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    Double posting. For shame.

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    Harry asks for more on the Length section.

    Lotad is a Simple Pokémon and requires about 5-10K. You wrote 8054 Characters (with spaces) or 6564 (without spaces). This is long enough for Lotad by at least 1.5K. This is a really good attempt to get a good length and I couldn't ask for much more. At 6.5K you're comfortably within Lotad's range and no-one's going to criticise you for just making the target or stopping at the moment that you catch the Lotad. You could have had an even higher CC, however, if you had used more description.
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    Whoa whoa. Whips are only given out after months of slavery. *throws pencil and sack of notepaper at Princess Crow instead* GET TO WORK.

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    Thanks for the welcome! I'll try not to disappoint!

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    Given that we have an Introduction category in grading, would it be an idea to do a Conclusion one as well? Just a thought.

    Also a section on Characters might be quite good. I'm never quite sure where to put feedback on how good the characters were in a story and it'd be quite useful to have one.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BlazeMaster View Post
    Given that we have an Introduction category in grading, would it be an idea to do a Conclusion one as well? Just a thought.

    Also a section on Characters might be quite good. I'm never quite sure where to put feedback on how good the characters were in a story and it'd be quite useful to have one.
    Conclusion fits well into Battle, because usually that's the climax of a typical Pokémon story. Otherwise, you can just stick '/Climax' with Battle and write about the conclusion there, if you want.

    For characters, it's usually put into the Plot section -- character development and just characters in general. You can also make your own section called 'Characters', I guess.

    The above two suggestions are mainly just if you want to stick to the standard layout. Keep in mind that you can format a grade however you want -- you don't have to stick to the sections already outlined. Make your own if you need to -- it's not against the rules or anything.

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    Quote Originally Posted by BlazeMaster View Post
    Given that we have an Introduction category in grading, would it be an idea to do a Conclusion one as well? Just a thought.

    Also a section on Characters might be quite good. I'm never quite sure where to put feedback on how good the characters were in a story and it'd be quite useful to have one.
    I combine the Plot, Characters, and Intro section (and I guess Climax would be in there too). Basically, like Buoysel said, you can set the categories up however is easiest for you, as long as you still write a quality grade.
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    Quote Originally Posted by BlazeMaster View Post
    Given that we have an Introduction category in grading, would it be an idea to do a Conclusion one as well? Just a thought.

    Also a section on Characters might be quite good. I'm never quite sure where to put feedback on how good the characters were in a story and it'd be quite useful to have one.
    I personally have a Climax section at the end, where I talk about how the story ended, whether it was with a battle or not.

    Sometimes I have a Character section if there was more than one protagonist or if it seems character development was a major point in the story.

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    I always replace my "Battle" section with a "Climax" section, and then talk about the battles in "Description" if need be.
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    Remember to keep your logs up to date, Graderlings. ELSE YOU GET NO MONEY. MWAHAHA.

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    Who wants to do a story deal for me? It's pretty big so I'd offer something really good.
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    Also, don't forget to grade stuff on TPW guys, just saying ;[
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