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    Quote Originally Posted by Senzura View Post
    Would I get b&hammer if I made a boondocks crossover story?
    I would actually love to read that. I have had some ridiculous plots that have popped into my head. No idea how to write a story about them, but if any talented writers need a plot I am certainly more capable of doing that then shoveling them out as stories.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zombie Muse View Post
    Wow I'm flattered, but too be honest I don't think it was library worthy. I could've elaborated more on the plot, fixed up some details, and some grammar issues, but I didn't have time for it; however I got the Pokemon and I thought it was good enough for people to enjoy so I left it as is. So thanks!
    I thought your story was a brilliant form of creepiness, like The Raven.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Alaskapigeon View Post
    I thought your story was a brilliant form of creepiness, like The Raven.
    Haha, thanks. I do love me some good Poe. But yea, read it again, but think Animal Farm, or politics. It gets a little... reflective, and thanks again for the complements ^^''

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zombie Muse View Post
    Haha, thanks. I do love me some good Poe. But yea, read it again, but think Animal Farm, or politics. It gets a little... reflective, and thanks again for the complements ^^''
    That's true...I love Animal Farm. I gotta read me some 1984, but I have to get through my summer reading first. Plus, the URPG keeps me busy.
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    Can anyone think of an aggressive Pokemon that lives in the desert? I really need one.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Senzura View Post
    Would I get b&hammer if I made a boondocks crossover story?
    You can make any crossover you want, but make sure your story has a suitable rating for the content.

    @ Alakapigeon: Eww, 1984. I liked Animal Farm, but 1984 was just not my cup of tea. The end felt like a slap to the face.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Xeniaph View Post
    Can anyone think of an aggressive Pokemon that lives in the desert? I really need one.
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    Trapinch and Cacnea could be pretty aggressive. Hell, you could probably do Murkrow, Spearow, or even a Pidgey, since they live just about everywhere.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Phantom Kat View Post
    You can make any crossover you want, but make sure your story has a suitable rating for the content.

    @ Alakapigeon: Eww, 1984. I liked Animal Farm, but 1984 was just not my cup of tea. The end felt like a slap to the face.

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    Personally, I adore 1984. Haven't read Animal Farm yet, though.

    I'd say Sandslash or the Cacnea line, myself. Meguroko?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Xeniaph View Post
    Can anyone think of an aggressive Pokemon that lives in the desert? I really need one.
    Hippopotas/Hippowdon =P

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    Quote Originally Posted by Neonsands View Post
    Hippopotas/Hippowdon =P
    QFT. This article explains how vicious real hippos are. If you're looking for realism, go for that.

    Cacturne could provide for a really great humanoid antagonist if you're going for a creepy vibe. I kind of imagine Cacturne to be more like the Batman villain Scarecrow. Probably because it's part Dark-type, it's supposed to be nocturnal, and it's based on a scarecrow. Actually, I may work that into one of my stories if I can ever finish this first one...

    Sandslash tend to be more defensive, so I can't imagine them attacking without provocation. But then again, they just look nasty. If one's got a beef with you and attacks, it wouldn't be totally unexpected.

    Houndoom, much like the Dobermanns they are based upon, are often thought to be highly aggressive, but are actually really intelligent and will only attack if they precieve you as a threat to themselves, their young or their turf. So if you're planning on having your character unwittingly tespassing, there's your 'mon, Xeniaph.

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    I think I'm caught between the Cacnea line or the Hippopotas line. Thanks, everyone!
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    For the current 1984/Animal Farm discussion:

    Both are exceptional stories, and both deserve to be read. As for the comment on 1984's ending, well, my rebuttal will be in a spoiler for obvious reasons :P




    Also, as per the crossover talk... I'm okay with it as long as just referencing a character from the source material isn't just by name, but you also provide a description as well.

    Also, per the Cacturne talk... look at what I found on deviant art!
    http://edli-dark.deviantart.com/art/Ricture-the-Cacturne-107420023
    Yeah. Awesome :P

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    Speaking of Cacturne pictures, I think this one is extremely adorable! http://media.photobucket.com/image/Cacturne/kiera2b/cacturne.jpg
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