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    Can I get some feedback on my story The Magikarp That Tweeted? I'm a bit nervous since it's not in a traditional format. ^^
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    Quote Originally Posted by Alaskapigeon View Post
    Can I get some feedback on my story The Magikarp That Tweeted? I'm a bit nervous since it's not in a traditional format. ^^
    Enjoyed it thoroughly. Interesting integration of pop culture. The story was basic, but what can you expect from an Easiest story? No doubt in my mind that you will get it. I liked the ending with the passing on of the lap top to his loved one. I wonder how many followers he had? =P

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    Quote Originally Posted by Alaskapigeon View Post
    Can I get some feedback on my story The Magikarp That Tweeted? I'm a bit nervous since it's not in a traditional format. ^^
    I enjoyed it as well. It's good to see people experiment with the formula.
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    I would like some feedback/proofreading on my story. Its not posted yet, so IM/PM me if you can help. Its pretty long, just as a heads up for those people who don't like reading things past Hard category level.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bumblebee View Post
    I would like some feedback/proofreading on my story. Its not posted yet, so IM/PM me if you can help. Its pretty long, just as a heads up for those people who don't like reading things past Hard category level.
    I WONDER WHAT IT'S FOR!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zombie Muse View Post
    I WONDER WHAT IT'S FOR!
    Besides the one you already know, I added a Mon to it.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bumblebee View Post
    Besides the one you already know, I added a Mon to it.
    Okay Mr. M. Night Shyamalan, what's the twist?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zombie Muse View Post
    Okay Mr. M. Night Shyamalan, what's the twist?
    Don't call him M. Night Shyamalan! That's below the belt. God forbid anybody on the URPG craps out The Happening.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Alaskapigeon View Post
    Don't call him M. Night Shyamalan! That's below the belt. God forbid anybody on the URPG craps out The Happening.
    I LOVED THAT MOVIE. I think you mean, God forbid someone craps out 'Lady in the Water'.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zombie Muse View Post
    I LOVED THAT MOVIE. I think you mean, God forbid someone craps out 'Lady in the Water'.
    That movie sucked so bad, but it did make me lol
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    Quote Originally Posted by Bumblebee View Post
    That movie sucked so bad, but it did make me lol
    That too. Also, I wish everybody thought I was a dude again. '^^ Now people won't leave me alone on AIM.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Alaskapigeon View Post
    That too. Also, I wish everybody thought I was a dude again. '^^ Now people won't leave me alone on AIM.
    Well, you're an active violation of Rule 16. Not really a surprise. :D
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    Quote Originally Posted by Alaskapigeon View Post
    That too. Also, I wish everybody thought I was a dude again. '^^ Now people won't leave me alone on AIM.
    Just be all grumpy and semi-masculine. Works for me.

    And @Lady In the Water: Mmmm, pedophilia.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zombie Muse View Post
    Okay Mr. M. Night Shyamalan, what's the twist?
    Don't mention his name! Not after he ruined The Last Airbender.
    Last edited by Neonsands; 12th August 2010 at 06:34 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Neonsands View Post
    Don't mention his name! Not after he ruined The Last Airbender.
    This.
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