Thread: SPP Drama Series: Episode #1

Hey i thought i post this story here, it was succesfull in Serebii (I am on the 3rd episode) This combined together is a total of 46 pages, So there might be double posts since i pro can't post it all in one. This story is also finished.
This is a story I thought up, and no it won’t be like Micro$oft story (Yello_Mit) Well maybe a bit, I dunno I will continue with this story after the first chapter. Since I still have Conquering Houenn and I have some muse left for Into another Dimension which you can see on the fanfiction site.
If you see your name in the story and don’t want it in just tell me and I will take it out.
Featuring (Just because you aren’t in the cast list doesn’t mean you won’t be in it)
GoldenLover (Me)
Yello_Mit (Micro$oft)
Jasmine
Sinko
Serebii (Of course I am adding Joe and Sinko, thought that Sinko not here anymore)
Crystal Latios (Formally known as Golden Jirachi and before that Golden Mew)
Flaming Torchic
Jigglyskitt
Imperial Dragon
Wing_Zero (Originally Yami_Ryu)
Cayenne (She did also have Legend after the first name but now its just Cayenne)

Okay that all on the cast, And also if you happen to be on my friends list then you got a higher chance of appearance.
But I am also willing to throw in some extras, like lets say I used a Newbie as an Extra. No one is the bad guy, the bad guy will be the person I make up (Unless anyone willing to be the bad guy)

SPP Drama Series
Based on when we got hacked.

GoldenLover had connected the internet and gone to his most visited site when he got the chance to go on the computer. Which was Serebii.com.
“Lets see what happening today” he said to himself looking at the front page. Uh, Pokedex updated, some IV’s values of an Unknown “Whoa look at these stats and it on 100, its pretty weak”
Golden moved the mouse to the forums and clicked on it and waited it to upload.
When it had uploaded he went straight to his PM box, 10 messages were sent to him, one was from L100Meganium telling him he got the answer to her Trivia right, Another was from a newbie called Togepi_Trainer asking if Conquering Houenn would be updated. The next one was Feather_Dancer just saying hi.
Some of the others were as important but two of them was sent today and read IMPORTANT PLEASE READ in caps and both were from Yello_Mit and Jasmine. GoldenLover clicked on Jasmine and read hers first.
“GoldenLover, quick get onto the chat their no time to explain, it about the hacking going on, someone PM Serebii saying you were next!” it read. Worried he went to Yello_Mit message.
“Golden wherever you are you gotta get on Chat right away, you are in danger of getting hacked!” Yello_Mit read both were from 5 and 2 minutes ago which means the two must be on chat now. Quickly dropping his routine around Serebii GoldenLover rushed to the Chat room and signed himself as Avril_Lavgine_Sk8ter_Boy his original name.

As he signed in Sinko had said something
Avril_Lavgine_Sk8ter_boy has just sign in
Pokemon? Has signed in
<Sinko> Damn it
<Jasmine> What it is!
<Sinko> Someone had jammed the Spam Terminator
Crystal Latios has joined the chat
Nobody had noticed Avril yet
<Crystal Latios> I was hacked guys, someone in my username!
<Sleepebii> That must be what jammed the Spam
<Avril_Lavgine_Sk8ter_Boy> Uh Hello would someone tell me what going on?
<Jasmine> You are here
*Jasmine hugs Avril*
<Yello_Mit> Avril my good man you got here in time
*Avril_Lavgine_Sk8ter_Boy changed his nick to Avril*
<Avril> Tell me what going on
<Sinko> Avril your username is in danger of been hacked, we don’t know who but someone PM Serebii telling him who the next victim is, and its you
<Avril> But why, who would have something against me
<Crystal Latios> It just not you, quick change your password
Sleepebii changed his nick to Serebii
<Serebii> It won’t work, they are smart and have some system that steals the password
<Avril> Fine, they want war, then they got war
<Sinko> We can’t go fingering suspects you know
<Avril> Well, it gotta be poke-haters
<Serebii> Which narrows down to uh Half a dozen of people
<Avril> Who sent you that Pm?
<Serebii> Uh, Someone by the name of Sucker, it was a beginner trainer and just registered
<JigglySkitt> They must have a lot of usernames here
<Jasmine> One of them was Jasmineisabitch
<Avril> That it, hacking our usernames and making us look like fools is one thing but calling my friends a bitch and threatening Joe is another
<Sinko> Don’t do anything crazy
<Avril> With all due respect Sinko I am not waiting for me to get hacked.
<Crystal Latios> Joe?, what are you going to do about my username?
<Serebii> If it goes any further I will have to ban it, but for now you are safe, also get another username until this is all over with
<Pokemon?> MWHAHA!
<Avril, Serebii, Crystal Latios, Sinko, Jigglyskitt and Yello_Mit> ???
Pokemon? Changes his nick to Pokemonhater
<Pokemonhater> Fools!, all of you
<Serebii> Have you been behind all this?
<Sinko> Get rid of him
<Avril> No!, we need him for answers
<Serebii> He’s got a point
<Crystal Latios> Give me back my username
<Pokemonhater> Oh look, the poor Latios wants her lair back, lets kill the stupid blue bird!
<Crystal Latios> Latios isn’t stupid!
<Avril> Leave Latios alone
<Jasmine> Yeah and leave the site while you are at it
<Pokemonhater> You next Jasmine, after I am through with Avril, you the next one
<Avril> Don’t be so sure, Because I be the last one
<Pokemonhater> How can you be sure?
<Avril> Because I am going find a way. The entire site is, we may be different from each other, we may argue, flame and bash and ban, But we are still a family and all have one thing in common, Pokemon
<Pokemonhater> Cut with the stupid pep talk
<Avril> Don’t you know that the bad guy always loses
<Pokemonhater> That is it pal, I am hacking in your username now!
<Sinko> The hell you will
<Pokemonhater> Stuff it Sinko
<Serebii> Why are you set out to destroy me?
<Pokemonhater> What does my name say Little Joey
<Jigglyskitt> Hey, how do you know our names?
<Yello_Mit> He was spying on us I bet
<Pokemonhater> There are more then just me, an entire site full, which you will never find, Goodbye suckers
Pokemonhater quits
<Avril> http://bmgf.bulbagarden.net/www.pokemonloversforlife.com
A few minutes passes
<Sinko> What about it?
<Avril> That is the site, I had a feeling because I was searching for pictures of actress Amber Benson when I found this site, dunno how but I entered and signed in, but when I went into the forums, it was a hoax to trick people so they turn into pokemon haters and somehow pass off from Pokemon lovers, And they were planning on hurting everyone in Serebii.com and hacking them. Here are some, Jay, Hason, Tricko, and Crystal Latios to name some.
<Sinko> Well I be damned, you just busted this mystery wide open.
<Jasmine> Report them Serebii before it too late for Avril!
Kate_Garven_Rocks signs in
<Kate_Garven_Rocks> Hi people
<Serebii> No, we hack them instead
<Avril> You are finally seeing what I want to see
<Serebii> Here the plan guys, Avril do they know you are in that site?
<Avril> No, my name is Celebrity_Fanatic their
<Serebii> Good you spy on them
Avril quit
<Serebii> I hadn’t finished!, Sinko, Warn everyone, Crystal Latios and Jasmine, get the mods together and crack your heads way open and fix that Spam thing, Jigglyskitt and Yello_Mit, Spy on all the newbies and questioned them. Everyone got what they have to do?
<Jasmine> Avril told me on Msn he changed his password
<Everyone> Right!
<Serebii> Go!
All of them signs out and leaves Kate alone in the chat, only with another user named Hostage
<Kate_Garven_Rocks> Okay fine everyone leave then
<Hostage> Help me, I am a hostage of the site called pokemonloversforlife, your friends are in danger!, and the reason why the search engine Avril was in, the Amber girl, is because Amber is reletated to the head, and she also in danger
<Kate_Garven_Rocks> Uh, who the hell are you?
<Hostage> I-I am Kate Garven

Didn’t tell that one coming did ya, this was 5 pages long, I know it was five pages of chat but you got the drift, now we are been dragged into something deeper, darker and dangerous.
Also for anyone who wants to know Kate Garven is an actress who played as Jade Sutherland in Home & Away before leaving and Amber Benson an actress who played as Tara McClay in Buffy the Vampire Slayer in season 4 to 6 before Tara was killed off, Buffy doesn’t air anymore thought it finished in season 7. Please review too


Spp Drama Series Part 2

<Kate_Garven_Rocks> What?, why the hell would Kate be on a pokemon site, I don’t believe you
<Hostage> Have you heard anything about Kate Garven?, if not I sure if you read somewhere it say I am missing
<Kate_Garven_Rocks> I suppose you are Kate
<Hostage> And you are a fan I can tell
<Kate_Garven_Rocks> Listen don’t go anyway, I want to see if this is real
AmHostage signs in
Kate_Garven_Rocks signs out
AmHostage changes her nick to Amber
Hostage changes her nick to Kate
<Kate> Amber we gotta do something
<Amber> I hear you loud and clear
<Kate> We are trapped and we have computers, if I am not right, our captors are up to something
<Amber> The only site that we can go to is this pokemon one, But we can still get help
<Kate> I been on the site as myself and they are stirring this place up
<Amber> I just joined, maybe we should allied ourselves with these guys
Strider Signs in
Sceptile signs in
Flaming_Torchic Signs in
Imperial Dragon signs in
Sapphire_Dewgong signs in
Kate and Amber goes quiet
<Strider> This is a mess
<Sceptile> That idiot used Crystal Latios username to delete my latest chapter, and he changed Avril story Conquering Houenn around.
<Strider> This has to end now!
<Flaming_Torchic> But how, even us mods can’t do anything
<Imperial Dragon> Serebii has told us that we must be careful and make sure Avril doesn’t get hacked, because he was the latest username threatened
<Sapphire_Dewgong> What in the bloody hell is wrong with people these days?
<Amber> You are asking us?
<Strider> You know I think some of the other guys are up to something, I mean Jigglyskitt and Yello_Mit were playing in the games area then they stopped.
<Flaming_Torchic> Maybe they got off
<Strider> No its more then that, I am going to sound crazy but the place feels panicking in a way.
<Imperial Dragon> God, what should we do?
<Sapphire_Dewgong> Well not panic of course
<Kate (talking to Amber)> Think we should
<Amber> Worth a shot
Cayenne signs in
<Cayenne> Guys, did you see that announcement?
All still don’t notice Kate and Amber
<Strider> Yeah, I am looking whose on line for 5 minutes now and I am seeing Jigglyskitt and Yello_Mit are PM a lot of people, dunno who thought
<Flaming_Torchic> Thinks.. Yes their definitely some trouble brewing
<Sapphire_Dewgong> Man, the person in Crystal Latios username just made a threat and bashing people, And Avril seems to be locked in his own world, I PM just before and he still hasn’t replied
<Cayenne> Maybe he busy
<Imperial Dragon> Not one,
<Sceptile>??? What do you mean
<Imperial Dragon> He hasn’t posted or replied to anything, and when he on that what he does, a routine around the forums, but his last post was yesterday reviewing a fanfic.
<Strider> And I been watching his stats but he hasn’t moved from the fanfic thread, not read a story or anything
<Cayenne> Jasmine and a newbie who claiming to be Crystal Latios, whose called Golden Mew for the time been, are telling mods to go to the chat
<Sceptile> Looks like we are about to find out what going on
<Kate> Lets do it
<Amber> But what if we get caught?
<Strider> Okay, Sinko and Serebii are also doing nothing and been in the same place, while Golden Mew & Jasmine seemed to be heading to the chat, and Jigglyskitt and Yello_Mit are still sending messages, Wait JS had just checked the members list for some reason
<Kate> When is that fan of mine coming back?
<Amber> Who
<Kate> Someone named Kate_Garven_Rocks, I told them that I am the real Kate and they went to check if I am missing
Kate.. signs in
<Kate> Kate_Garven_Rocks?
The others are still stuck in their conversation and does not notice them.
<Kate..> It really is you
<Kate> why do you have two periods at the end of the name
<Kate..> I shortened it
<Sceptile> When are they coming?
Yami signs in
Dragonair signs in
Trip signs in
Porygonx signs in
<Trip> Okay where Jasmine
<Yami> I want this to end and get to the bottom of this
<Dragonair> Who the hell is Golden Mew?
<Porygonx> Golden Mew used to be Crystal Latios name
Sir Chris signs in
<Yami> Crystal Latios has just made a thread bashing everyone on the forums, and she bashed Avril, Jasmine and Serebii more then anyone else
<Sceptile> Did they?, Let me at the hacker
<Imperial Dragon> While you at it let me unleash my power
<Dragonair> Hacked?
<Sir Chris> Yeah Sinko said that in the announcement thread and mentioned that Crystal isn’t getting banned yet in hope for Crystal Latios to have her username back
Pipikachu signs in
Eternaldarkness signs in
DarkScyther signs in
<Strider> More mods, no signs of Golden Mew and Jasmine
<DarkScyther> Okay I don’t like to be disturb when writing a story, what going on?
<Eternaldarkness> I bet it about the hacking that going on
<Pipikachu> Not to be rude but Duh
<Sceptile> The hacker has just entered some rude words in a review of my fic
<Strider> Avril has finally moved from the spot he was, but Uh he left the forums
<Yami> I think he a suspect
<Kate> He is not!
<Yami> Who the hell are you?
<Kate> Listen they all have a good reason
<Sceptile> How would you know?
<Amber> Just believe her
<Dragonair> Excuse me but don’t tell us what to do
<Sir Chris> Who is all?
<Kate> I been here all morning
<Kate..> She right, I just came in when Avril said something about hacking then Serebii gave everyone some sort of job
<Sapphire_Dewgong> We may be closing in on what going on
<Flaming_Torchic> I hate it when I don’t know what going on
Jasmine signs in
Golden Mew signs in
Dunrosiel signs in
<Dunrosiel> Hello people
<Jasmine> Where are the rest of you guys?
<Yami> I don’t know, what is this all about
<Crystal Latios> Where Sandra, she was online not too long ago
<Dunrosiel> Sandra?
<Sir Chris> Feather Dancer
<Flaming_Torchic> Just tell us what the hell is going on
Xander signs in
<Xander> Hello how are we all
<Jasmine> Annoyed
<Crystal Latios> Stressed
<Xander> Oh why may I ask
<Crystal Latios> Where have you been for the last month!
The board is quiet
<Amber> No need to get snappy
<Kate> I Can’t handle this anymore, Help us, My real name is Kate Garven and Amber is Amber Benson, please help us we are hostages
<Amber> We will do anything
Everyone is quiet taking in the information
<Jasmine> How is that our problem?
<Amber> How?!?, I don’t know maybe because you people bloody own this stupid site that got us in the mess in the first place!
<Yami> … Clock ticking before we kick you out
<Kate> Stay calm Amber we can’t freak out now
<Amber>, but I can’t take it any longer, I just want to go home ;_;
<Kate> Amber!, pull it together I am younger then you, I need you to keep me in tact, if you go crazy now, I will be alone.
<Strider> Oh my god, you mean someone kept you hostages and they are from this site
<Kate> No not this one, The pokemon hater site
<Amber> What is Pokemon?
<Amber> I mean I know they are creatures and I learned a little about them but really what are they?
<Sir Chris> ???
<Sceptile> ‘-‘
<Strider> ….
<Jasmine> Haven’t heard that one in a while.
<Yami> What Pokemon hater site?
<Crystal Latios> Let me think, Hostage?, wait Kate are you the one called Hostage that was on earlier when we were having that conversation
<Kate> Yes
<Dragonair> Well this is one drama after another isn’t it
<Flaming_Torchic> Do you like pokemon?’
<Amber> Um that red chicken looks cute
<Flaming_Torchic> Torchic?
<Amber> Yeah that one
<Kate> Their okay, I don’t hate them, I think that blue bird is beautiful
<Sapphire_Dewgong_ Which one, Altalria?, Articuno?
<Kate> Dunno, I think the last one
Pokemonhater signs on
<Amber> Eek!
<Kate> Oh holy crap!
Kate quits
Amber quits
<Yami> Glares at Pokemonhater
<Kate..> Dunno what just happened but lets not mentioned it
<Pokemonhater> What?
<Jasmine> She says get the hell out of here
<Pokemonhater> Oh don’t hate me Jasmine, you know you want me
<Jasmine> As if, get a life, I wouldn’t touch you with a ten foot pole
<Pokemonhater> But I am buff and have muscles
<Jasmine> I don’t care what you look like, you can be the most handsome guy in the world but I still wouldn’t touch you
<Crystal Latios> You haven’t won you know
<Pipikachu> Lets stay out of this
<Dragonair> A Prime plan
<Pokemonhater> You can’t resist me girl, besides what are you doing playing a kiddie game that for wuss
<Sir Chris> Better plan, how about we just crush him like a bug
<Pokemonhater> Like a Wurmple
<Imperial Dragon> Do us a favour and get a life
<Pokemonhater> How about no Gothic boy, you know you will never get that girl you want
<Sceptile> He has a better chance of getting someone then you do dickhead
<Flaming_Torchic> …
<Sapphire_Dewgong> Oh
<Imperial Dragon> Speechless
<Sceptile> What a guy can swear once in his life
<Strider> We know but that not the Sceptile we all grown and loved
<Crystal Latios> Actually a lot of people have changed in the last few hours
Wolf_Goddness signs in
<Pokemonhater> You are after Jasmine Wolfman
<Wolf_Goddness> Huh?, next for what
<Strider> Um he’s is a girl stupid
<Pokemonhater> well I love to stay and chat but I got business to run, Bye suckers
Pokemonhater quits
<Jasmine> Crystal Latios lets go through this again with these guys.


Jigglyskitt pressed the submit button as he sent another message to a newbie
“Whew this is harder then I thought” she then went back to the member’s list
He was doing the letters N to Z while Yello_Mit was onto A to M. she was almost finished with the Z
“ZeroX20, Zferolie, Zoe, Zombie and the last one Zone5. Execpt Zoe who was a Rainbow trainer they were all Beginner Trainers.
“Well looks like I have four more to go, I wonder how Yello_Mit doing?”

Yello_Mit was almost finished with the M’s as he went through them he muttered to himself “Why are so many people beginning Trainers, it would be a lot faster if more people posted. “Lets see, Mystical Charizard, Oh a mod Mystical-Lugia, Mysticman, Mysty, Myuu and lucky but last M d Re-inc, wow a weird name, Looks like I have a few things to go by” Yello_Mit went to Mystical Charizard and PM him.

Avril now Celebrity_Fanatic in the pokemonhaters forum browsed around, he hated these kind of sites where they bash things they don’t like. Aleast in things like an Avril or Britney hate site they didn’t have pictures of dead pokemon.
He was sickened seeing a Torchic getting his head off by Homer Simpson in The Simpsons “Hmm Chicken” it had Homer saying with an axe in his hands.
But Avril knew he had to spy and protect Serebii. “I wish one of my real life friends were interested in Pokemon, then I could get them to help me” He sighed. He also tried his best not to get angry and start shouting “God, I know how I made friends in real life, Neopets and Serebii but how did I make friends here?” twelve people had already Pm him, one of them was a mod.
“Oh what this?” he asked seeing a thread “More Serebii’s members we should crush” in the destroy pokemon site selection.
“Better write these down”,
“Lime, Micro$oft, Jigglyskitt, Jasmine, Wing_Zero, Sceptile, RJ Archangel, Imperial Dragon, Mystic Lioness, Spazzikarp, Bluchu, Eternaldarkness, Wolf_Goddness” It then it Avril that all the ones mentioned above were on his buddy list.
“Oh crap, by changing my password I put these on my buddy list in danger, but how did they know?” Avril wondered.
“I gotta get off soon but not before PM Serebii or Sinko” Avril quickly went to the site.

Okay I am done, I think I need a little rest guys, this is 7 pages along, two pages longer then the other one. You guys are lucky never made two long stories within 5 hours or so, suppose my muse is working hard in my brain. Also the people Jigglyskitt and Yello_Mit was looking up are actual members from the site.
Also chapter 3 will have Avril going out in the real world to his school and finding two allies among his friends.
When he finds out about Amber and Kate expect him to be outraged. Bye for now, don’t forget to review.


SPP Drama Series

Avril whose real name was Channa walked into his school. He usually walked to his friends but today he went into the library and went onto one of the far computers to log on Serebii.com.
“Even thought this means risking people knowing I like Pokemon I still have a job to do and luckily its Friday then I have the week.. Oh wait silly me it the last day today.
He headed towards the chatroom

Avril signs in
<Jasmine> So? Have you done it yet?
<Avril> Done what?
<Crystal Latios> Hello Avril, Serebii got Hakeirus to hack into one of their usernames
<Avril> Sure that a good idea?
<Jasmine> we don’t like it ethier but this is war
ChaosMeowth signs in
MS signs
<Avril> Does everyone know?
<MS> Know what?
<Jasmine> Yes everyone is aware
<Avril> Okay that good
<Crystal Latios> Don’t worry everyone on your buddy list is also fully aware
<Jasmine> Um, do you know about Kate and Amber?
<Crystal Latios> Anna
<MS> Anna?, oh right Jasmine
<Jasmine> What he should know
<Avril> Know what and who?
<Crystal Latios> Nothing don’t worry about it
<Avril> Crystal Latios I am not playing games now what don’t I know
<Crystal Latios> you probably don’t know them
<ChaosMeowth> What going on?
<MS> Everything
<Jasmine> Do you know who Kate Garven and Amber Benson is?
<Buffyboy> Amber!, she is a great actress I loved her when she played as Tara
<Evanarios> Amber?, I think I heard of her
<ChaosMeowth> Kate I know her but Amber?
<MS> I am the Exact opposite, who is Kate?
<Crystal Latios> Um Avril?
<Jasmine> Silent is never a good thing

“Silent is never a good thing?” Channa heard the word repeat but it sounded like it was real
Spazzikarp signs in
<Spazzikarp> I want to kick some pokemon haters butts
<Jasmine> Avril?
<MS> He still here
“I didn’t know you liked Pokemon?”
“What, why am I hearing people voices from the chat to out here?” Channa muttered
“Look behind you” said the voice again
Channa turned around and saw two of his friends, Kirsten and Tahlia.
Kirsten was a little taller then Tahlia and had pale skin and black hair, her eyes were green.
Tahlia had long brown hair which was in a ponytail, Tahlia skin was a little tanner then Kirsten and had deep dark brown eyes.
“Uh, how to explain this one” He said.

“Hey, its okay if you like them, its not like we are pokemon haters, besides Tahlia likes some of the pokemon and sometimes her brother Sapphire game” Kirsten reassured him.

“Oh, what would you do if a Pokemon hater site was attacking a pokemon site?” Channa asked
“I would strike back” Kirsten said

“Well how would you like to help me help my favourite site Serebii.net from the hackers?”

“Sure, anything for a friend” Kirsten replied

“Some of the members such as Imperial Dragon, Mystic Lioness, Xander, ShinyGyarados have disappeared without a trace and this message has been left in their signature.” Tahlia read from the computer Channa and Kirsten looked at the screen.
“Oh god” Channa moaned and furiously started to type
<Avril> How are they missing? And what message was it?
<Jasmine> He lives!, it read Hahaha, we found a way to suck your friends into the computer and they will never be found
<Avril> Oh god that bad
<Crystal Latios> What the meaning of it thought.
<Kate> They are getting rid of Pokemon lovers by sucking them into the computer.
<ChaosMeowth> Anyway of avoiding them?
<Crystal Latios> No, Imperial Dragon had been reported to be sucked into a vortex when he was walking to the shops

“Move” Kirsten told Channa bringing him back to the real world.

<Avril> That is insane, what have you got yourselves into
Dratini257 signs in
Sinko signs in
Serebii signs in
<Spazzikarp> How do we defeat it
<Amber> You have to be willing to go to.. I can’t say where it is
<Serebii> Amber if you know where and who doing this then you have to tell us
<Spazzikarp> Yeah let me at it, I want to show off my Ooberness Splash attack
<Kate> Right
<Jasmine> Avril, is that you?
<Avril> No, this is his friend Kirsten, myself and my other friend Tahlia are willing to help you
<Spazzikarp> Amber tell us now or I will splash you
<Amber> Quit joking around!
<Spazzikarp> Um I am not joking
<Sinko> Amber, we can help you get out of wherever you are but you got to trust us
<Dratini257> Yes, unless if you want to die their
<Amber> Uh, Kate?
<Kate> I don’t know Kate, I don’t know anything
<Jasmine> Kirsten, do you like pokemon
<Avril> a little bit, but my friend plays Sapphire sometimes
<Crystal Latios> rhuigeui
<Jasmine> Um Crystal Latios, you okay?
No answer
<Serebii> Crystal, Are you okay?
Still no answer
“Kirsten move please” Channa said to the black head
<Avril> This is me now Avril, what going on?
<Kate> The Vortex must of sucked her in
<Amber> We are in America, somewhere in New York City
<Jasmine> I thought Kate Garven was in Australia
<Serebii> You did the right thing Amber telling yurwfe
<Sinko> Oh crap, he must of got sucked into a vortex as well.
<ChaosMeowth> That it I am outta here
<Amber> You can’t run or hide
<Avril> KATE GARVEN!!!, Oh my god is that what you are protecting from me, Tell me who Amber is right this instant!
<Spazzikarp> Lead me to them now so I can terminate them
<MS> I think Avril exploding, don’t get angry, its not their fault.
<Avril> Tell me who Amber is
<Amber> Benson, ring a bell?
<Avril> Amber, Benson?, Tara, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, I remember
<Amber> Save us, that all I asked
<Dratini> Don’t worry we will do something
<Jasmine> How?, Serebii is not longer in our world, we are without a leader
Hakarius signs in
Hakarius changes his nick to Hak
<Hak> All done, I threatened a few of their members and got one of them banned
<Spazzikarp> New York?, how do we get their?
<Kate> I think I know!, But its risky
<Sinko> Tell all
<Kate> find some books on witchcraft and Vortexes, then get into the computer I think I will able to help as a guide
<Avril> Not only hot but smart
<Avril> We volunteer
<Jasmine> Avril? Lets wait first
<Avril> This is not Avril it Kirsten and I am not going to let my friend get sucked in a vortex, now we are going to ditch school, find a magic store then go to Chan- I mean Avril house and work their
<Jasmine> But..
<Avril> see you soon
Avril quits.

Kirsten turned around to see Tahlia and Channa staring at her
“What, listen we are not arguing we are going” Kirsten said logging off the school computer
‘Fine, but we make sure we get in contact with the others before we do the spell” Channa said
“Tahlia if you want you can stay” Channa told her

“No I am coming along” Tahlia said, so the three set off to find a magic store and the vortex.

Jasmine watched as Avril signed off and prayed for the three people.
“God I hope you guys hurry” not was she just worried about herself, the three teenagers and the site but also for Kate and Amber.
Anna which was her real name got up and went into her kitchen, “God what kind of site are we meddling with?” Jasmine wondered. She knew it was not an Ordinary site since when could they suck people into computers and kidnap Celebrities.
She stared out into her backyard thinking.
“That it I am helping” she walked out of the house and went straight for the Magic store that she had gone to a couple of times.
“Maybe I should let others know, no if I did they would only be a distraction.

<Spazzikarp> I can’t let that kid save the world and us do nothing
<Sceptile> He is not a kid, he a teenager
<MS> Besides he with two other people
<Spazzikarp> Yeah probably puny little ones
<ChaosMeowth and MS> Hey!
<Spazzikarp> Sorry I know that was wrong
<Sinko> Don’t worry, he seems to have a lot of guts anyway
<Dratini257> Where’s Jasmine
<Amber> Maybe she got sucked into the Vortex too
<Kate> Who knows
<Evanarios> I hope they hurry, but Kate how will you pull it off?
<Kate> Once they are ready I have hacked into the computer itself, so I can literally see through it and I will able to see them
<Sceptile> That smart
<Hak> I am good at that kind of thing, I can help
<Kate> Thanks but this is something I got to do myself
Cayenne signs in
Raikou’ signs in
<Evanarios> Um, are you and Amber in the same room
<Kate> Nope she on the other side of the wall.
<Cayenne> I see the stars are here
<Raikou’> Are you stoned or something?
<Cayenne” I meant Amber and Kate
<Sinko> Where do you actually plan to guide the three teens?
<Cayenne and Raikou’> ???
< Kate>To me then they can help me get out, I hope they bring weapons
<Spazzikarp> Kool weapons
<Sinko> How on earth are they going to do that?
<Amber> We don’t know, and we are also hoping to expose the site so it can be destroyed for good
Jigglyskitt signs in
Yello_Mit signs in
<Jigglyskitt> They are now officially moving onto other pokemon forums as well.
<Sinko> Who?
<Yello_Mit> The hackers, they have moved to my site as well
<Dratini257> Oh no my site!, I gotta go guys
Dratini257 quits
<Yello_Mit> What do you guys plan to do now?
<Jigglyskitt> Yeah what are we going to do
<Amber> We got people on it already so relax
<Yello_Mit> Uh, so it is true that Kate Garven is actually here?
<Kate> It sure is
<Evanarios> But the question is what do they with them
<Amber> I don’t know but I am believed to be related to one of them.
<Spazzikarp> Believed, listen lady ether you are or you aren’t
<Amber> Nobody asked you
<Yello_Mit> Wow, I feel proud to be in your present
<Jigglyskitt> Uh don’t you mean, In your line or something cause you aren't really in her present are you?
<Yello_Mit> Oh whatever, Kate I do whatever it takes to help you
<Kate> Great but don’t worry
Yello_Mit quits
<Kate> I thought I just said don’t worry!

Tim got off his computer and started ways to think about saving Kate
“If I was kidnapped, where would I be?” Tim wondered
“Urg” He said then he went back to Serebii Chatroom

Yello_Mit signs in
<Amber> Its really scary been kidnapped
<Yello_Mit> Kate, Amber where are you held?
<Jigglyskitt> Well welcome back
<Kate> New York city, in the street of Jay street but that all I am saying, why?
<Yello_Mit> See you in a few days
Yello_Mit signs out
AKT signs in
<CKT> Okay we are here Kate, its me Avril, we just put our first initials their,
<Kate> Okay I am ready do the spell, I will able to see you in the screen once it done, you might able to see me as well.

“Okay guys you ready?” Channa said turning to Kirsten and Tahlia “Ready” they both said
They sat in a tight circle as the room that the Computer was in wasn’t so big

Open the whirling winds of Vortex

Take us into the virtual world

So we might siege the day

Swirl us in, Suck us into your world

Take us now!

The three chanted then the Vortex opened “It coming!” Kirsten cried out. The three stood up and walked into the vortex, “Tahlia grabbed the spell book just as they entered, but following them was a blue gameboy cartridge, it was Channa’s Sapphire Game.

Anna sat in the middle of candles which was spread in a circle. The spell she was doing

Witches of Light, Witches of Dark

I ask you to open the Vortex that will lead me to the ones I lost.

Take me to your Virtual world and suck me,

So I may save the day, please let me into your world!

Anna grabbed the spell book and walked towards the vortex
“Here goes nothing” She breathed she walked right into it, but also a Blue cartridge that followed Channa followed her, It was Anna’s own Sapphire game.

Tim found some money in his parents room
“Sorry Mum, Dad but I got to do this” he put them in his bag and then called a cab and went outside.
“Hang Kate Garven, Tim on the way to save you and Amber Benson.”
He was ready for anything that stood in his way, “Let the showdown begin” He shouted. Just then his cab pulled up and he jumped in “Airport please” He told the driver. The cab took off to the Airport. Five teenagers unaware of the dangers that awaits them.

Kate sat in the cold room, only the computer to entertain herself, she waited until she found them and spoke
“Guys can you hear me?” Kate asked
“Loud and clear” the boy Channa voice said back to her.
“Okay just follow my directions and you will be their in no time.
“Uh Channa what that?” Tahlia asked as the blue cartridge glowed, it grew bigger then turned into six different glowing light.

Okay I am done for now guys, that was chapter 3, hope you enjoy, I think I need a rest haven’t had a proper one writing all three chapters, but that what happens when ideas keep coming to me, I just want to write it down before I forget and not waste a moment. Anyways please review, Until Tomorrow, enjoy.
I will put some old faces and new into chapter 4. Also if you weren’t in it don’t worry about it, your turn will be soon, also MS is Magic_Sunburst incase anyone wanted to know and Avril was my Original name (Avril_Lavgine_Sk8ter_boy) Hak is Hakarius also.

In the last chapter at the end I said six lights started glowing from Sapphire, they were going to be six of my First E4 team but Kyogre I didn’t want to use and Waliord is too big
SPP Drama Series
Chapter 4
The room that Amber Benson was been held in was small and shaped like a rectangle, Besides the door which was bolted down at the outside and the sealed shut window the computer was the only thing in the room other then her. The only contact besides people on the net was Kate who was on the other side of the wall.
Amber stood at the window staring out into the streets of New York City, she could just see the ruins of the World Trade Center.
“Why is the world so cruel these days?” Amber wondered out loud, She was starving, her nice figure was becoming more skinner.
“Why won’t you just let us go!” Amber shouted but of course no one heard expect for Kate. She should be trying to be strong for her but it was hard in these conditions.
“God, If Buffy was real she would kick your ass!” Amber shouted once more again “Or Sarah Michelle Gellar for that matter”

Amber got back to her computer and logged on Serebii.net.
“Hey Kate, how our saviours doing?” Amber asked Kate
“Wait on” Kate replied

“For what?” Amber asked as she got onto the chat

Amber signs in
Feather Dancer signs in
<Feather Dancer> Hello, anyone home?
<Feather Dancer> I just came back from my holiday and wanted to surprise you guys
<Feather Dancer> Hello?, what is going on here why is the site and chat so quiet?
<Feather Dancer (Notices the other chat person> Hello Amber person, looks like we are the only two here
<Feather Dancer> I am Sandra one of the mods on this site, you can mostly find me reviewing great fics, well not all are great.
<Feather Dancer> Um Hello anybody home??
<Feather Dancer> Come on don’t make me look like a loner
Amber quits
<Feather Dancer> Oh how mature
<Feather Dancer> Fine all of you be that way
Feather Dancer quits
EvilKecleon signs in
FreakyFlygon signs in
Shining Flygon signs in
Myuu2x signs in
HoudoomTrainer signs in
Some Guy signs in
Secret Mew signs in
Geodude signs in.
Specteron signs in

The four lights glow brighter and formed. One of them was the smallest from all and seemed to float on air.
“Beautifly” she had said as the light faded It was like a butterfly but bigger then any they seen, it had a thin gray body with a long sucker thing and two black eyes with deep blue in them, The wings had colours suck as yellow, blue and red in it.
The next one which seemed bigger then the other three.
“Aggron” She roared. This one had a gray body with metal bands around it arms and legs, and a metal head going down it spine. It had horns on top of his head, watchful blue eyes appeared also.
The next two were about the same height and took the form of an adult human. The first one was gray and had four arms, his body was all muscles and it wore a gold belt on what looks like its pants, It had cream coloured things from it head. “Machamp” He shouted.
The last one Channa recognised all too well, It was red yellow over with cream-coloured hair coming from its head and spitting down two sides.
“Blaziken” Channa said before the pokemon could say anything.

“A what?” Kirsten asked staring at them. The blue cartridge which they came from dropped to the ground.
“The Pokemon from my Sapphire game but how?” He wondered
“Who knows” Tahlia said

“What going on?” Kate voice spoke into the computer
“Don’t worry Kate” Channa called back

“I can see what going on so what are these creatures?” She asked

“Pokemon my dear friend” Channa told her “My Loyal Sapphire Team minus Wailord and Kyogre”

“Blaz, Beau, Agg, Amp” They all said
“This is insane” Kirsten said
“Kirsten, we are in a computer trying to save some Celebrities and members of a site who got sucked into this place and trying to stop another site from killing all Pokemon fans, how more insane can it get?” Tahlia said.

“Channa you are not far from where I am, please hurry” Kate spoke
‘Lets go, I think these pokemon are here to help” Channa said.
They walked on with the four pokemon tailing them.


Anna walked on unaware of her Sapphire cart following her, from the distant she could hear Kate Garven voice directing Channa and others to where she is.
Suddenly her cart started to glow and grabbing her attention “What in the world?”
They formed into three different things, one was small, another was shaped as a human and the third one looked like a big snake.
The small one light faded, it was steel all over and had spikes on its back like it evolved form Aggron, it stood on four little legs and had blue eyes.
The one that had taken Human form became more clearer, It it was brown and had two red boxing gloves on its hands and wore purple clothes and a skirt, and purple shoes. The largest one finally could be seen, it was a Steel snake creature with spikes on its body.
“Steelix?, Aron? And Hitmonchan?” Anna said naming them by one by one.
“Okay, don’t cause too much trouble” she said a little freaked out, but she had bigger worries then three pokemon from her game.
“Hang on guys I am coming” Anna yelled running to the voice of Kate.

Sinko signs in
<Sinko> So how are they doing?
Amber signs in
<Dragonfree> Don’t know yet, Kate hasn’t replied
<Kingdragon> Everyone is so worried the ones who normally go to chat are coming to it
<Amber> Well of course they are, it could mean the end of one of them
<Kingdragon> Yeah, do you think the ones who got sucked in will get saved
<Amber> They got to, and they got to save me, I am becoming weak everyday
<Sinko> Weak?, do you mean they are not giving you anything suck as food or water
<Amber> Sometimes they might give us a small glass of water or a mint
<Sinko> That is outrageous
<Amber> We are mostly just in one small rectangle room with only the computer to entertain us
<Dragonfree> Amber you got to keep going, I don’t know these people very well, especially Avril’s friends but I am pretty sure they will rescue
<Sinko> That girl name Kirsten and Avril are both determined teenagers with a will of their own
Sceptile signs in
<Sceptile> Someone deleted my story!
<Dragonfree> You are the only one, whoever it is and I think its Crystal Latios is doing it they must want to destroy us.
<Sinko> That it I don’t think I have a much of a choice but to demod Crystal Latios
<Dragonfree> Yeah no choice their
Sinko quits
<Kingdragon> This place is more depressing then anything right now
<Dragonfree> Yes, that because we are all in danger
<Amber> I am so sorry for all of this
<Dragonfree> its not your fault, is the pokemonhater site
<Kingdragon> That is it I am giving them a piece of my mind
<Dragonfree> No don’t be stupid!
Kingdragon quits
<Dragonfree? What it is with people these days?
<Amber> You can see the ruins of New York city’s trade center from here
<Dragonfree> That day was the saddest in American’s history
<Dragonfree> Listen I got to go and do stuff, so bye
Dragonfree quits
<Amber> Bye
Feather Dancer signs on
Amber quits
<Feather Dancer> Hello?, I swear their could have been aleast some people on Chat
<Feather Dancer> No one is on Serebii.net well aleast not replying or making threads, not even a spammer
Still quiet
<Feather Dancer> How much I miss this site when I was gone but I come back and nobody is around
Sceptile quits
<Feather Dancer> Sceptile?, Get back here!
Feather Dancer quits
Golden Noctowl signs in
Umberon signs in
Sir Chris signs in
Crystal Mew signs in
Pokemongirl99 signs in
Pokemonscott signs in
ChaosMeowth signs in
Firemaster signs in
Ninetales signs in
<Golden Noctowl> Wonder how they are doing?
<Umberon> I am pretty sure they are fine
<Pokemongirl99> Yeah we have Pokemon behind us
<Pokemonscott> Not literally of course
<ChaosMeowth> Ge.. suck,, into grt Votrexzvgyt
<Crystal Mew> Oh no we lost a another one!
Bluchu signs in
<Bluchu> I hope Avril okay, he one of my good friends
<Firemaster> Don’t know him well but I think he be fine
<Ninetales> Exactly everyone got to stop worrying
<Sir Chris> Easy for you to say
<Bluchu> I know I just got on but I need to get away from the computer for a while, well aleast Serebii or it will remind me how much danger Avril really is in
Bluchu quits
<Ninetales> Me too, I am going to train my Ninetales in Ruby a bit more
Ninetails quits
<Firemaster> Hey that a great idea, my fire pokemon need a boost, Cya
Firemaster quits
<Umberon> Umberon Hang on Mama coming to train ya
Umberon quits
<Pokemonscott> I am going to make a dozen pokemon cards dedicated to Avril and these we may have lost
Pokemonscott quits
<Pokemongirl99> You make it sound like they are dead
Pokemongirl99 quits
<Crystal Mew> Looks like it just us
<Golden Noctowl> I am going to work on my fic more
<Sir Chris> I might as well return to my forums
<Crystal Mew> And I am going shopping with my friends!
Feather Dancer signs in
<Feather Dancer> Ah!, caught you all
Crystal Mew quits
Golden Noctowl quits
Sir Chris quits
<Feather Dancer> if I didn’t know better I think you were avoiding me
Sceptile signs in
RJ Signs in
<Feather Dancer> Ah!, my favourite authors Sceptile and Archangel, How is Legends of Houenn and RJ- Legacy of a Master
<Sceptile (Both doesn’t notices Feather Dancer)> That stupid hacker, wasted about 63 pages of my story
<RJ> He deleted the first half of my story as well including the chapter with RJ’s mum which got one of the best and now its gone
<Sceptile> I wish we could seek revenge on them
<RJ> Hey Avril on it and he loves both of our stories
<Sceptile> Yeah, but how are we going to restore our stories again?
<Feather dancer> I know it’s a bummer huh
<RJ> Hey Sceptile I just got a great idea for a story we both could do together
<Sceptile> Okay you name it
<RJ> Not here, I am going PM to you to go to a chat site where we can have our privacy
<Sceptile> Okay I will be waiting for the PM
Sceptile quits
<RJ> I think you should check out your story too Sandra
RJ quits
<Feather Dancer> Huh??
Feather Dancer quits
Rainbow Pikatiger signs in
The master of pigs signs in
Treecko 93 signs in
MS signs in
Muddy_Mudkip signs in.


“Channa you are almost their can you see a screen with a girl looking through it?” Kate asked
“Yes I can, Come guys just a few more to go” Channa said to the ones behind him. As Aggron ran the ground shook trembled beneath her.
Blaziken just sprinted head and stopped waiting for the others while Beautifly flew along side her.
Machamp kept pace with the three humans.
“We are here” Channa said panting as they stopped in front of a screen, they could see Kate Garven peering at them
“Do we just go through?” Kirsten asked

“Maybe” Tahlia said she then walked head into the screen, a few moments later Tahlia was throw out of the computer crashing into Kate, Beautifly followed her.
“I suppose yes” Channa said as Kirsten and himself prepared to jump through.

A few minutes later everyone including the pokemon got through and Kate was never more thrilled to be finally saved.
‘Get that what it is called to smash through the wall” Kate said to Channa
“Sure thing, Amber hang on” But before anyone made a move a girl came through the computer with a Aron and Hitmonchan.

“Who are you?” Channa asked

“Anna, aka Jasmine and you must be Channa” Anna said smiling with her hand out
But Channa didn’t return it “What in the blazing of Torchics did you think you were doing” Channa scolded her
“Helping your ass maybe” Anna shot back
“You are pretty” Channa replied back
“I left my Steelix back in the computer realm because I knew it was too big” Anna said.

“Where did they came from anyway” Channa asked hoping Anna would have some clues
“I have no idea” Anna replied back
“Less talking, more saving” Amber called from the other side of the wall.
“Aggron smash the wall” Channa commanded his Aggron
Aggron went straight towards the wall with Aron following his Idol.
The others walked through
“Amber!” Kate said exciting finally seeing her friend
“You made it” Amber said weakly
“Get on the computer please and tell them we made it” Channa asked Amber
“Sure thing then we bust our butts out of here” Amber said finally feeling stronger then she ever had been. *Just think, soon I be reunited with my families, and maybe Sarah, Emma, Michelle, Nicholas, James, Anthony and Alyson will also be waiting for me*

Amber signs in
<Amber> Everyone Avril has made it, also with your other friend Jasmine and some help with Pokemon which now I adore totally, soon everything will be back to normal
<Sinko> Halo we are saved
<Dragonfree> I knew they could do it
<GoldenNoctowl> God praise us all
<Sir Chris> Ready, set, Cheer on the heroes
<Dark Scyther> Truly real Pokemon heroes
<Totodile> I can’t believe it they made it
<Spazzikarp> When you stop them, make sure you give them my Oober Splash attack
<Bme> Jasmine what the hell did you think you were doing?, Oh well the more the merrier
Feather Dancer signs on and she waits
<Flaming Torchic> Someone go tell everyone the great news
<Sapphire_Dewgong> Don’t get cocky, the battle far from over
<EvilKecleon> My twin is right They still have to stop them
<Kate_Garven_Rocks> Be careful, especially with my favourite star
<Dark Tyraintar> Go you guys
<Courage> Don’t forget we have all the faith and Courage for you
<Mystic Lioness> Go win the battle for us
<Cayenne> For the name of Serebii.net and every pokemon site
<Dratini257> And for all the Pokemon masters at heart
<Jigglyskitt> Is Micro$oft aka Yello_Mit their with you?
<Amber> What are you talking about sweetie,… Avril says I thought he was still up and about
<Jigglyskitt> Because he asked Kate where she was and she gave the exact address and he hasn’t been seen since
<Amber> Oh god, I don’t know where he is honey but I promise we will keep a sharp eye out
<Amber> We gotta go we have a battle to win
<All> Bye and Good luck!
<Jigglyskitt> and save the others as well.

“So this is where the captors have held Kate Garven” Tim breathed in standing at the corner of Jay street staring at where Kate somewhere is.
“Now the problem is to find which building that stored her in, Unaware to him that a Machamp, none other then its own from one of his games was following him.
Tim noticed a building that seemed to be less crowed then the other ones, and two strange figures just went inside
“Bingo” He said to himself as he noticed the box they were carrying, it said Pokemon haters for Life, and smaller letters, Sucking Pokemon lovers into the virtual world.
“Kate Garven hang on cuz old Tim, also known as Micro$oft and Yello_Mit is on the way” he ran towards the building and trying to keep out of sight as well
‘Machamp!” The four armed pokemon shouted as it leaped in the shadows of New York City.

Okay Chapter 4 is done, I might take another rest, and you might be lucky enough to see chapter 5 by tonight, But might. So did you like it? Next episode we will also see what happened to Imperial Dragon, Serebii and others.
Also so you know I do not own Amber Benson, Kate Garven or the Buffy stars that were mentioned (Sarah Michelle Gellar, James Masters, Alyson Hannighs can’t spell her last name right, Emma Caulfield, Nicholas Brendan, Anthony Sweart Head and Michelle Traiffgle, don’t know how to spell that as well)they own themselves.
I also do not own Sandra, Tim, Anna and everyone who took part in this story also own themselves. Kirsten and Tahlia also own themselves, The Pokemon is own by the people who created them but I own pokemonhater and the site(The idea of it), Serebii owns Serebii.net. The only other thing I own besides my Sapphire game and computer is myself ^_^
This was 9 almost 10 pages along, Please review and wait for Chapter 5

If you see your first name in this story I got them from the thread what your real name?
SPP Drama Series
Chapter 5

Scott, and known as serebii.net Imperial Dragon, as the name he goes by in serebii.net with others had walked miles in the computer realm hoping someone would save them.
*Aleast we have Joe, our fearless leader* He thought
Dragon noticed Maggie, in otherwords Crystal Latios walking behind, looking very scared
“Hey Maggie, it okay, we will somehow get out of here” Dragon comforted her thought it wasn’t really his style
“It not me, I am worried about these actress, they must be so scared”

“Yeah I know what you mean” Scott replied

“Hey Joe, do you know where we are going yet?

“No” Came the reply from Lara, known as Mystic Lioness.
“I am cold” Maggie said “Here” Scott said taking off his jacket that he wore when he walking to the shops before the vortex sucked him in. He put the jacket on Maggie

“Thanks” Maggie replied in a small voice.


“Blaziken!, Hitmonchan!” The two human-shaped fighting pokemon shouted as they busted the bolted door

“Lets go” Channa said as they went out.
“Quiet” Amber said
“Too quiet I say” Kirsten replied

“I think the Elevators are this way” Amber told them pointing around the corner

“Wait, Elevators? We are in a building?” Tahlia questioned (A/N, Sorry again for the misspelling)

“What did you expect, this is New York after all” Anna replied.

The Steel boxes that transported people to another level of the building stood their

“Press the button” Kate said Amber instantly hit the turn on button.
Suddenly a Alarm signal was actived
“Oh crap they installed Alarms” Amber yelled over the wailing alarms.
“Aggron hit the metal door, we have to find a way out of here” Channa ordered his pokemon as they heard footsteps rushing upstairs from the Emergency Exit.
“Aggron!” She yelled and she bashed the doors they broke revealing a wide space where the Elevator used to be.
“I think we should jump” Amber said

“No, are you crazy!” Kate exclaimed
“It’s the only way” Amber agrued

“Then we jumped” Channa declared for them
“Channa we are so not doing that” Tahlia tried to reasoned
“Do you have a death wish or something” Channa snapped, they were quiet, “Then we are jumping” Channa replied he stood back and did a leap into the void.
“Wait for me!” Kirsten cried out jumping down

“God, if you love us you will let us live” Anna said to the sky well the roof and then she too jumped into the shift just as the door opened to reveal a man in black.
“Kate go!” Amber ordered her
“No I am staying with you!” Kate protested
Amber lost it and grabbed Kate by the collar “Get down their now!” Amber growled then she pushed Kate into the hole. She turned to face her captor with both of her hands up balled into fists, prepared to fight.
“Come here stupid girl” The guy roared rushing at her Amber with all her strength punched him before he reached her then she swirled around on one leg while the other was out and knocked him down.
They both got up, “Aggron, Machamp, Blaziken, Beautifly, Hitmonchan, Aron” All the pokemon growled
“Oh no pokemon, eww” He said disgusted
“What a sissy, if you are my captor aleast act like a real person, I am so ashamed” Amber said
Looking at each pokemon she said “Take care of him for me” with that she did a flying leap into the Elevator hole.
The man looked around, and not one pokemon not even Beautifly look happy. “Oh sh”

Machamp!” Machamp had cross-chopped another lot of guards in the building, Tim had soon discovered that his own Machamp was following him and asked him to help him.
“Good job Machamp” Tim said they were near the Elevators and for some reasons lots of people were running up the stairs.
“Lets see we are the twelfth floor and the last one is 17, I suppose that where Kate and Amber are” Tim said to Machamp,
Suddenly he heard some loud bangs from inside the metal door “Looks like will have to fight once again” Tim said. “Mac” Machamp said showing him he ready for whatever comes next.
The doors opened but nothing was their
“Okay maybe not” Tim said but spoke too soon five teenagers and one young adult jumped through the top by one.
“Um hello?” Tim said confused, a butterfly came down as well and floated above them.
“Who are you?” The male and the only male of the bunch asked.
‘Uh Tim,” Tim replied then he realised he was also talking to Kate Garven, which meant the adult was Amber, and the Male was Avril, known as Channa, but he didn’t know if he knew the other three.

“Channa?” Tim asked to make sure

“What, how do you know my name?” Channa questioned

“Its me Yello_Mit, Micro$oft?” Tim replied, some footsteps were heard

“Quick get in” he ordered dragging Tim into the shift Machamp also jumped in making it more crowded, as the metal door close they could just see some more people running towards them. Kate pressed the first floor button and prayed they would make it out safety.
Tim wondered who the three remaining girls are ‘Who are these, hotties” Tim asked

“Oh this black haired girl with the cheesy grin is Kirsten and her friend with brown hair is Tahlia while the other one is none other then Anna, Jasmine” Channa told him

“Jasmine, what she doing here?” Tim asked

“That what I was wondering and now I am wondering why you are here” Channa said
“I just couldn’t sit around and wait, I wanted to do something” Tim replied

“Well it all over now” Kirsten said as they reached the first floor, Channa’s Machamp and Blaziken jumped onto the top as they finished, Aggron was tumbling down the stairs so she wouldn’t crush the good guys, but any bad guys in her way and they would be killed.
Hitmonchan and Aron was next, as Hitmonchan joined the other two Aron fell into Anna’s arms successfully.
“Aron” He said happily been in his trainers arms.
The doors opened but standing in their way was a whole bunch of people with swords.
“Looks like we have to fight them too” Amber said

“I am not a good fighter thought” Tahlia said a little scared

“No need to panic” Kate said

“Kill them all” The first one said, they were dressed like ninjas.

Channa noticed a room with a computer, the logo was the Serebii sign.

They all charged at them but the ground started to shake “What is going on?” one of them asked “Whatever it is, it coming from the stairs” The second one said
“AGGRROONN” The cry was heard as the door was busted opened and a gray rolling boulder smashed into some of them and rolled into the wall
“Aggron” Aggron finished as she got up and snarled at them.
“Don’t ever understatement the power of Pokemon” Channa said smugly.
“Yeah we can handle that” the second one said.
The trio moved out of the Evalator. Machamp and Beautifly stood to fight, Aron jumped out of Anna arms and growled at them.
‘We can handle that” They laughed

Blaziken, Machamp and Hitmonchan took that moment to reveal themselves. Another rumble was heard from the stairs.
“And that and whatever coming down the stairs” The first one chuckled.
“Who is that?” Anna asked, all their pokemon were standing their “Steelix!” A silver steel snake roared as it smashed into the room.
“Steelix!” Anna exclaimed glad that her pokemon took the chance to drop by.
“See you all in hell!” Someone screamed, a man held a Machine that was the thing that sucked people into it. on it was a computer that was on Serebi.net The Machine crackled and roared to life but something was wrong.
“Oh no, everyone run!” The first ninja cried but everyone in the entire 17 stories building and the Machine itself was zapped into the realm including Channa, Tim, Kirsten, Anna, Tahlia, Amber and Kate not to mentioned all of their pokemon.

Sinko signs in
Bluchu signs in
Eternaldarkness signs in
<Evanarios> Hey guys, any word?
<Sinko> No ever since Amber left I haven’t heard a single thing
<Obsidian Blade> They would tell us when everything okay right?
<Jigglyskitt> Yeah they would, do you know there are only a few members online right now
<Sinko> Oh my god I just found out, that the site that causing us trouble is been investigated.
<Obsidian Blade> It about time public finds out
<Bluchu> There are whole heaps of thread with people saying they are leaving and not coming back
<Eternaldarkness> Not many people can hold it any longer, heaps of other sites have been abandoned also
<Lime> Does it really matter, I mean they won’t able to escape obviously
<Obsidian Blade> You know I really think they should of got the police involved it was too dangerous for them to do it
<Jigglyskitt> Aleast they together, unlike Micro$oft who went out alone
Murgatroyd signs in
<Murgatroyd> Hello people
<Sinko> Hi, I am going to make a thread to see if anyone gotten sucked in their computers
<Evanarios> They are only like twenty to thirty members online and none of them are guests so I don’t think it will work
A few minutes pass but no answer
<Bluchu> Sinko?
<Obsidian Blade> I think he got sucked in
<Murgatroyd> That just great isn’t it, we are all disappearing
Bluchu quits
Obsidian Blade quits
Murgatroyd quits
<Evanarios> Please someone, make this all end, before tonight
Evanarios quits
Sceptile signs in
RJ signs in
<Sceptile> I think I recovered some of my backup copy
<RJ> So did I, that means our stories can live
<Sceptile> So can our Sceptiles
<RJ> And don’t forget Pidgeots
<Sceptile> I truly hope Avril can pull it off
<RJ> Yeah me too, you know I heard their now a reward for whoever finds Kate Garven and Amber Benson
<Sceptile> How much?
<RJ> Only uh about ten million dollars
<Sceptile> Wow, Avril, Anna and Avril two friends will be rich
<RJ> Yeah lucky them, I kill to have that
<Sceptile> I wish we could help
<RJ> I know but there is nothing to do but sit and wait
<Sceptile> Or get sucked into the computers
<RJ> Hmm
<Sceptile> Well I am going to continue on with Legends of Houenn
<RJ> I think I do with the same with Legacy of a Master, Cya later Scep
<Sceptile> Bye RJ, I am going to do a chapter of Avril’s story Conquering Houenn, for him
<RJ> That nice, Bye
<Sceptile> Cya later
RJ quits
Sceptile quits.

Imperial Dragon and Crystal Latios followed the others, Sinko, also known as Craig had been sucked into the realm not long ago was walking besides Serebii talking in low whispers.

Loud noises could be heard, and the cries of an Aggron, Hitmonchan, Aron, Steelix, Blaziken, Beautifly and two Machamps could be heard.

“What is that?” Xander, a member of the forums, Xander was the name he went by.
“Don’t know but lets check it out” Sinko said
Everyone started running towards it until it could be seen. Lots of people with swords and one Machine behind them stood to face, six teens, an young adult and eight pokemon.
“Its Kate and Amber, the others must be Avril, Anna, and Avril’s friend and I think Micro$oft” Crystal Latios exclaimed, They were ready to battle, The final test was to be done, who would win, and who would lose. The tension was building up until one of the ninjas shouted
“Attack!”


I know that was shorter then usual, it was 7 pages long, sorry, I wanted to leave the battle for chapter 6. I hope you enjoy, this is the last chapter today, their might be another one waiting for you by the end of tomorrow night (Keep in mind I live in Australia).
Note to: Sinko, Serebii, Jasmine, Micro$oft, Imperial Dragon, Xander (If that was his real name), Crystal Latios and Mystic Lioness, I hope you didn’t mind me using your real names when you weren’t at the computer in the story, if so, tell me and I won’t do it. Please review, the next chapter will/could be up by tomorrow night, If I think about it I will find a picture of Kate and Amber so you know what they look like, you can easily go to Kate_Garven_Rocks signature and look their cause she has two pictures of Kate, Bye for now.

SPP Drama Series
Chapter 6

The ninjas charged at group “Time to shine your powers pokemon!” Channa told his pokemon
“Beautifly, Stun spore!” He commanded the butterfly
“Beaut-FLY!” The pokemon cried as it released a shower of orange stuff and sprayed onto the first waves of attackers. They were instantly paralysed. “Smart, but its just a butterfly” One of them said, probably the leader
“Destroy the pokemon” The pokemonhater said

“Oh no you don’t, Machamp Cross-chop the two ninjas that are going Beautifly way” Tim called out, Machamp rushed at full speed at the two men, with two of his arms glowing that the ninjas didn’t have time to react “Machamp!” The gray fighting pokemon cried as it smashed the ninjas making them sulk to the floor.
“Channa, there are more coming” Anna told him “I think we are in trouble” He replied as more people came from the portal.

“Not beaten thought, Steelix Iron tail!” Anna ordered her gray snake. “Lix!” It replied as it tail glowed white and smashed into the bad guys.
“This is not over!” The leader shouted merely escaping from Steelix Iron tail
“You want a bet, as I told one of you people in SPP Chat, The bad guy.." “Always loses” The leader finished off
‘You are that idiot on chat” Channa exclaimed.

“We believe you have something that belongs to us” The leader growled, Channa was confused “You hate pokemon, why would they belon… Oh them” Channa realised what he was talking about.

“There is no way in blazing hell are we going to give up the actresses” Kirsten said getting what he meant also.

“Give them up and we will let you free and never bother pokemon lovers again” The leader bargained

“Uh nuh” Kirsten said

“You are making a big mistake” He warned

“We are willing take that chance” Tahlia shot back

“Puh, what do kids know” He said

“A lot more then you do” Anna joined in

“They aren’t kids, they are the greatest Heroes and Pokemon masters that have lived” Amber said

“Heroes?, Pokemon Master?, you are turning into one of these freak nerds

“Yeah, which means we are no use to you” Kate piped up

“And damn proud of it” Anna said, Kirsten and Tahlia went quiet as the leader called them nerds

“You may be attractive but you are nerds” The leader said only he was looking at the two girls and licking his lips

“Back off pal, they are with me, they don’t even go on the computers that much” Channa told him in an angry tone

“Then we are they here?” The leader smirked

“Okay smartass I just had enough, Blaziken!, Blaze kick!” Channa shouted but the Blaziken didn’t move “Oh right, Kristen Blaze kick!” Channa commanded her “Agg? Aggron asked as her name was also Kristen.
“No not you, you don’t know Blaze kick do you” Channa told her.

“You named two of your pokemon Kristen?” Maggie questioned

“Because he obsessed with the real Kristen at school” Kirsten replied

“Oh, I think you mentioned her to me once before” Anna said
“He told me, it was in the Love thread, and my own love thread” Scott spoke up

“Okay,, Okay, sheesh what is this gang up on Channa day?, I try someone else, Happy Silver wind!” Channa called out

“Happy?, why don’t just call it, I dunno Nerd, or Mary-Sue!” Kirsten said

“Kirsten, be quiet for a second so I can do this” Channa told her, Kirsten tried to keep a straight face but couldn’t hold it “Come on, don’t you think the name Happy makes it one of these people who are nothing but happy people” Kirsten laughed.
The others, including the Ninjas all laughed as well “Beautifly!” The bug pokemon shouted using gust on everyone expect her trainer and her friends, but Tim’s Machamp and Anna’s pokemon were also blown back a little.

“Okay, we done” Kirsten said a little worried that Beautifly might take it too seriously as she still didn’t know much about the world of pokemon.

“I am not, that why pokemon is so babyish” The Leader laughed

“That is it pal, you kidnap me and Amber and treat us like hell, insult pokemon, and make them look like fools themselves, and suck others into this virtual realm, I am not going to take it anymore” Kate yelled

“What you going to do, Jade!, cry like a baby” He chuckled
“Don’t you insult my character, Blaziken, Fire, Uh Blast?” Kate asked Channa pokemon
“Blaz,” she nodded “Blaziken!” She roared as she let out a fiery blast of fire which shaped like a cross

“Oh yeah, I have to call you Kristen, but when a famous person calls you by whatever, you do it” Channa said

“Get out of the way!” The leader shouted as the fiery hot blast came at them.
They ran, only few turning into ashes after getting hit with it.
“That it, you are dead” The leader growled, he grabbed a knife from his jeans and threw it at Channa like an expert
“No!, Small butterfly creature use protect, or something!” Amber cried
Beautifly knew what she meant and flew down to her trainer, instantly a green veil protected her and Channa from the knife.

“Steel monster called Kristen, use Earthquake!” Tahlia commanded Aggron
“Would everyone stop using my pokemon please” Channa said

“Aggron” The female monster cried as it stomped her feets making the ground shatter beneath them

The ninjas fell on their knees. “The Machine the only one way ticket out of here” Amber yelled pointing at it
“Its must be destroyed for all of us to make it to safety” Kate also said

“You foolish humans, that Earthquake will ripple into our world as well as cause much Chaos” The leader said

“Oh” was all they could say.

Jigglyskitt signs in
Rubydelcatty signs in
Drago1489 signs in
Eternaldarkness signs in
Kingdragon signs in
Celebii signs in
Flaming Torchic signs in
Hak signs in

<Sapphire_Dewgong> Nice for you to join us
<Flaming Torchic> Did everyone feel that, their was an Earthquake
<Kingdragon> I thought we were the only ones
<Rubydelcatty> Oh my god, maybe it’s the sign of the end of the world
<Celebii> Maybe, we had it here too
<Hak> Join the club
<Jigglyskitt> Kingdragon you are alright, I thought you never return when you said you give the pokemonhaters a piece of your mind, I felt an Earthquake as well
<Celebii> Everyone just got to stay calm
<Drago1498> Easy for you to say
<eternaldarkness> It didn’t feel so big thought, so maybe we are just in for a small one
<Jigglyskitt> Have you forgotten we are from all parts of the world, an Earthquake just doesn’t rumble like that in planet earthquake
<Rubydelcatty> maybe it was Groudon?
<Drago1498> Not likely
<Rubydelcatty> Yes, and it not likely that people get sucked into their computers is it?
<Drago1498> I rest my case
<Sapphire_Dewgong> Maybe it was just a one time event
Feather Dancer signs in
<Celebii> I don’t like it when unexplained things happen, its scary
<Feather Dancer> Oh my god, did you guys hear, the earthquake wasn’t in just one place, it was all over the world, from Australia to Zekuka if their such thing as Zekuka
<Flaming Torchic> Now its officially time to panic don’t you guys think

“Okay we just going to have to do better” Channa replied

“Yes, we are so smart are we, see whatever happens here affects the outside world” The leader snarled

“Aggron, Kirsten I mean retreat until we need you” Channa told the pokemon
“Aggron” The pokemon agreed.

‘We can deal without ground moves” Anna replied
“Hitmonchan!, use Fire punch” She ordered her punching pokemon “HitmoonChan!” he cried as he striked towards one of the ninjas
“Ahh!, It burns!” he cried in pain

“Beautifly, Sleep powder now!” Channa commanded the butterfly “Beauti” She said as she sprinkled dust onto some more ninjas who instantly fell asleep.

“Kate we got to get to that machine” Amber said to her

“Count of three we run, One, Two, Three!” Amber yelled as they ran to it

‘No you don’t” The leader said ‘Get them!” He ordered three other ninjas
“Kristen use Sky uppercut” Channa yelled
“Blaze” Blaziken shouted as she ran at full speed, she lifted her leg up and kicked both of the men making them fly

Amber and Kate got to the machine only to confront two more ninjas with swords.
“You deal with one I deal with the other” Amber replied to Kate
“What, I don’t know how to f, Ah” Kate avoided the sword that barely missed her by an inch.

“Come on big boy, show me what a real ninja is” Amber taunted her guy.

“Okay” He replied he slashed his sword at her but at the exact moment Amber caught it with her two hands
“And I show you what a real actress is” She replied and then kicked him in the groin.
“Owie” He moaned, Amber now held the sword in her hand.

“Not nice to be picked on, you were the person who kidnapped me in the first place, I believe you threat me with the sword” Amber said the men still winced In pain.
“Stand up like a true warrior” Amber commanded him but still no response, ‘Get up I said” Amber yelled
“Alright, you are dead girl” He growled Amber hit him over the head with the sword.
“Sorry I was just doing what you did to me, and my head is still sore from the sword, not nice it is” Amber taunted him glad to be in power.

“Am-Ber, ne-ed help” Kate cried out choking.

‘Hey leave her alone” Amber yelled at Kate’s captor. She swiftly slashed his arm
“You snob” He said he got ready to aim a punch to her but Kate tackled him to the ground and started pluming him.
“How you feel, Huh, feeling totally helpless while lots of fan are scared for you, felling like you are going to die!” Kate said outraged

“Kate stop, he dead already” Amber told her but she didn’t stop
“Kate!” Amber said pulling her up.

“Its okay sweetie, we are okay” Amber comforted her
The first guy sneaked up behind Amber.
“Say your prays” He said quietly
“Goodnight” Amber replied puzzling him but still creep closer “Urh!” He yelled in pain, the sword Amber held was at her band pointing straight which he had walked into.

“And say your prays” Amber replied turning around.
She walked to the Machine ‘No, don’t please” The pokemonhater begged

“Sorry pal but I say we have spent enough time here”.

The leader pulled out his gun and pointed it straight at Amber
“Not a chance in hell girl”

“Amber!” Channa shouted as he saw the gun

‘No!” Kate screamed,
Amber watched as he pulled the trigger seeing that her death had come, but suddenly a blast of fire, two small white lights, a huge blast of white light, a coloured beam and a shot of brown mud of some sort and and another blast of light hit the machine as the bullet was fired out of the gun causing the Earth to move.

GoldenNoctowl signs in
EvilKeckleon signs in
Myuu2x signs in
Lime signs in
Kiori signs in
FoxMccloud signs in
Brinstar signs in
HoundoomTrainer signs in
Fab signs in
RJ signs in
Sceptile signs in
<Lime> Its has been three days after the two mysterious Earthquakes and four days since Avril and others disappeared for life
<Brinstar> Aleast their one good news, The police have finally ended the pokemonhaters site and found their location, They did find a bracelet belonging to an Amber Benson and engagement ring belong to Kate Garven but neither have been found.
<Sceptile> Weird, looks like they didn’t make it
<RJ> Aleast police have taken them away, now their nothing to fear.
<Fab> But it came with a cost
<Foxmccloud> Yeah it came with the biggest of them all
<Sceptile> Avril was my loyal reader
<RJ> And mine as well
<Jigglyskitt> Not to mention we lost Micro$oft as well
<Houndoom> I sorry about your boyfriend
<Jigglyskitt> Um, I am a guy
<Houndoom> Oh god I am so sorry, I thought you were a girl
<Jigglyskitt> All is forgiven, since I am too much in grief
<Fab> Is it right to grieve for the ones we only knew from computers
<GoldenNoctowl> Yes it is because they risked their lives for us, and for the stars.
Kate_Garven_Rocks signs in
<Kate_Garven_Rocks> Any sign of them?
<Cayenne> No, they dissappeared for good
Flaming Torchic signs in
MS signs in
ChaosMeowth signs in
Wing_Zero signs in
<Wing_Zero> The hackers are now far and gone
Bluchu signs in
<Bluchu> I have a suggestion, lets dedicate a forum to these we lost
<Wing_Zero> Who going to be in charge of the site now?
Wolf Goddness signs in
Specteron signs in
Spazzikarp signs in
<Feather Dancer> And everyone who was on Avril buddy list is safe too
<Specteron> Not everyone, some like Mystic Lioness and Imperial Dragon are gone
<Wolf Goddness> And no appearances of Jasmine ethier
<Spazzikarp> The person in Crystal Latios username is gone, I wish I could been part of some help
<Eternaldarkness> I just put a 5 minute silence for these guys
<Kate_Garven_Rocks> Amber and Kate along with everyone else were too young to die
<Bluchu> Especially these two teenagers who didn’t know much about pokemon but still willing to help out a friend
<Jigglyskitt> I don’t know if I can handle this anymore
Dratini927 signs in
<Dratini927> I miss them already
CKT Signs in
Kate signs in
Amber Signs in
Jasmine Signs in
Crystal Latios signs in
Imperial Dragon signs in
Xander signs in
Mystic Lioness signs in
Serebii signs in
Sinko signs in
No one noticed these people who signs in
<Feather Dancer> This is the saddest day of Serebii history
<Specteron> we have lost our leader, lost our friends, and lost our actresses who use their time to entertain us on TV, and lost two strangers
<CKT> I am flattered everyone cares about us
<Sapphire Dewgong> Yeah everyone does
<Flaming Torchic> Avril, loved Torchics I am going to make a million of them to him and Amber, and make an Articuno for Kate
<Amber> That sweet
<Kate> How kind
<Serebii> I never knew my forums could be this loving
<Xander> Their more to be seen on the boards as well
<Jasmine> How sweet of you guys
<Crystal Latios> And how sweet for Hak to hack into my username to get it back
<Imperial Dragon> People don’t see how much they loved that person until they think they are gone
<Bluchu> What do you mean by think
<Mystic Lioness> Thank you for caring
<CKT> Tahlia everyone even cares about us, the strangers
<CKT> What in the blazing of Torchics is going on Here?
<Imperial Dragon> I am a gothic, and I love Sandra?
<Serebii> I am the head hencho!?
<Sinko> I don’t care about you think pal?
<Kate> Follow your dreams and never
<Amber> Let it go,
<Crystal Latios> Its okay sweetie?
<Jasmine> Hehe, I am sweet but like to close threads?
<Mystic Lioness> Read the damn rules, you aren’t getting a chance of joining the club now?
<Xander> This broken heart shall never mend, and I shall never breathe?
<Bluchu? Wait a minute
Micro$oft signs in
<Miro$oft> Hey guys, Machamp rocks?
<Jigglyskitt> Don’t they sound like
<Specteron> Oh my god
<GoldenNoctowl> They are alive!
<Wing_Zero> And the actresses are here
<Kate_Garven_Rocks> With their witty comments!.

*Flashback, three days ago*
The bullet was seconds from tearing through Amber heart but suddenly a white blinding light had blinded them all, when it was clear, Police was storming out of the building and into the streets, in handcuffs were the pokemonhaters.

“We are alive!” Amber cheered as she saw where they were, in Anna’s and Channa’s hands were the Sapphire cartridge which held their champions who helped them on the way.
Also a Ruby cartridge layed on Tim’s hand, in the champion of Machamp, they had all attacked the Machine in time before Amber’s death sentence was due.

They all stood outside waving goodbye, Scott, Maggie, Craig, Joe, Xander and three others quickly left to call their parents.
“Well this is goodbye for now” Anna said
“I hate goodbyes” Kirsten replied. “It just for now, we can talk to each other on the net” Tim replied
“And we will tried to come on sometimes to talk as well, I think I gotten to love pokemon, so has Kate” Amber said

“Got that right, they were the ones who save us in the end” Kate replied
“Wait, we can go to Australia together, we live somewhere near Brisbane, all except Amber” Channa said remembering Tim and Anna were also from the same country.

“Bye Amber” Anna and Tim said as they hopped in the cab that was waiting, and waited for the others to say their byes?”

“It been pleasure doing business with you” Kirsten told Amber before she went to sit next to Tim in the back.

“Bye Amber” Tahlia said with a smile and she went to sit next to Kirsten.
“Channa we will wait for you at the airport, their not enough room in the cab” Anna said as the cab drove off, as soon as they left Kate stopped another cab.
“Bye Amber, thanks for keeping me intact” Kate said hugging the older star
“And thank you for helping me through as well” Amber replied bye
“Take care sweetie, bye” Amber waved as Kate hopped in the second cab.

“And Channa, where would I be without you?” Amber asked
“I don’t know, but we finally saved you and completed our mission” Channa replied, they both hugged for a long time.
“I am going to miss you the most” Amber said getting teary “I miss you, don’t you have to catch a plane too?” Channa asked
“No, I call Sarah and tell her to pick me up” Amber said

“Goodbye Amber Benson, Until we met again” Channa said he opened the cab door.

“Good Luck with Kristen, and becoming an actor, I hope we can do a flim together some day” Amber called out

“Thank you Amber” Channa called back as the cab drove off, Amber waved them into the distant. She then headed to a payphone.

Two days later and they arrive at Brisbane airport,
“Bye, farewell until another time” Anna said as she walked into the distant.
“It was nice knowing you guys” Tim said shaking Channa hand.
“Same with you, see you on Serebii” Channa replied Tim went off in his way.
“I better go, your parents picking you up from here?” Kate asked
“Yeah, we be fine” Channa replied
“Bye Channa, Kirsten, Tahlia, thanks for saving my life and I look forward to the day when I get to do a flim with you, Kirsten and Amber” The blonde actress said
“Bye Kate, I will always be your number one fan” Channa said, all three teens waved Kate on to her destination and waited for Channa mum to pick him up.

*End of Flashback*

<Kate> So that how we ended up here
<Amber> Sarah was so pysched when she picked me up
<Kate> Same with Christie
<CKT> Our parents were so scared that we went missing
<Jasmine> My mum threw a party for me to make so I don’t run away again
<Specteron> Did you tell them that
<Serebii> I speak for all of us including Amber and Kate, they only thought we were kidnapped by the company site but not that we were sucked into the computers.
<Amber> anyway we came on just to tell you we are alive
<Xander> But we gotta go, bye
<All of the ones on chat> Bye!, don’t forget to visit
<Wing_Zero> Especially you Serebii
Serebii quits
CKT quits
Amber quits
Kate quits
Mystic Lioness quits
Xander quits
Micro$oft quits
Jasmine quits
Sinko quits
Crystal Latios quits
Imperial Dragon quits

The end (For now)

Wow this chapter was a whooping 12 pages, my longest yet for a fanfic (Almost 13 pages) Okay there is going to be a sequel coming so its not the end but I don’t know what kind of sequel this one will be, so guys help me out please. Don’t forget to review.
And Amber and Kate, Kirsten and Tahlia will make a comeback in the next sequel as well, and we might be seeing more of Channa friends, and Kate and Amber friends and Ex-co-star as they aren’t in the shows they used to be in anymore, I hope you enjoyed that.

Well, I can't say I read it very well, but you seriously need to punctuate a bit more. All paragraphs must end in a period, closing quote, exclamation mark or question mark, and before a closing quote, you must place a question mark, exclamation mark, comma or period. Of course, this does not apply to the chat scenes.

The whole plot seemed a bit weird, with some Pokémon haters sucking Pokémon fans through a vortex and some actresses appearing in the chat.

But lastly... you got me VERY OOC. ¬¬ While a lot of people don't punctuate what they say in the chat, I do. I don't confuse "their" and "there" either, and I usually type I'm, we're, etc. rather than I am and we are. You make everybody type like you, which is not good because your way of typing is unique and not everybody types the same way.

And this...

<Dragonfree> That day was the saddest in American’s history

Just... what the heck? American history? I'm not even American, why would I be saying that? Besides, if I ever mentioned the saddest day in American history, I'd be referring to the day Bush became president, not 9/11. Actually, I don't think I'd have said anything there. Overall, you made me a lot more talkative than I actually am. Most of the lines I said were at points I wouldn't consider worth saying anything at. Besides that I'm practically never in the chat.

Also, why are you posting this here? It's about Serebii.net and you're posting it at Bulbagarden? Doesn't make much sense...

I wrote this fic like a month ago and my writing pro improved a little then, Oh, well i didn't know that, And i think Howard is worse then Bush, but then again thier both the same, they put war on Irag and put innocents on the crossfire and such. Well i didn't really know that you were or weren't talkative sorry, But i got alot of people wrong, like i accdently put Jigglyskitt as a she, and i am pretty sure not everything is true about Amber and Kate, i mean maybe they aren't that much of a fighter or a yeller.
Um what does OOC stand for?
and i thought i spread my story more, you know see what others beside Serebii.net think,

Um i also had another idea for a further story in my series, Um i was thinking of using Bulbagarden.net as well in a far espoide (I already got esp 4-7 figured ou), but not without this site permission

OOC means "Out of Character"