Sorry, but I'm confused.
I thought everybody is staying together, not splitting up. And don't you think the pace of the storyline is a bit fast?
I mean, c'mon, there's only about thirty-something pages to the rp and we already have like 3 pillars? That sounds kind of crazy to me.
In roleplaying, I don't think there should be any rush or hurry, because it makes the flow of the story seem cluttered and confusing. I know that I don't have any rp's of my own here, but trust me, I speak from experience. On another forum I have my own rp. The page count is about 150-200 (I started it sometime around December last year) and We've only completed one dungeon.
That's just me, but it's constructive criticism and not an order. Meaning, you don't have to listen to me. C:
I'm sorry if I sound like a jerk. I just want everyone to have as much fun as possible in the rp.