While everyone's been arguing about a new SU, here's one of my own.
Pokemon A: Misdreavus
Appearance before merge: N/A - No shadow-human form
Appearance after merge: She is a little less than half of her human size, approximately two feet tall. However, she is able to float and often does so that is appears that she is about the height of those around her. She has a human head with brown hair which is in wavy, pink-tipped clumps and that she can control somewhat. She also has arms, but there is nothing under her 'dress.' She can grip things with the dress and also with her arms. Her eyes have red irises and she has Misdreavus' pink pearl-like necklace. She is able to become fully invisible, but only when in shadows, and during this can occasionally make herself decompose to pass through things. Her skin is peeling and missing in various places, making her look quite scary.
Personality: Karey acts more like a Misdreavus than a human (see history). If she tries to say something long and/or complicated, she will often go off into saying or mumbling indistinct Misdreavus noises. She is very mischievous, loving to play games, and jokes a lot as well as plays tricks and occasionally will attempt to confuse people with riddles that don't make sense. She's very easygoing, not taking things seriously and smiling nearly all the time.
History: For an experiment with merging ghost type pokemon, Karey was killed during her merging, and it worked. However, the Misdreavus DNA was unable to fully sustain her remaining dead body functions after the merge, meaning that her mind is mainly Misdreavus. This causes her memory of being human to be very small, so she remembers her first name, and she can also recall a few small events in her life if she concentrates.
Flaw A: She will sometimes give a loud and short scream on impulse, usually trying to startle someone, which easily draws attention to her and those around her.
Other: I am dubiously utilizing the fact that ghosts are dead. Yay. 8|
@xelda57; I find your lack of Flaws disturbing.
I don't accept either. What is wrong has been stated.
Xelda57, I will accept on the condition that she screams at the least opportune times. Also, make her a wimp. :P
When it's inconvenient.
Wow, this is, like, the third or fourth ghost (not to be confused with Ghost-type) Merge. Lolwut.
We actually only have two in this RP, since Nel isn't dead.
Okay, everyone! Tomorrow, every SU will be unaccepted so I can review them. Like completely new SUs, I will point out any problems that I might not have seen at first, and ask you to fix them. Understood?
Last edited by Arcturus; 24th January 2013 at 07:42 PM.
You mean they're not allowed to be active in the RP until you've second-time accepted them, or you're just going to point things out so we can edit them while they continue to be active?
Also, if you want me to change something I made on the first page, could you do me a favor and quote the SU, please?
Both, and yes.
Yes, that's right.