Thread: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Justice/Corruption OCC

Sorry, but I'm confused.
I thought everybody is staying together, not splitting up. And don't you think the pace of the storyline is a bit fast?

I mean, c'mon, there's only about thirty-something pages to the rp and we already have like 3 pillars? That sounds kind of crazy to me.

In roleplaying, I don't think there should be any rush or hurry, because it makes the flow of the story seem cluttered and confusing. I know that I don't have any rp's of my own here, but trust me, I speak from experience. On another forum I have my own rp. The page count is about 150-200 (I started it sometime around December last year) and We've only completed one dungeon.

That's just me, but it's constructive criticism and not an order. Meaning, you don't have to listen to me. C:
I'm sorry if I sound like a jerk. I just want everyone to have as much fun as possible in the rp.

Well, there's been lots of drama-drama going on with a messy love triangle (Pyro, Ayumi, Splotch), and we had two Pillars before we even set out due to some unbelievably lucky (or unlucky) events that pretty much condemned Splotch to die. Pyro (after making a deal with Arceus) wanted to sacrifice himself, but a Latios stopped him, saying that he wanted to die instead.

There was a capture by the Corruption after those events that Gray, Aenesaigo, and Lightning barely escaped, and as of now lots of people are angry from previously mentioned drama. Everyone was Warp Seeded to a mountain (except Gray, Aenesaigo, and Lightning) during the attack, and that's where they are now.

Also, we somehow ended up with a Baby Latios in tow because the aformentioned Adult Latios that was supposed to take Splotch/Pyro's place in Arceus' deal died. And Splotch is about dead anyway. (THANKS FOR THAT, YOU STUPID MAGICAL HORSE!)

Wow, reading over that I'm surprised I didn't confuse myself again.

But a slower pace would be nice, I agree. Whenever I try to get caught up from the morning I always feel like I'm being pelted with bricks. :p

Originally Posted by Little Dragoness

Also, we somehow ended up with a Baby Latios in tow because the aformentioned Adult Latios that was supposed to take Splotch/Pyro's place in Arceus' deal died. And Splotch is about dead anyway. (THANKS FOR THAT, YOU STUPID MAGICAL HORSE!)

Wow, reading over that I'm surprised I didn't confuse myself again.

But a slower pace would be nice, I agree. Whenever I try to get caught up from the morning I always feel like I'm being pelted with bricks. :p

Stupid Magical horses are the steeds of Chuck Norris.
Forget what I just said. XD

Also; I know right! :c
I can barely keep up 75% of the time! >_<

And thanks so much for the summary! :D

XD Any time! So Chuck Norris' steed is a Horse deity that can't keep a promise? Not so much a "trusty steed", is it?

...I apologise for the bad pun. :p

Bad puns are win. XD

Oh yeah, is it me or does it seem like people have been kinda inactive in the rp today? It makes me feel impatient sometimes.
I bet people were probably just busy doing fun stuff! :D
That reminds me, today I finally got a strap, pick, and a tuner for my bass guitar. I feel so proud. :p

A good amount of people are pretty inactive.

Also, I don't know what I'm going to do. I talk to the GM, and so far, he is okay with me leaving.

You're leaving? D:

I mean, leaving the group. I'll be back doin my own thing.

Meaning, temporarily in the rp?

I think Ayumi's just gonna have a little solo adventure. You play bass Venomoth? That's awesome!

Yeah Ayumi is having a solo adventure like Lighting and she'll meet us again and you play bass cool, I play electric, hope you continue playing bass.

Okay. I hate to be a Grammar/spelling Nazi and all, but for shaymin's sake, it's Lightning, NOT Lighting. Lightning is not a lamp, he's a Zangoose. And dajman and Ino Chan, could you please try to spell things better and not use run-on sentences. I'm sorry for being a hypocrite, I'm just sensitive to stuff like this, and it's MUCH easier to read neat posts.

Now that I'm done with my little strict rant, feel free to throw rocks and twigs at me.

XD I'm sad to say I only noticed the misspelling once. I suppose my mind went into auto-spellcheck mode after a while.

I'll try to spell better. Also, most of my sentences are not really run ons.

For those of you who are wondering, I'm not gonna kill off splotch,yet, I'm thinking I might kill him off in the final battle but it's just a thought really, not sure if I'm going to yet.