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  1. 22nd March 2011, 11:18 PM #1966
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    Quote Originally Posted by Alaskapigeon View Post
    ZOMBIE. YOU'RE ALIVE.
    I KNOW! It's been a while, which reminds me. Do I still have it? Or did I loose it? Please read this... really short introduction to a new story and tell me what you think: Story of Domestics: The Terrible, the Perfect, and the Proud
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  2. 23rd March 2011, 02:49 AM #1967
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    *studies these hugh man specimens in their natural habitat*



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  3. 23rd March 2011, 05:41 AM #1968
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zombie Muse View Post
    I love you Mom
    She's mine! Back off!

    also Zoidberg you're fired
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    Quote Originally Posted by TheEvilDookie View Post
    Oh my god someone just grade this! e_e

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    Someone should grade this story.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Stinky View Post
    She's mine! Back off!

    also Zoidberg you're fired
    Why must everyone pick on the doctor? :(

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    Quote Originally Posted by Synthesis View Post
    Why must everyone pick on the doctor? :(

    Woop woop woop woop
    Because he's cool and I've owned him since I was 10. :P
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    Quote Originally Posted by Synthesis View Post
    Why must everyone pick on the doctor? :(

    Woop woop woop woop
    because his first name is 'someoneyourownsize'

    Geddit'?
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  8. 24th March 2011, 08:03 PM #1973
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    I need two or three story deals if anyone is interested.
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  9. 27th March 2011, 01:38 PM #1974
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    Yo errybody. Give me some feedback on this.

    My Story

    Thanks.
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  10. 29th March 2011, 12:04 AM #1975
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    Quote Originally Posted by Scourge of Nemo View Post
    http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/f396/running-through-daisies-93910/#post2658816

    First chapter done. Lookin' for some feedback. Not ready for grading for awhile, though. Second chapter'll be posted as soon as I finish it up.

    What I mainly want to know: How accessible is the prose? And does the pacing work? Also, is it... vaguely understandable? In addition to any general thoughts. XD
    derp

    Now chapter two is posted. Anyone up for telling me their impression of the characters, so far? Looks like I'm going for a buttload of captures, so it's time for SUPER EDITING.

    EDIT: also, first questions still stand
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    DOUBLE POSTIN' CAUSE I HAVE THE POWER

    I'll be out of town for the next few days. Taras is in charge. DON'T BREAK ANYTHING WITHOUT ME.
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  12. 11th April 2011, 11:47 PM #1977
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    Grade it

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  13. 15th April 2011, 11:41 PM #1978
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    So guys, I'm back, but now I'm leaving again. I'll be back next Monday. :< Taras is still in charge.
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    waitso gone for a week or two days?
    back
    TIME!
    FOR TEA!
    I am ref, ranger, grader, and story whore. Ask nicely, please.

    And if you happen to know some fine men named John and Hank Green,
    I recommend that you click here.
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    Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

    Quote Originally Posted by Tyranitex View Post
    waitso gone for a week or two days?
    A week
    You had a new dream, it was more like a nightmare.
    You were just a little kid, and they cut your hair,
    then they stuck you in machines, you came so close to dying.
    They should have listened, they thought that you were lying.
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