Mine gets no love? :bawl: :XD2:
Mine gets no love? :bawl: :XD2:
Okay, looking back it looks like I didn't after all. My bad XD I liked yours too.
Y U NO LOVE MINE
It was dark, dangy and hard to see in this cave. You walked with only a torch searching for something, for a legend foretold in this cave. Known as Giratina. The six pokeballs containing six of your Pokemon sat on your belt, You breath in and out looking around. Suddenly, You hear what sounds like an echo coming from a small hole in the wall.
You knew.. This must be Giratina. you walked into a rather large room that was lit with ancient torches with eternal flames, and there on the mound was a sleeping giant known as Giratina. You approached him carefully eye widened, he was much taller then you, towering around 13 feet. "Giratina" you breathe out, at first nothing happens and it's all quiet. so you turn to walk out as fear rose in your body, you had to figure out how to fight him, your six Pokemon were only Blaziken, Umbreon, Pidgeot, Raichu, Ivysaur and Haunter, strong as they be it was still something you had to think.
You heard moving.. Slowly you turn and two red eyes are staring down at you. Giratina has awoken. "Don't hurt me" you ask whispering as you back out, the red eyes never leaving me. Just as you make it to the door suddenly Giratina rushed at you that you fell to the ground as he cornered you, he looked angry. Fear went up shooting like a rocket, you started shaking thinking what would happen next. Giratina growled staring down more at you, he starts to lean, he opens his mouth showing teeth as he came down, about to eat you.
"No! you scream so loud your voice echoes throughout the cave, you knew this was it. Giratina would drag you into the Distortion world and probably eat you, or do something horrible. you start crying wishing you could see your family one more time.. To see your girlfriend, her beautiful face, her beautiful ocean blue eyes and the light blond hair. your family, your little sister and brother, your parents, your relatives. It would be all over. you pull out the six pokeballs and toss them out into the corridor, you surrender my Pokemon and set them free, so whatever happens to you they will never live this torment. Giratina lunged for you as it was....
Suddenly you wake up in your own bed sweating, it was still dark but there was no Giratina, your six pokeballs sat on the dresser next to you all safe and sound, your girlfriend was sleeping next to you in your bed. It was all a nightmare. "Thank God, it was just a nightmare." you say sounding happy as you lie back down in bed and close your eyes.
Unknowing that in the TV at the end of the bed, two red eyes peer out staring deeply down in your soul.
Title: Giratina's Awakening.
Not sure how good it is or if it's anything creepy or scary (I thought adding you making you the person there might do it). Now here's the thing, right when D/P was released and when Giratina was first known, I had an actual creepy dream about him that sort of went like that (Only I added more creepy touches, and I don't remember every bit of the dream). Only in my dream I think I was my trainer spite, and I walked to find Giratina in a cave, my sprite tries to run for it but Giratina chases him and puts him in a corner
And well I don't remember much else, but that's why I liked Giratina ever since, it was just so weird I had that dream of him before I really knew his name even.
@liquidMountain If you mean did someone make a rom of it, I know of someone who is/was working on one. I don't know if it's been finished yet. I always did like Creepy Black more than Lost Silver. Also, yes, write one :D /creepypasta addict
Here's what I call a creepypasta poem. I made it up myself, based off Banette's PokéDex entries (although there is a bit of artistic license in there) and it's my first creepypasta, so I need some feedback. And yes, before anyone asks, I know it seems odd that the girl asked her mother whether or not she should throw it away and at the start she said it was like her own child and she loved it and she started to bawl after throwing it away, but that's besides the point. As is when I use the term 'as quiet as a mouse' when there are no mouses in the Poké-world. As for the way her mother doesn't seem to care at the end. And it is very, uselessly long. And there's probably a lot of more illogical stuff. Anyway, enjoy!
Feedback and constructive criticism please.
I like all of them, including @Shadow Victini's poem. Very interesting and describes Shuppet and Banette very well.
I had lost my favorite pokemon Emerald game and i had no money. So i searched online for a Emerald rom. I came across a very un-plesent game. But i didn't know it would be un-plesent at first. The title was Pokemon Eon Version. My curiosity got the best of me. So i downloaded the rom. It said it would be 1 hour. So i went out side to pass the time. I was riding my bike on my yard. I thought i saw Latios and Latias the Eon pokemon flying through the sky. Shrugging off my shock i went to check the rom. It was downloaded. I booted it up. The intro was very like what happened outside. There was a boy riding his bike (the bike looked like mine) across a feild of grass. He looked up and saw the two Eon pokemon. Then a battle came into sequence. It was horrifying. I saw the two eon pokemon with patches of blood and a broken wing in battle with the kid. The kid had a deathly grin on his face. His hair was soaked with blood. His ear was gone. He then took out a item. (which i guess was a knife) and jumped the Pokemon. The screen went white. The title screen said Pokemon Eon version. Eon looking like it was written in blood. The pokemon on the screen was the two eon pokemon with there eys gone with two dark holes looking like a window to hell. I remember wondering if i should continue. Like how i dowloded this game in the first place my curiosity got the best of me. I hit the start. The screen flashed Blue and Red. In morse code it spelled Doom. By this point i was pretty freaked out. Then Prof.Oak came up. His skin was a REALLY light shade of white. his head had some blood on it. He gave a diffrent speech. He said that us trainers have been decited to using out pokemon as our tolls not our friends that finally two pokemon finally stepped up and are after all the Trainers. He warned me that these pokemon are extremely Tough to beat. It never let me pick my name. Instead of me in the truck i was in a police car I was mutting something like I had to escape. Then it showed outside the car. It then showed the car wobbleing. I jumped through the window. It then exploded. Blood was spatted everywhere. My chracter got some blood off of his face and licked it. They are close he said. Then it looked like a normal pokemon game. There was red water every where. Peices of a Plice car. I checked for my trainers name. It was.... victim. I then found a biker. We got into battle. HE threw out a Raticate. I came into abttle. I only had one move. Murder. I had no choice but to use it. It was horrible. It showed me get out a gun and shoot the pokemon. I then heard Manic Laughing. The trainer then came into battle. The Fight option was blurdde out so i check my bag. I ahd 1 item knife. I used it. It shoed my cutting the biker into little peices of meat. The battle then ended. I stole the chracters bike. My chracter talked again. There.. There catching up... I have to hurry. The bike then speed up. It shows a blue and red pokemon after me. The both used Hyper beam at the same time. It blasted me across my bike. the screen turned a bloody red. I saw my chracter laying down by a fire at a cave. It seemed to be a few hours later. He was talking. He let me get away. The fucking play let him get away. He seemed to be glaring at me. No worrys we will try harder next timeI shut the rom off never wanting to see it again. But the next days people would not notice me. I had a urge to get back to Pokemon Eon. I did after 2 weeks. I was farther in the story. MY brother must hyave played. Because he came up and played with me. We worked together. He wouden't tell me his part of the story. But evently we came to an battle with latios and latias. It looked like the title screen. After he jumped there was bloody slashes everywhere it said. The Victm then died after 2 weeks. Then the rom reset It said i never downloaded the file.
Needs some grammar and spelling fixes. Otherwise fine.
thanks its my second one
I wrote this creepypasta poem, hope I do good!