Thread: URPG Stories Chat and Feedback

Originally Posted by Voltaire Magneton

btw, what are story deals?

Story deals are where a writer and someone else agree on a trade. The person gives the writer an agreed-upon mon for a mon written by the author that they normally wouldn't/didn't want to write for themselves. It's just like a regular trade except one person has to write first XD

Could I post story deals here? If yes:

who wants to make a deal for a Burmy? It is male and had its HP into Steel. I just want a Sewaddle for it. So, who wants it?

I just hope that I did my machop story correctly. I've been worrying that I made it too, er, mature (one character dies).

Originally Posted by SteamKnight

I just hope that I did my machop story correctly. I've been worrying that I made it too, er, mature (one character dies).

Haha, trust me, characters dying isn't too mature. *Queen of Grimdark right here.*

In terms of violence I don't think it's possible to get too mature. I think we'd really only cross the line at anything explicitly sexual, cuz minors and stuff.

Originally Posted by SteamKnight

I just hope that I did my machop story correctly. I've been worrying that I made it too, er, mature (one character dies).

I've written stories involving mass death. Long you don't describe the death(s) in graphic detail (quentin taratino) and like and you should be fine.

Originally Posted by AmericanTreeFrog

[I've written stories involving mass death. Long you don't describe the death(s) in graphic detail (quentin taratino) and like and you should be fine.

Sounds good to me. Any idea when the story will get graded?

Originally Posted by SteamKnight

Originally Posted by AmericanTreeFrog

[I've written stories involving mass death. Long you don't describe the death(s) in graphic detail (quentin taratino) and like and you should be fine.

Sounds good to me. Any idea when the story will get graded?

Honestly depends. The average story gets graded in a week or two. Anything over about 25k can take weeks.

Okay, well, that's fine by me. I'm good at waiting. Just wanted to have an idea.

Originally Posted by SteamKnight

Okay, well, that's fine by me. I'm good at waiting. Just wanted to have an idea.

Alright. If you end up waiting more than two - three weeks just drop me a message and I'll grade anything you have.

New Game

I'm not impatient, but could somebody grade my story? Thanks!

btw, if any of your stories had a like from me, it means i read it. usually i am lazy reading some of the stories.

General note to everybody:

Posting a link to your story and saying that it needs a grade isn't necessary. It clogs the chat and supplies redundant information to the graders. Just be patient, and a grader will get to it.

Just thought this should be said, and it's not geared to anybody in particular.

Originally Posted by Princess Crow

General note to everybody:

Posting a link to your story and saying that it needs a grade isn't necessary. It clogs the chat and supplies redundant information to the graders. Just be patient, and a grader will get to it.

Just thought this should be said, and it's not geared to anybody in particular.

please grade my story

http://www.pokemonelite2000.com/forum/showthread.php?t=82821

Anyone want to write me a Magnemite, Timburr, Elektrike, Buneary, Growlithe, or Psyduck. I can trade you good stuff from mart (like 50k worth) or maybe something from stats.

Originally Posted by Dinobot

Anyone want to write me a Magnemite, Timburr, Elektrike, Buneary, Growlithe, or Psyduck. I can trade you good stuff from mart (like 50k worth) or maybe something from stats.

I'll write you something for 50k worth of TMs on one of my pokes if that's allowed. When I have the mon you want I could trade you my mon for something crap (that comes out of the 50k if you buy it), and then I'll trade story mon for my mon with the EMs back.

Originally Posted by Nitro

Originally Posted by Dinobot

Anyone want to write me a Magnemite, Timburr, Elektrike, Buneary, Growlithe, or Psyduck. I can trade you good stuff from mart (like 50k worth) or maybe something from stats.

I'll write you something for 50k worth of TMs on one of my pokes if that's allowed. When I have the mon you want I could trade you my mon for something crap (that comes out of the 50k if you buy it), and then I'll trade story mon for my mon with the EMs back.

Sounds legit, I'll check if we can do this.