Thread: Split Ends

:P Explains a lot. Thanks. By the by, Leavanny warned me of the fast pace here.

My Character- Rather important to me.

Name: Electricity (real name unknown, but is extremely long)
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Pokemon A: Eevee
Pokemon B: Elekid
Appearance before merge: //
Appearance after merge: Her hair has turned cream-colored, and her eyes brown. She has Eevee's neck fur and tail, the tip of it being an Elekid's plug. She also now wears a brown jumpsuit, with little bits of fur sticking out. She also has a scar from the DNA injection site on her leg. Her ears are that of Eevee's, and she has Elekid's black markings.
Personality: Tries to be the helper for everyone. Very cautious of enemies to herself and other Merges. Ever since her Merge, she's been having mental breakdowns, even more so when bullied. She still has her flawed moments at times, and she even acts like a wild Eevee if scared enough. She is saddened whenever a fellow Merge dies, especially if that Merge has shown her some respect. She has always had this odd fear of thorns, it may run in her family.
Flaw A: She has the incapability of having more than two abilities. As such, she has the abilities Static and Anticipation.
Flaw B: Her ability to produce strong electrical charges can make her pass out if a charge is too powerful.
Other: Dubious Utility, might evolve into Espeon.

So short...
Too human in appearance.
Personality is way too short.

Sorry, but nope.

Edited; Removed Personality and added some more appearance.

No. No. No.
A small personality gives the RPer more control over their character, making said character act more like their owner. A large personality forces the RPer to get in character, to examine the situation from the character's perspective, so that the character acts like they're supposed to. I still can't accept this.

...

Well, I guess I'll tell Leavanny she was right about you. Pickier than a farmer about crops.

No, I'm not. I'm trying to make things believable. We had way too much trouble with that crap in the original THP. Admittedly, I was usually the guilty one then...

@Espeon of Chaos; Very few GMs would approve of that character. There's nothing to them at all. No idea on how they will act or anything. I have a character who is relatively emotionless yet I have way more personality than that. Look at our SUs as an example for how yours should look

Heh, that's weird.

Added a LOT of crap to her personality.

Originally Posted by Espeon of Chaos

Heh, that's weird.

Added a LOT of crap to her personality.

There's still a lot missing. What annoys her, makes her sad etc. that tells practically nothing

That's gonna be revealed in the RP, my good madam.

No. It still isn't enough. I still don't accept.

Be specific, and please don't be concise. The more information in a sentence (i.e. Penny the funky Walrein Merge is blissful and ignorant in most situations, but gets outraged when someone pokes fun at her lower half.)

Elekid don't even have plug tails.

@Espeon of Chaos; That should be included in the SU. Also her appearance should include more of elekid. The only thing you have is the plug tail

I forgot the black lightning marks! Not on my best foot right now. In fact, I reek!

Also, don't make her annoyingly perfect, I've already uploaded a picture in my gallery showing what Lilith does to characters like those...

She isn't going to be perfect, and uh, Arcturus, we need to talk via PM system.