Chars with spaces: 3947
Chars without spaces : 3227
Target: Magikarp (needed 3k-5k)
The sea, once peaceful was now in a tempestuous state, boats were drifting away along the waves, without any chances to defend themselves. Only one boat, a transatlantic, that was a chromed silver tone, had a chance to withstand the tempest that had come.
S.S. Aqua II traveled through the seas, nothing could stop them, not even the huge tempest, and not even nature would stop them. Or so they thought.
In the middle of the tempest a pack of fish Pokémon swam, they were leaded by two sea serpents, those blue creatures had an angry expression, but deep down they were good of heart. In the night their cries were heard, they were searching for the lost ones in their packs. One of those was the son of the leader, a simple Magikarp, that couldn’t defend itself, yet he was alone, in a tempestuous sea.
In a boat, a young man there gazed in the sea. He had a blank expression, although it was dangerous to stay there, he didn’t mind. His family had already gone, ironically in the sea, where he could die, himself. He then saw something in the horizon, a band of fish Pokémon, leaded by two Gyarados. They could wreck the ship if the route wasn’t changed, and so he ran to warn the captain.
The Gyarados had spotted the ship, it was only a matter a time before they crossed ways, and those Pokémon had more than enough power to clear the way, the leaders muttered something to each other and started charging their attacks, before their mouths, white balls were forming and then all that was seen, was a big white flash, and as it was one of destiny’s sacrileges, the storm then stopped.
After the big white flash, the boy that was running felt a strong blow; he felt his body and his clothes getting heavy. And he sunk, but nearby, help was coming.
A small fish swam as fast as he could, he wasn’t very strong, but he managed to bring that boy to land, as the boy awoke he returned to the seas, to find his family and his pack.
A small pack of workers that managed to escape from the boat in time, pressed a button in a Pokéball and then a ghost that was similar to a witch, and was all purple appeared. “Magius” was it’s cry and after some orders materialized a large leaf and then launched it toward the Gyarados. Although the attack wasn’t very effective it managed to do one of the prohibited things on the sea, in fact the most dangerous one. Anger a Gyarados. A few seconds later a rampage had began.
The boy was from a safe distance of Gyarados, yet he could see his rampage, although the storm had finished, Gyarados was in an effort to start another one. The boy then looked around to see if there was any way to reach the mainland, but he found no way, and in the shallow area near the isle’s shore a Magikarp watched the rampage.
“Okay, need to do something” the boy said to himself. He then checked his pockets, only one small ball was there found, he pressed the button and then he saw who dwelled there. He grinned and continued to search; he found another ball, this time empty.
“Okay, time to roll. Raichu! Come out and play” he said, and from the Pokéball a mouse that had orange fur that was striped and in his tail there was a thunderbolt like ending. He positioned himself and prepared to take the commands.
“Thunderbolt” the boy said “just make sure it don’t hit the water” the attack hit Gyarados full force, he wasn’t knocked out though, he however stopped rampaging and focused his strengths on Raichu.
“Let’s make it quick, attack you were born with is now in order, don’t you think? Volt Tackle!” said the boy, Raichu then was covered in electricity and started dashing, he then tackled Gyarados, it hurt already shook it off and went away.
After putting Raichu back on it’s Pokéball he realized there was still a Pokémon there, he then crouched and said to Magikarp “And you pal? Want to stick around a little more?” he then took out the empty Pokéball and shortly after captured it. He then proceeded to find a way to get home.