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    Default Re: Tarnished Gold: The Story of Cynthia (R/NC-17, Dark/Crackfic)

    Necrobump Double Post!

    Note: Cynthia is in Black and White.... Hmm.... Gives me a decent idea for a plot twist..... (*cough cough N cough cough*)

    (Don't worry, I don't bump for teh lulz! I'll have more up soon, once I finish my homework tomorrow!)
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    Quote Originally Posted by The_Noob View Post
    (Don't worry, I don't bump for teh lulz! I'll have more up soon, once I finish my homework tomorrow!)
    Ahe-he-he-he-he-he-he-hem.

    This thread has probably been bumped at least 20 times.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    Default Re: Tarnished Gold: The Story of Cynthia (R/NC-17, Dark/Crackfic)

    ^^
    I know. Mostly because I only write so much each update.

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    Default Re: Tarnished Gold: The Story of Cynthia (R/NC-17, Dark/Crackfic)

    dude i love reading this
    keep up the good work

    btw: are there gonna be any new chapters soon?

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    Default Re: Tarnished Gold: The Story of Cynthia (R/NC-17, Dark/Crackfic)

    Quote Originally Posted by smartgamer View Post
    btw: are there gonna be any new chapters soon?
    This recent part of this chapter will be very long. Then I'm doing the Director's Cut (NC-17 edition), and doing a major edit to the first chapter and its three parts. It's smooth sailing there on out.

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    Default Re: Tarnished Gold: The Story of Cynthia (R/NC-17, Dark/Crackfic)

    neat
    (good luck keeping me out of an overrated story)
    XD

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    Default Re: Tarnished Gold: The Story of Cynthia (R/NC-17, Dark/Crackfic)

    In the interest of the fanfic awards, I'm going around and rating all the nominated fics on their respective categories and how I think they fit.

    Any category that I don't believe I can rate accurately, I will not vote for.

    Level of crackiness: 12/20

    It's less cracky now and more a random jumble of the canon characters interacting together, which isn't really all that of a good thing. I can still read through the whole thing, but some of the memes (like Oak being a pedophile) are becoming quite stale.

    Level of humour: 12/20

    Same thing. It's still pretty funny, but... when everyone's calling everyone else a psycho bitch, it starts to get a bit damp.

    Maybe my sense of humour has been dampened because I'm sick. I've been feeling a bit under the weather lately.

    Characterization: 8/10

    Given that it's a crack fic, you can't exactly be expected to keep the characters in character with canon, but they are very consistent internally. And interesting most of the time, too.

    Grammar, style, and flow: 7/10

    It's more like a 7.5, but I round down, not up. It's structured much better than it used to be, I can tell you that. There are still a few anomalies (Those asterisk-marked sentences aren't all contributory to clarity, you know!) but you haven't had any spelling errors or anything like that.

    Total: 69/100

    It's gotten a bit better in some parts, a bit worse in others. But overall, it's still a somewhat enjoyable read.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    Default Re: Tarnished Gold: The Story of Cynthia (R/NC-17, Dark/Crackfic)

    ^^
    I'm a litttle depressed at the rating. But... I'm going to keep on working (should I have the time or the 'feeling' to do it).

    If I don't feel inspired, I'll just make a few oneshots for the lulz. I may be a mediocre author, but I'll try to accept it, and keep doing what I do best, be the guy in the middle! Thanks for the long-awaited review, Zekurom!

    Also, I've gotten ideas......

    1) Lucas and Silver (who shall no longer have a foul mouth, thanks to a certain red legendary) will be the main 'humorous' characters, to avoid Team Galactic looking like buffoons (I never imagined them to be foolish), and Oak was put in as a quick homage (and an alleviator to keep the plot from wearing out before I get where I want to be) will leave the scene later to free up space. Ariana is there simply to be there (if it makes the story less attractive, I shouldn't have her talking), so she can stay.
    2) Heh, the asterisk-marked sentences will be used rarely from now on, if you say so.
    3) I'm deciding to post a thread so I can get some advice on how to continue at this point. I've been unable to do an update in a while because I have little time on my hands, and when I do have free time, I don't know what to do, so I'm stuck at the moment.
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    Default Re: Tarnished Gold: The Story of Cynthia (R/NC-17, Dark/Crackfic)

    I love this, actually. Dark stories = awesome. (then again, I have a sick, sick mind...)

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    Default Re: Tarnished Gold: The Story of Cynthia (R/NC-17, Dark/Crackfic)

    Quote Originally Posted by The_Noob View Post
    ^^
    I'm a litttle depressed at the rating. But... I'm going to keep on working (should I have the time or the 'feeling' to do it).
    I don't see why, you scored just 2 points below the leading fic for the Crackfic category.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    Default Re: Tarnished Gold: The Story of Cynthia (R/NC-17, Dark/Crackfic)

    They can't keep me from BUMPING forever. I've got a little bit of new stuff for you guys, so you won't tear my face off.

    If it's not, here's some Led Zeppelin to listen to:

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    Default Re: Tarnished Gold: The Story of Cynthia (R/NC-17, Dark/Crackfic)

    Well it was short and that paragraph with Rowan was long. One thing though, you're gonna need a little more description and I recommend that you start a new paragraph every time a character talks so that it doesn't get confusing like Oak talks then you start a new paragrap and Rowan talks and so on.

    Also, Oak isn't too happy about losing Lucas apparently XD

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    Default Re: Tarnished Gold: The Story of Cynthia (R/NC-17, Dark/Crackfic)

    ^^
    I'll revise later.

    I have a sad announcement to make.

    This fic is cancelled. The writer's block, the bans, and lack of ideas to make the story move forward from the stalemate it was in was too much on me.

    But, don't worry! In late spring of 2011, I'll have a revamped version of this story for you all! And, in the meantime, I have a few more good fics up my sleeve for you all!

    Thanks for reading,

    The_Noob

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