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    Default me want swinub! me want my swinub now!

    so i was bored forget this ever existed

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    Default Re: me want swinub! me want my swinub now!

    Welcome to the URPG. You may want to read these threads to learn how to write stories here. ;)

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    Default Re: me want swinub! me want my swinub now!

    Now that's just taking the pi--- *shot*

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    Default Re: me want swinub! me want my swinub now!

    do i get it?
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    Default Re: me want swinub! me want my swinub now!

    Short answer: no.

    Long answer: Swinub is gonna take much more than that to get captured. As far as I see, you've no plot, no characters, no description and nothing near a battle. One sentence does not constitute a story.

    If this is an attempt at trolling, stop. I did something like this and now several refs want me banned.

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    Default Re: me want swinub! me want my swinub now!

    ouch, i took that one hard lol. i suck at writing stories so... it was a good start.(for me of course)
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