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    I am currently planing out a fanfic that follows the plot of Black and white. This is my first fanfic and some Ideas would be helpful.
    I'm not sure how to explane why N has diferant pokemon each time you battle him. So far I will write it as if he realeases pokemon after he is done using them or that he just befreinds the pokemon and never catches them.
    My three main charicters are Hilbert, Cheren, and Bianca although I may add Hilda in the future as another Main charicter.
    I will have the three of them travaling together. The fic will starts on christmas day. I plan on Hilbert and Cheren (and Hilda if I write her into the story) participating in the pokemon league but Bianca will challenge the first gym. I am having trouble writing Bianca's character because I don't want her to be the streotypical dumb blond.
    My characters are all 14 and I plan on having romancce in this but I will not make it the focus.

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    For the record, that is what happens. N only uses local pokemon and always releases them afterwards.

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    Thats what I assumed although I think it may be more interesting for N to have a natural talent to befreind pokemon. Most likely the because he was raised by pokemon when he was young

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    Quote Originally Posted by Elso View Post
    Thats what I assumed although I think it may be more interesting for N to have a natural talent to befreind pokemon. Most likely the because he was raised by pokemon when he was young
    It most likely is that way. According to N, the Pokémon speak to him. I think his gift is the reason why he's able to befriend Pokémon so easily, even legendaries.

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    I might do a prolague that explains N's crowning and childhood. it needs to be vauge but also understandable. any Ideas.

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    Game canon offers a lot of details on this. I recommend reading up on N and Ghetsis' back story

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    At This point We have our main characters
    Hilbert Black: Although he may have almost failed pokeschool he is a talented trainer. He tends to jump to conclusions too soon.
    Cheren Connar: An intelagent iduvidual, an a chess master, Cheren knows almost every thing there is to know about pokemon, but it is still a challenge for him to grasp the real deal.
    Bianca Dissenter:Although she is Unreliable and a bit of an airhead she seems to do well with catching pokemon.

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    Why don't you try switching up their personalities a little bit? Dunno, it seems as if every BW fic. has the same Bianca and Cheren - the smart one and the airhead.

    That's only my opinion, but I thought you'd want to differentiate your characters from the other ones.

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    Or rather, take their game personalities and expand on it. That's what I'm doing. So she's an airhead and unreliable. Make that a focal point but also give her some traits not mentioned in the game.

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    Here is a rough draft of the begining.

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    spelling, grammar, and punctuation could use a little work. When you do post the fic in full, you may want to tinker a bit with making it flow a bit better. It feels a bit rushed right now.

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    It's a work in progress right now the final draft will be a lot better gramaticly, and the story will be slowed ,at least in the begening.

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