Sorry, but that is pretty short. I'd imagine that you should take a look at some of Polkadot Jolteon or Zant's SUs.
Personality is really short.
Appearance after is kinda... Well, presumptuous.
Flaw isn't good enough.
I believe I can help with that.
Try expanding on what you have already for personality, and then moving this:
Appearance, I can't really help with... Try a little more description perhaps?
As for the Flaw, try to actually link it in with Lilligant. For example, maybe she can't use Grass attacks unless she is in sunlight? Or make it a bit of an oxymoron, overloaded with energy after prolonged exposure to sunlight and has another adverse effect, a bit Solar Power-ish?
@Arcturus; Just did some edits to Ozias' personality, now he has a new brain.
Last edited by Polkadot Jolteon; 7th September 2012 at 04:55 PM.
Okay, then. Lemme know when the next's up.