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    Originally posted by Damian Silverblade
    Completely unexpected ending - though with you we should have expected one.
    So with her, we should expect the unexpected? But if you expect something that's unexpected, it isn't really unexpected is it?

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    Dream endings always mess with my head.... oO;; Wow....

    I liked the first one because of the confessions, but the second one hit me hard. When Pikachu didn't get up, I was thinking, 'Oh my God, Misty had a premonition...!' but then Misty fainted and it became amusing. ^^;

    Insane as always, Toge.
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    Another great story. I've read so many of yours on the various sites, and they're all great! I saw this on Fanfiction.net earlier, I didn't realize it was up here too.

    You scared me in that second ending where Pikachu wasn't moving!! And I think having two endings is a great idea. I may try that in some of mine where I can't decide how to end it :) I don't think you had the second ending on the other site, so it was kind of an extra shock! A good shock though.

    I dont think I'm making much sense... I have to sleep...

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    Originally posted by Geodude
    So with her, we should expect the unexpected? But if you expect something that's unexpected, it isn't really unexpected is it?
    AHHHHH! STOP MESSING WITH MY POOR HEAD!

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    Sooooo...watch out!
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    Sorry Damian....LOL....I guess the minds of fellow writers are delicate things to mess with...

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    Especially when those fellow writers think they are funny but aren't really, IE me.
    Quote Originally Posted by Mintaka and Hurristat
    He's an evil director / He'll give out infractions / Do something wrong / And he takes direct actions
    Then what'll he do?/ He'll permaban you / You find your name slashed / With a message, 'Adieu'
    Sooooo...watch out!
    "It is said that the federal government, if it was in charge of the Sahara, would run out of sand in five years. Private enterprise, being more efficient, would do it in half the time - and they'd make money off the bridges." - me.
    "My friends, love is better than anger. Hope is better than fear. Optimism is better than despair. So let us be loving, hopeful and optimistic. And we’ll change the world." - Jack Layton's last letter. Rest in peace, Jack.

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    Thankees people!

    Sorry I haven't replied. I've been in a bad mood(once again), and therefore have only been lurking.

    I just like to say that I'm happy you guys enjoyed the story, and confusion, unexpectedness, and insanity rules!



    *goes to catch up on people's stories*

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    That was a real curveball you have us, Togepretty.
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