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    The Dimension Wizard Flaze's Avatar Moderator
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    Default Re: When Evil Meets Evil (Completed, Final Chapter Out)

    The ending seemed a bit rush, I think it could've had a bit more description too.

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    Default Re: When Evil Meets Evil (Completed, Final Chapter Out)

    sorry about that. Writers block like took over.

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    Default Re: When Evil Meets Evil (Completed, Final Chapter Out)

    Cyrus doesn't even win? And Honchkrow dies for nothing? How sad. But his characterization was quite good this time.
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    Default Re: When Evil Meets Evil (Completed, Final Chapter Out)

    Thanks for reading.

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    Default Re: When Evil Meets Evil (Chapter 8, and Trivia Chapter Out)

    Trivia When Evil Meets Evil

    Team Magma was the first people to leave Kanto and to leave with out any harm done to them. On the other hand Giovanni was hurt by Cyrus and Cyrus was hurt by Giovanni by each others fist. Archie’s fingers were almost clawed off by his Mightyena’s sharp dangerous teeth.

    Kanto is the first Region known in Pokemon and is also the first Region to be attacked by 4 opposing Teams.

    When Evil Meets Evil consisted of 8 chapters, leaving at least 2 chapters for every team.

    Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, and Gary are the only named characters throughout the story besides The Team Leaders.

    Gary made a appearance before Cyrus’s and Giovanni’s battle but wasn’t named until the battle. Gary’s first appearance was in Celadon City where he stopped Giovanni from pushing the detonator bottom.

    It took 72 days to write When Evil Meets Evil starting on 6/18/2010 and ending on 8/22/2010.

    When Evil Meets Evil was Alster08’s second fan fiction but 1st completed fan fiction.

    Once Honchkrow was founded to be dead Cyrus left him in the same exact spot not laying another eye on it.

    Chapter 6 was one off the longest Chapters with 2890 words exactly; But Chapter 1 being the shortest with only 547 words. Chapter 6 almost tripled the amount of words for chapter 1.

    When Evil Meets Evil total word count for published versions was 11,495 words exactly.

    With the 11,495 words I wrote about 160 words a day.

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    Default Re: When Evil Meets Evil (Chapter 8, and Trivia Chapter)

    Sorry it took so long to get back to you.
    Anyway... good finale. However, you have grammar and spelling issues.
    For example.
    In one instance you spelled "Feet" as "feat"
    Another is that you said "While people were ran from their homes". Thats bad grammar.
    Sorry for being a Grammar/spelling fanatic but these comments benefit you more than a random "Great job" comment.
    Great job though. lol

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    Default Re: When Evil Meets Evil (Completed!)

    And so the story comes to an end (and starts up again as Hoenn gets invaded in your next book). I liked the way that the leaders tried to cheat their way to victory, but would Archie really be worried about Cyrus' Honchkrow? He is an evil leader and everything...

    I'm glad that Cyrus finally won, and how he reacted when one of his Pokémon died (i.e. did nothing) was just what he would have done! I loved the Kanto revolution as well!

    All in all, a satisfying conclusion - now to read the sequel!
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    Default Re: When Evil Meets Evil (Completed!)

    Thanks I cant wait till you find out the secrets and horror that will take place in book two.

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