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    Default Re: The Half Project: Scattered Shards

    Sorry, but that is pretty short. I'd imagine that you should take a look at some of Polkadot Jolteon or Zant's SUs.
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    Personality is really short.
    Appearance after is kinda... Well, presumptuous.
    Flaw isn't good enough.

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    Rawr! I iz da Kwaken! Polkadot Jolteon's Avatar
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    Default Re: The Half Project: Scattered Shards

    I believe I can help with that.

    Try expanding on what you have already for personality, and then moving this:
    Quote Originally Posted by Leavanny View Post
    She was a good friend to all, and still is.
    into it.

    Appearance, I can't really help with... Try a little more description perhaps?

    As for the Flaw, try to actually link it in with Lilligant. For example, maybe she can't use Grass attacks unless she is in sunlight? Or make it a bit of an oxymoron, overloaded with energy after prolonged exposure to sunlight and has another adverse effect, a bit Solar Power-ish?
    @Arcturus; Just did some edits to Ozias' personality, now he has a new brain.
    Last edited by Polkadot Jolteon; 7th September 2012 at 04:55 PM.

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    Default Re: The Half Project: Scattered Shards

    Okay, then.

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    Default Re: The Half Project: Scattered Shards

    Fixed.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Leavanny View Post
    Fixed.
    My sincere apologies, but we're kinda wrapping this RP up right now...

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    Default Re: The Half Project: Scattered Shards

    Okay, then. Lemme know when the next's up.

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    Default Re: The Half Project: Scattered Shards

    This looks really exciting; can I still sign up, @Procyon; ?
    Links to stuff.
    I also might start a webcomic soon, but that'll be linked to when it happens.

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    Quote Originally Posted by xelda57 View Post
    This looks really exciting; can I still sign up, @Procyon; ?
    Find The Half Project: The Divided Line since Scattered Shards ended.

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