Thread: URPG Stories Chat and Feedback

Originally Posted by Joshy

You know, you kind of remind of Mr. Resetti :3

So...if we annoy Galleon enough, his brother will appear and say we're giving him health problems? >.>

Originally Posted by Akinai

So...if we annoy Galleon enough, his brother will appear and say we're giving him health problems? >.>

Don Galleon. Now that would be a sight to see.

Left Behind: Final Part

*collapses from exhaustion*
I have finised Left Behind, and the 76,116 character Merciless final part!
I would really like some feedback on this series. So if you have read it and have any feedback, please post her or PM me!
*goes off to sleep and rest aching fingers*

Updated my story in progress, now up to 18k.

I'm going to try organizing the list soon, after I get this grade done, but I'm looking for some opinion on a subject matter:

Should I include length/intended capture along with date of submitting?

The reason why I hesitate is because I created the list so that those who have been waiting the longest can benefit. I feel that by putting down the length/intended capture will affirm that longer stories and/or easier captures affect why a grader chooses which stories to grade. Rather than grade those that have waited longer, graders will grade a story because it is a Simple story and they don't want to take the time to grade a Complex story. Since the list provides a link to the story itself, I don't think that length/intended capture is necessary.

As you might have noticed already, I'm big on the "first come, first serve" mentality. Blame it on all the law classes I'm taking in college.

Opinion noted, but constructive criticism will be considered.

Originally Posted by sorocoroto

I'm going to try organizing the list soon, after I get this grade done, but I'm looking for some opinion on a subject matter:

Should I include length/intended capture along with date of submitting?

The reason why I hesitate is because I created the list so that those who have been waiting the longest can benefit. I feel that by putting down the length/intended capture will affirm that longer stories and/or easier captures affect why a grader chooses which stories to grade. Rather than grade those that have waited longer, graders will grade a story because it is a Simple story and they don't want to take the time to grade a Complex story. Since the list provides a link to the story itself, I don't think that length/intended capture is necessary.

As you might have noticed already, I'm big on the "first come, first serve" mentality. Blame it on all the law classes I'm taking in college.

Opinion noted, but constructive criticism will be considered.

I definitely believe that you should leave out length and intended capture. Older stories should have priority over the new ones. Sure, some graders will go specifically by their own deciding factors of which story to pick. But, this just helps remind them that whatever they are grading isn't the oldest and maybe they can help out by grading one or two stories in the near future. Of course, I can also respect a new grader's lack of interest in grading an above Simple level story. Sometimes you just need to start out small.

The graders (like me) who care more about what they're grading than when it was posted can go through the stories and figure out which have the lengths they're aiming for. No need for you to do that much extra work.

Originally Posted by Xeniaph

Hey... Um, I really don't like nagging (just ask my mom), but does someone think they can grade my story? Because I'm kinda going insane, okay? AH-HAHAHA! HAHAHA! Haha. Hah. Heh. Anyway, yeah. Please grade it. Or I fear that I may go insane. And then die in anticipation. Pweeease? [juts out bottom lip, widens eyes]




*EDIT!*: I forgot the link to the story. Here: My story, "Tears: A Swablu Story"

From the first post in this thread:

And second, please give graders at least one week before you request a grade for your story in this thread, otherwise it'll get all cluttered 'n junk in here. Thanks.

Ah. Well. That's... okay, then. I guess I should delete the post...

Originally Posted by Xeniaph

Ah. Well. That's... okay, then. I guess I should delete the post...

Nah, 'cause then it'd look like Sorocoto was talking to an imaginary friend. It's just something to keep in mind for the future; we've got stories that have been waiting several weeks, but we keep track and will get to them all sooner or later. (Hopefully sooner :D)

OH. Er... Well. I guess I shouldn't have deleted it. Sorry, Sorocoroto. I guess you'll just have to look kinda crazy.

I have enough imaginary friends... I mean, yeah its ok...

Originally Posted by Xeniaph

OH. Er... Well. I guess I shouldn't have deleted it. Sorry, Sorocoroto. I guess you'll just have to look kinda crazy.

I think you're going to fit in quite well with the rest of us. Welcome to the stories board :D

Hmm. Thank you. And I hope so: you'll be seeing enough of me that it would be pretty bad if you all hated me.

I IS SO SORRY MY STORY ISN'T FINISHED YET! SHOULD BE UP THURSDAY!