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    Quote Originally Posted by AceTrainer14 View Post
    http://myimmortalrehost.webs.com/

    Sorry to double post, but I think we need to say this to all apsiring authors.

    If your story looks anything like this, do not bother posting it here. This is the worst piece of fanfiction on the face of the planet.

    I think we can all appreciate a good laugh, so I think you'll all enjoy this (except graders, who'll probably combust at how terrible this is)
    I read up until the point where the announcer told me to leave if I didn't know Amy Lee. Too bad really, the opening was enthralling.

    What was that Half Life fanfiction that was completely awful? I think it was called Fullife Consequences or something. Quality literature.

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    I grade things for the URPG.

    New experimental grading system. Request a tier after I claim your story:
    Tier I / Basic: A quick verdict and some useful advice without much fuss.
    Tier II / Normal: More in-depth analysis.
    Tier III / Heavy: I WILL TEAR YOUR STORY TO SHREDS AND TAP-DANCE ON THE PIECES

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    There are sequels. They are even better. And have Youtube editions.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Turtwig's A-B-Cs View Post
    Judging from all these posts, I'll just skip looking at this one and do something else...
    No, Turtwig. You are the bad fan fic.

    And then Turtwig was a goff.
    "'ey, do ya want to play some poke', mon?"

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    Aha! A counter to you, Ace. This happens to be the worst fiction on the planet! The Eye of Argon Behold the fauceted scarlet emeralds! Note that this one was bad purely on accident and was published anyway. The author still has no idea that he did anything wrong. Let us aplever to this story!

    EDIT: Do not claim this format/idea as your own! For I have claimed it and will be writing a (slightly more grammatically correct) version of it that includes the hilarious spelling mistakes.

    EDITED NOTE: This story is best read aloud. Have fun!

    Credit to HikaruIzumi for the awesome avatar!

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    My Immortal is still worse. UR JUST A PREPZ!!11!
    I speak four languages, help me practice please
    Hablas conmigo en español, por favor
    Vous parlez avec moi en français, s'il vous plaît
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    Beware the Ekordian tribe for they shall smite you with gems that turn into jelly leeches that suck your blood and then explode leaving a blotchy mark that blotches things up.

    Credit to HikaruIzumi for the awesome avatar!

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    Guys, gotta say, there is fanfiction out there far worse than all of this. I'm just prohibited from posting it by BMG's terms of service.
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    It's...not the Amanda Show one is it? *shivers* PLEASE NEVER AGAIN
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    I was thinking more the Spongebob incest, but yes, the Amanda Show one was... bad.
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    Default Re: URPG Stories Chat & Feedback

    Quote Originally Posted by AceTrainer14 View Post
    http://myimmortalrehost.webs.com/

    Sorry to double post, but I think we need to say this to all apsiring authors.

    If your story looks anything like this, do not bother posting it here. This is the worst piece of fanfiction on the face of the planet.

    I think we can all appreciate a good laugh, so I think you'll all enjoy this (except graders, who'll probably combust at how terrible this is)
    I found it much more amusing and interesting than half of the stuff I've read here.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Alaskapigeon View Post
    It's...not the Amanda Show one is it? *shivers* PLEASE NEVER AGAIN
    Oh god... I just threw up in my mouth.
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    Everyone has had a crush on Hips. :B

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pidge View Post
    I found it much more amusing and interesting than half of the stuff I've read here.

    I would probably give My Immortal a Porygon-Z capture. No joke.
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    Someone is going to take you up on that, you know.
    I grade things for the URPG.

    New experimental grading system. Request a tier after I claim your story:
    Tier I / Basic: A quick verdict and some useful advice without much fuss.
    Tier II / Normal: More in-depth analysis.
    Tier III / Heavy: I WILL TEAR YOUR STORY TO SHREDS AND TAP-DANCE ON THE PIECES

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    They'll have to be talented enough to troll me successfully for at least 40k characters. I am confident it will never happen. REALLY WANTS IT TO HAPPEN. WOW THIS IS A SUBTLE COLOR.
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