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    Quote Originally Posted by Phantom Kat View Post
    Okay, that's fine with me. :3

    Hehe, I've seen stories wait for a very long time. Three months, six months. By that time, you forget what the story was about. xD

    It's normally the big stories that take longer to grade because they take a longer time to read. So if you have a 100K + story, prepare yourself for a wait. :P

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    Quote Originally Posted by Phantom Kat View Post
    Okay, that's fine with me. :3

    Hehe, I've seen stories wait for a very long time. Three months, six months. By that time, you forget what the story was about. xD

    It's normally the big stories that take longer to grade because they take a longer time to read. So if you have a 100K + story, prepare yourself for a wait. :P

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    Actually, if you've got a 100K+ story, it probably means you're one of the better writers, and therefore people will practically be fighting over the right to grade it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Elrond 2.0 View Post
    Actually, if you've got a 100K+ story, it probably means you're one of the better writers, and therefore people will practically be fighting over the right to grade it.

    /ego
    Well, Im not writing 100K for a bellsprout. Also, with the 1000 character limit on the PS3, That would be over 100 posts!

    I just stuck with around 13K-15K or so. Thats enough for a Bellsprout, who is a simple mon


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    Quote Originally Posted by Senzura View Post
    Well, Im not writing 100K for a bellsprout. Also, with the 1000 character limit on the PS3, That would be over 100 posts!

    I just stuck with around 13K-15K or so. Thats enough for a Bellsprout, who is a simple mon
    I was speaking in general terms. ;)

    When one of the better writers over on pe2k posts a story, *coughJesscough* it's generally REALLY long, and yet there are people clamoring for it. So yeah.

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    I'd like some thoughts on my first story, if you wouldn't mind.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Nerdlord View Post
    I'd like some thoughts on my first story, if you wouldn't mind.
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    On Ps3, so I only get 1000 characters to review it, but iI'll take it


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    Quote Originally Posted by Senzura View Post
    On Ps3, so I only get 1000 characters to review it, but iI'll take it
    Long stories are typically for really hard Pokemon. My Aerodactyl story was 55k and my Porygon story was 78k. When you're writing for hard Pokemon (or, in my case, really enjoying the story you're writing), you write really long stories.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Elrond 2.0 View Post
    I was speaking in general terms. ;)

    When one of the better writers over on pe2k posts a story, *coughJesscough* it's generally REALLY long, and yet there are people clamoring for it. So yeah.
    That's true, sometimes. I graded about four? chapters of Jess' story, and there were times where people would dibs a chapter. However, I remember quite a few times where Jess went two months without getting a chapter graded. *shrugs*

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    I am half tempted to try for Porygon-Z.

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    Okey shortand sweet review.

    The desciption of the story was the only bad part of it. You obviously wanted to make a picture perfect idea of what's going on to the audience, and thats good. But please, don't ramble on about a single thing. You spent a whoile paragraph describing his snoring. You can give as much description as you want, just try to keep the story flowing. You also seemed to abandon description near the end. try to keep consistant.

    As for the plot,It was great, but could be improved. An original plotline like yours isn't all you need for a good story. You also need substance. For example: At the end he made a plan to catch abra, and executed it perfectly. Thats what is called anticlimatic. The originality of the story gave room for many interesting things to happen, but you never took advantage of it. I mean, Paulo offerd to pokemon...and Adam took them.

    Only saw one or two grammatical errors, but quite a few typos. Be sure to run it through a spell check.

    shoot 100 characters

    imo Abra cap


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    From Sinnoh to Hoenn.

    Id love for a reveiw, by anyone really. Just want to know how my grammar and etc went. But I mostly want my detail criticized.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Coasting Wingull View Post
    From Sinnoh to Hoenn.

    Id love for a reveiw, by anyone really. Just want to know how my grammar and etc went. But I mostly want my detail criticized.
    I'd dib it, but I have two stories dibbed already. :/

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    Okay, take your time. I was just re- reading it and noticed some mistakes I missed. So im just correcting them.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Lord_Celebi View Post
    Long stories are typically for really hard Pokemon. My Aerodactyl story was 55k and my Porygon story was 78k. When you're writing for hard Pokemon (or, in my case, really enjoying the story you're writing), you write really long stories.
    I completely understand where you're coming from with that, haha. I just finished writing a 17K story for a Burmy. Makes me wonder what the Porygon-Z story's going to look like if I eventually get around to it...anyway, I'll post that up now, and edit this with a link when it's up.

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    Heya!
    I understand it hasn't been enough time since my piece to ask for it to be graded, but I was wondering if I could just get a few thoughts on it?

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