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    Quote Originally Posted by Tortamorph View Post
    For all the graders here you have my utmost respect. I just finished writing my first story (for a Leafeon, a Complex pokémon, probably not the greatest idea) And it is atrociously long. I don't know how ya'll grade them as fast as you do.
    It's fine that you aim high! I'm on co-op, so that means I'm working. This also means I don't really have much to do between 9-5, lol. I'm glad to see more difficult pokemon attempted at.

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    Okay, its been a week or so, so I'll post it here (not that I'm impatient cause I'm so not xD) Click for any grader looking for a story to grade.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Tortamorph View Post
    For all the graders here you have my utmost respect. I just finished writing my first story (for a Leafeon, a Complex pokémon, probably not the greatest idea) And it is atrociously long. I don't know how ya'll grade them as fast as you do.
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    Anyone wanna grade? I'll love you forever...so far it has been up for 2 weeks...can't wait much longer =(

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    Snap!

    I posted this over a month ago on PE2K, almost a month ago here. It's a story deal and we've both been waiting quite a bit xD (especially since it took me forver to write the thing xD) so if anyone wants to grade it, that'd be awesome :3

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    Guyz?
    My story has been up for nearly about 3 weeks now, so could I pleeeaze get a grade?
    Link to story (Obviously)

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Golden Tyranitar View Post
    Guyz?
    My story has been up for nearly about 3 weeks now, so could I pleeeaze get a grade?
    Link to story (Obviously)
    Funny thing: After i finished my last grade, i was like, i'll do this guys cause i saw your was the oldest one that didn't say "not finished" or something like that, but then i was like all, I'm going to take a break and work on my own story.

    I'll lay a claim on it and grade it within 34 hours, why 34, don't know

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    Left Behind: Final Part

    I have asked several times before to have Part 4 graded but have been ignored, so I am asking again. It has been two/three weeks, so I'd like to have it claimed so know wheter to start work on my Merciless final chapter

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    Wanted to talk about something besides asking for grades.

    Funny thing i noticed in a lot of stories, including my own:

    A lot of people tend to describe their character's hair by running the character's hands through it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sorocoroto View Post
    Wanted to talk about something besides asking for grades.

    Funny thing i noticed in a lot of stories, including my own:

    A lot of people tend to describe their character's hair by running the character's hands through it.
    Uncreative writers are uncreative.

    Also, just wanted to tell people that there is no rule saying you need to describe your characters at the beginning of stories. Personaly I let the situations do the talking. By describing your character at the beginning in one big lump, it makes me think "tl;dr"

    Have some originality =P


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    Quote Originally Posted by AceTrainer14 View Post
    Left Behind: Final Part

    I have asked several times before to have Part 4 graded but have been ignored, so I am asking again. It has been two/three weeks, so I'd like to have it claimed so know wheter to start work on my Merciless final chapter
    You could start working on your story now while you're waiting fore a grade, then post it once your story's graded. Just a thought :'/

    Quote Originally Posted by sorocoroto View Post
    Wanted to talk about something besides asking for grades.

    Funny thing i noticed in a lot of stories, including my own:

    A lot of people tend to describe their character's hair by running the character's hands through it.

    Really? I've never done that, or even thought of that, but I lol'd when you said EVERYbody does that. I do sort of what Senzura said, but I describ a few things, then have the character do something that makes it clear of something of them, or at least I try.

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    I would start writing, but I need to know if Jericho is going to capture Tangela or not, as it would be needed as part of the story. Otherwise I'd have to rewrite the story or do another one involving a grass type.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AceTrainer14 View Post
    I would start writing, but I need to know if Jericho is going to capture Tangela or not, as it would be needed as part of the story. Otherwise I'd have to rewrite the story or do another one involving a grass type.
    ...Or have some balls, expect that you'll get it and go one and write. If you don't get it, don't pass it off and write another story, or say "oh well" and continue without getting it, edit the story and ask for a regrade, then when you finally get it post your second (or whatever) part of the story. You don't HAVE to rewrite the story, or (hopefully) to the extent of recreating a bran new plot because the first one was so horrible. Just have some confidence in yourself that if you can write a Miraculous story, you can write for a Tangela.

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    Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

    That is a fair point, but all of Jericho's Pokemon play a crucial part in the story. It would have to be a major rewrite to cut it out, and I would rather know that it is going to be there so I can further my story than have to change a lot of things because it isn't. But at the moment, I just want the story to be graded, than I can do my story.

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