@Princess of hoenn
I Can Kinda see that, but What I'm imagining Is that the evil is like the great leviathan. Still, I like the ending.
If You were making a fanfic story and were on the final chapter where the final battle is near, how would you want it to end?
My idea Would be like this 'The final battle would take place for the fate of everything, Where ash takes his role in the great prophacy to defeat the Leviathan and restore balance by sacrificing himself by obtaining the power from The 4 lords that were said to have created everything, Exodia, Zork, Armityle, and Oblani. Before he takes off, May says she wants to tell him something. So he gets in front of her and they kiss for a few seconds and then May says after they're done "Ash...I love you." Then Ash tells her he feels the same way, but then the beings told him it was now or never. Ash then became the Guardian of balance to restore order. And then in the form of the Guardian he flew straight at The serpent of darkness and the great Leviathan did the same, when they were close to clash The others got as far away as they could, Ash's voice was mixed with the other lords voices and said "Where There is Darkness There will will be order to be VICTOURIOUS!!!" Then the Leviathan Roared with such might and when they Clashed an explosion appeared that was huge and it barely missed the vans the rest of the gang were in, and may curled up into a ball and started sobbing...TO BE CONTINUED.' If you want to find out what happens, my fanfic won't come for a while now. And how is it, is it good or bad