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    I worked really hard on this story, please tell me what you think!

    one day a giant meteor fell from sky and killed everyone
    in light of tragedy giovanni take control and plunge the world into darkness
    luckily there was a super awesome trainer named derpmaster who was ready to take on giovanni an all his minions
    the first minion he had was a real sexy gardevoir - she was super duper hot and i wanted to sex her but i found out that it was really a dude because gardevoirs can be dudes too isnt that crazy

    so i basically left him alone and i didnt have to use my kung-fu (its called aikido, you wouldn't know about it) on him
    then derpmaster goes to the mall and buys a my chemical romance CD and a green day CD because both of those bands are amazing

    one really awesome day happened where derpmaster drank a shitload of mountain dew and went to a good charlotte concert with nickelback headlining
    chad kroger is an ugly douchebag but joel and benji are so cute so thats why i went <3; also draco malfoy from harry potter was there too and he was SOOO GOOD LOOKING omg
    then i went home and i realized that giovanni was my daddy and he saw me with my snakebites in and he got hella mad
    he hit me and i swore id have revenge on him
    the next day i find his persian and kick it in the stomach and it ran away i lol'd
    but then he was behind me and he took my prized possesion, my sweet phanpy
    phanpy is blue and has red stripes and he has the cutest trunk ever you just wanna hug him and squeeze him until he suffocates and dies but you dont do that because you love phanpy too much
    anyway phanpy was locked inside dads room and i busted down the door and rescued him
    giovanni was sleeping in his Tempur Collection(©) mattress and was lookin really comfy so when he heard me bust down his door he got PISSED
    now is where the story gets good giovanni beats derpmaster up and beats up phanpy too and jesse and james were there and they were crying for some reaso cause of a pikachu
    pikachu is ugly anyway why do they want pikachu
    after i gathered up all of the pieces of the star map and harnessed the power of castle grayskull i challenged giovanni to a final showdown ON THE FUCKING MOON
    luckily i had prepared for this battle years in advance
    giovanni was too busy tryin to figure out how to move around and he didnt realize that the enemys gate is down, LOL ENDER'S GAME REFERENCE
    so i beat him up real bad while hes strugllin and push him into the sun
    then we go back to earth in a deoxys-D ship and me and deoxys and phanpy all dreak tea and laugh & play together it was so awesome we listened to justin bieber too nvm my friend told me that guy is a fag with girl hair
    and then we all were praised for our heroic actions against the evil man and we got free ramen for life just like naruto
    oh and somewhere in there i was trying to catch porygon-z in giovannis alienware PC

    the ball shook once!
    twice!!
    CAPTURE!
    Last edited by august13th; 25th December 2010 at 07:59 PM.

    lindsey is my waifu

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    This is the most fantastic story I have ever read. The amount of detail and thought put into each word astounds me. This will probably go down as the greatest story of all time.

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    i agree, the whole story is very well organized and i enjoyed reading every letter, i hope you continue writing this

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    Quote Originally Posted by Feng View Post
    this story gets five stars if it doesnt pass im gonna bomb the grader's house
    yea yea nigga if it don pass we gon' fuck u up

    lindsey is my waifu

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    Default Re: the pokemon war (redy2graed)

    ⑨!

    This story fails to catch because it is written in MACHINE CODE, and in BASE 9. Never mind that it contains the formula for the creation of the Philosopher's Stone and the answer to life, the universe, and everything: IT IS IN BASE 9!

    YOU ⑨ IDIOT CIRNO! BAKA! ⑨! BAKA BAKA ⑨ BAKA ⑨ ⑨ BAKA ⑨...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Magikchicken View Post
    ⑨!

    This story fails to catch because it is written in MACHINE CODE, and in BASE 9. Never mind that it contains the formula for the creation of the Philosopher's Stone and the answer to life, the universe, and everything: IT IS IN BASE 9!

    YOU ⑨ IDIOT CIRNO! BAKA! ⑨! BAKA BAKA ⑨ BAKA ⑨ ⑨ BAKA ⑨...

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    no dood u stupid
    part 1 of the story is in base 2 and part 2 is in base 16

    lindsey is my waifu

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    Default Re: the pokemon war (redy2graed)

    i liked how u kiked de cat and you lots of loved it and de justi beibur is a fag caus hes so gay amd stoopid

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    Default Re: the pokemon war (redy2graed)

    Nevermind

    we retract our statements

    Me and pidge must protect our PERM record.
    Last edited by Feng; 24th December 2010 at 08:42 PM.




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    Default Re: the pokemon war (redy2graed)

    Sorry to be the herp-a-derp party pooper, but this story could never be considered for a Porygon-Z.

    I don't know if you did this on purpose or not (judging from your other posts here, yeah, you did), but either way, it'd be best to read the stickies at the top of this board before attempting another capture.
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    Default Re: the pokemon war (redy2graed) (WWC)

    alright I cannot express me and pidges love in public

    so we will express it in our VOTES TO U




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    I don't know who Feng is and any affiliation you believe I have with him is slander of the most devious nature. Good day.

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    Eh, I guess I'm just gonna have to get technical. I've Graded the story and am sending a copy to A13 as the rules of the WWC state.
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    Default Re: the pokemon war (redy2graed) (WWC)

    Quote Originally Posted by Pidge View Post
    I don't know who Feng is and any affiliation you believe I have with him is slander of the most devious nature. Good day.
    how devious of you to say




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    Quote Originally Posted by -Pichu Boy- View Post
    Sorry to be the herp-a-derp party pooper, but this story could never be considered for a Porygon-Z.

    I don't know if you did this on purpose or not (judging from your other posts here, yeah, you did), but either way, it'd be best to read the stickies at the top of this board before attempting another capture.
    we gon bomb yo house
    we gon kill yo famriry
    we gon kill yo dog
    goons comin up and we aint takin no prisoners

    u don't understand the allegories of love and hate
    u don't get the references
    u can't possibly comprehend the talnt this took
    som1 should fire u

    lindsey is my waifu

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    Default Re: the pokemon war (badgraedbadgraedsom1halp) (WWC)

    *Votes for you*
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    P.S. My story deal load is a lot, so if you bribe me now you have to wait pretty long.

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