adit8888's sprites page! (Please critique)

Hi guys! Last night I tried to do a recolor of Red's HGSS sprite. This is my first recolour so please critique it. I know this is just a piece of junk but... please help me!

EDIT: I moved the sprite to the sprite folder below...

Sprites folder:

The "Dark Red"
Volkner with Flint's colors

Volkner with Flint's colors VS Sprite
Flint with Volkner's colors

Flint with Volkner's colors VS Sprite
Young Lance (without cape)
Crimson Charizard
Blue Charizard
Joltreon
Magmabuzz
Chimchu
Pikaferno
Raifernape
Deathwing (Dark Salamence)

Blue Manaphy (Blastoise colors)

An avatar I made for my friend....

PS. Please don't insult them... maybe they're not very good... but I'm just starting out....

I'm not a spriter, but I think it looks nice. Did you use Photoshop? ^_^

Yes I used Photoshop ^_^

I think it's nice. :3
You should keep it up. I found no flaws, honestly. :3

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Originally Posted by Sora_

I think it's nice. :3
You should keep it up. I found no flaws, honestly. :3

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Really? Are you serious?

That was great. Not only was it good, but I like the color scheme.

We need some proper critique here.

First of, look at his shoes. One shoe looks distorted.

The outline is almost all black, you need to fix that.

And there's something I quite can't put my finger on that makes me not like the recolor.

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Originally Posted by Muffin™

We need some proper critique here.
First of, look at his shoes. One shoe looks distorted.

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Ok, I'll try to fix it. But, which one is distorted? Is it the right one?

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Originally Posted by Muffin™

The outline is almost all black, you need to fix that.

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Well, I made almost all of the outline black 'cause I used dark colors. But, I'll try to fix it

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Originally Posted by Muffin™

And there's something I quite can't put my finger on that makes me not like the recolor.

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OK.

Now I'll post my other sprites. Please critique them too!

Lance without his cape. Is it good?

Volkner with Flint's colours...
Flint with Volkner's colours...

Can I use that 1st one as my avatar and in a few RPs, along with the Volknor with Flint's colors? Thanx in advance :D

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Originally Posted by adit8888

Ok, I'll try to fix it. But, which one is distorted? Is it the right one?

Well, I made almost all of the outline black 'cause I used dark colors. But, I'll try to fix it

OK.

Now I'll post my other sprites. Please critique them too!

Lance without his cape. Is it good?

Volkner with Flint's colours...
Flint with Volkner's colours...

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MUCH MUCH MUCH BETTER.

And, oh yea, I meant the right shoe from my right.

Very nice edits. It is a bit hard to critique recolors as it is very difficult to mess a recolor up, but I like them!

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Originally Posted by BlackWhite

Can I use that 1st one as my avatar and in a few RPs, along with the Volknor with Flint's colors? Thanx in advance :D

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You can use both for anything you want....

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Originally Posted by Muffin™

MUCH MUCH MUCH BETTER.

And, oh yea, I meant the right shoe from my right.

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so, it's his left shoe from his PoV?

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@Muffin: I've been remaking the "Dark Red", but I haven't finished it...(My brother wants to play with my laptop while I'm doing it)

And this is a Charizard with Charmeleon's colours!

Its OK in the way of recolors. The color scheme is a bit generic though. I would have adored to see a SkyBlue and a Yellow color scheme, but we can't have everything.

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Originally Posted by TehBazzard2

Its OK in the way of recolors. The color scheme is a bit generic though. I would have adored to see a SkyBlue and a Yellow color scheme, but we can't have everything.

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Well, I made it matched Charmeleon's colors because I don't like how Charmander & Charizard have the same colors meanwhile Charmeleon's colors are different

EDIT: Here is the "Dark Red"! Though he's not as dark as he used to.... Is he better? Same? Or worse?

Very good!