In regards to Heart of Hoenn a series I'm going back to, I'm looking for some comments, criticism and advice. Please post here or VM
So, yeah I've started on the second chapter now (don't read, there's some horrible typos and I want to edit it a lot becore continuing). I'm looking for advice on what direction I should take. It's a Hoenn fic, with a twist. May, the primary character, and Brandon are quite stuck-up, spoilt and bitchy, to a certain extent. I need advice on developing their perdonalities, reinforcing themes (humour and adventure) and I also need ideas for a major plot twist (obviously PM me those).