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    "In any case, I need you out of the room. All of you."

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    "W-where do I go?"
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    "Dining room, just like the rest."

    F-III perched on the roof, gazing away from the sunset. I'm free. Today, I'm released from my horrid, awful duty, to be an individual once again. She sighed. "Once I learn my name, that is."

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    Clarissa jumped up and ran to the dining room, stopping and giving another high-pitched shriek upon seeing Gracie.
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    "Good." Gracie flashed another dark grin. "Welcome to Hell."

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    She screamed even louder and ran away, down a hall, passing by several rooms and nearly crashing into the wall at the end of it.
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    Gracie followed behind her, placing a hand on Clarissa's shoulder upon getting there. "Relax, kid. I'm not gonna hurt you, yet."

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    In her terror, Clarissa shocked Gracie, not consciously on purpose. It wasn't nearly enough to hurt her, giving about the feeling of a light static shock. She started crying from how scared she was.
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    "Kid, I-I was just messing with you..." Gracie backed up from Clarissa. "S-sorry."

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    Her sobbing gradually subsided and she stared up at Gracie. "Y-you're n-not evil?"
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    "It depends on how evil is defined. It's not so black-and-white, you know."

    OOC: I'm afraid I have some bad news.
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    "H-huh? Colors aren't evil..." Clarissa replied, not understanding the phrase.

    OOC: Oh, no. And what would that be?
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    OOC: Scratch that, I just have news. Okay, so I was thinking about why our characters feel so tasteless, and then it hit me; They're all too upbeat.
    Also, I've got some killer detail to reconcile into the story once the confrontation with the Project begins.

    "It's a phrase!" Gracie spat. "It's not literal."

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    "I don't get it..."
    Scorpion was looking around the corner at them from the kitchen, curious as to what was going on after what had happened.

    OOC: Good point. Max isn't happy at all, ever, but there hasn't been anywhere so far where he would act, maybe I should start using him more. As for the rest of my characters, I'll do my best to make them not so upbeat.
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    OOC: What about internal conflict? I know I've said this before, but one must go from Point A to Point B, to fight not just material foes along the way, but to fight emotions, to strengthen their resolve gradually.
    Also, remember motives.
    Ha, I'm one to talk, but... Hmm...?

    "Ah, forget it." Gracie turned away and headed back down the hall, her wings dragging against the walls. "Infernal corridor..." She muttered to herself.

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