Done.
Done.

@Leavanny Duo; What are her pet peeves and what gets to her. All you're telling us is that she's brave and kind and gives ideas. What makes her happy, sad?
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@Leavanny Duo; still need more. I don't see what's unique about that personality
FIXED IT!!!!!!!!!! Anymore, and I might explode!

Edited Ozias's SU.
You had to. He's Merged now.
Just a heads up, I have night school Monday-Thursday from 6:30-9:00pm EST. So I'll be gone for a bit,but not right now.
“Death is not a hunter unbeknownst to its prey, one is always aware that it lies in wait. Though life is merely a journey to the grave, it must not be undertaken without hope. Only then will a traveler’s story live on, treasured by those who bid him farewell."
Oh okay.
She's merged with 6 grass type Pokemon,but can't use any grass type moves.... Does that even make sense? .-.
“Death is not a hunter unbeknownst to its prey, one is always aware that it lies in wait. Though life is merely a journey to the grave, it must not be undertaken without hope. Only then will a traveler’s story live on, treasured by those who bid him farewell."
It makes sense with As-II around. Only with another Grass-type Merge around.
Only with a grass type merge around? Explain how that remotely makes any sense. I'd really like to know :/
“Death is not a hunter unbeknownst to its prey, one is always aware that it lies in wait. Though life is merely a journey to the grave, it must not be undertaken without hope. Only then will a traveler’s story live on, treasured by those who bid him farewell."
Makes sense because she has a lot of Grass-type moves, and so much her moves are locked until another Grass-type Merge is nearby.
That defies even the logic of the rp if I'm not mistaken. The merge Is capable of using the moves of the Pokemon he/she was combined with,and if all the experiments were a sucess(evident by theintro to the rp) then there shouldn't be anything stopping said merge from using they're moves. They do not resonate with eachother. The flaws are mostly supposed to be traits from the Pokemon no doubt,and with all of them being grass type Pokemon who are capable of using grass type moves There is no way,what you stated in flaw A could even be possible seeing as how even you failed to explain it.
Bear in mind that I'm not criticizing you personally im simply pointing out what doesn't make sense in your submission,and wish for it it to make sense.
Rant powers ftw..
“Death is not a hunter unbeknownst to its prey, one is always aware that it lies in wait. Though life is merely a journey to the grave, it must not be undertaken without hope. Only then will a traveler’s story live on, treasured by those who bid him farewell."
All I see is offense.
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