and alter it. Either ditch some dialogue or find some way to make the prose more interesting. Adding sarcastic prose is basically my go-to way to make boring lulls interesting, other than, you know, cutting them out. I think I can probably cut most of the part that's annoying me, in this case though. It's not hard, I'm just kind of impatient and want to get to later stuff. Especially in dialogue heavy chapters (which most of mine are but this one is in particular since all four main characters are on scene at the same time, plus there's a few more characters floating around in the scenes, not to mention the pokemon, but they don't really talk much), I usually write out all the dialogue before adding in much description, so I actually have the majority of the dialogue finished I just have to go in and add tags and actions and such and that's what's holding me up here. Again it's impatience.
But on the other hand its Aspen's POV for the whole chapter and he is just fun to write since he's such a sullen punk and basically thinks everyone other than himself is an idiotic raving lunatic out to get him and/or Cherry.