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    Quote Originally Posted by Scourge of Nemo View Post
    Zombie, I have no idea how you did it, but you just managed to write a disturbing sex scene without including any bad metaphors and/or rape.
    I'm just that amazing, what do I win?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zombie Muse View Post
    I'm just that amazing, what do I win?
    You win a year's supply of OHGODWHY
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zombie Muse View Post

    Just be like, 'emotions were growing in the room as they both sweated in heat.(lol geddit?) The sexual tension in the room inundated the minds of the two sensual beings.' then like later on describe a picture frame, or a vase bumping, or hitting the wall in a rhythmic pattern. Like, describe the scene by describing the scene around it, so you can stay out of the clear of getting in trouble, or having members who can't take 'insert phallus in orifice here.' and junk.


    EDIT: Oh also, Catcher in the Rye wasn't entertaining, it was disturbing.

    Is it weird that I'm taking notes on this for my english class? We had to take notes from a website that would help our writing....ANYWAY, the Catcher in the Rye was a masterpiece.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Alaskapigeon View Post
    Is it weird that I'm taking notes on this for my english class? We had to take notes from a website that would help our writing....ANYWAY, the Catcher in the Rye was a masterpiece.
    It's a story about a hipster going through puberty. I found some connection, but his talk of "phonies" alienated me from the actual plot.

    I kind of want to do a Catcher in the Rye parody with pokemon now =P

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alaskapigeon View Post
    Is it weird that I'm taking notes on this for my english class? We had to take notes from a website that would help our writing....ANYWAY, the Catcher in the Rye was a masterpiece.
    Just go take notes on Galleon's grades on Pe2K. Not even joking.


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    Thanks to Nemo, I want to write a Shuckleberry Finn crossover. I just need to track down the original book to redo, similar to Pride and Prejudice and Zombies.
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    Quote Originally Posted by evanfardreamer View Post
    Thanks to Nemo, I want to write a Shuckleberry Finn crossover. I just need to track down the original book to redo, similar to Pride and Prejudice and Zombies.
    ...Can I please grade that? Also, have fun reading the book. It drove me to madness as a fifth grader.
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    Madness?

    THIS IS SINNOH

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    It's five days old, you can wait two or three months like everybody else >:'P



    Quote Originally Posted by evanfardreamer View Post
    Pride and Prejudice and Zombies.

    One of the best books I have ever read, which is rare, because I hate reading.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zombie Muse View Post
    It's five days old, you can wait two or three months like everybody else >:'P
    Lol'd, so true. That's why I haven't bothered posting mine here yet xD
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    After our recent conversation in this thread, I was wondering EXACTLY how explicit we're aloud to get, if we put a warning.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Alaskapigeon View Post
    After our recent conversation in this thread, I was wondering EXACTLY how explicit we're aloud to get, if we put a warning.
    You'll notice that "erotica" is not one of the Library genres. While we won't kill you for a sex scene, anything that could be defined as "graphic" will be frowned upon.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Scourge of Nemo View Post
    You'll notice that "erotica" is not one of the Library genres. While we won't kill you for a sex scene, anything that could be defined as "graphic" will be frowned upon.
    Yeeeeah. I'm keeping that in mind.
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    Left Behind has finally been graded :D *dances in rejoice* Now there is only July backlog left :)

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