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    Still only partway through this, but in blue's battle with erika, shouldn't gyarados have lasted longer? it's part flying, so it should only have taken neutral damage

    my theory ab blaine

    he's obviously been surfing around the coast too much if you catch my drift

    100 chapters in two days, 2 times nearly brought to tears(oaks words to blue and maxwell's departure) and my final opinion of this story
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    damn well worth joining this site for
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    "Too bad you've already had yours..."

    That was so horribly brilliant!

    This story is just truly amazing, really! I'll never be able to crush Blue in RBY,FRLG, or HGSS ever again! Well, not without the blood curdling battle cries anyway...

    Again, very well done! Onto Dragon Days!

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    This was absolutely incredible. I was addicted the whole way through and the last sentence made me smile for some horrible reason. I guarantee that if all fanfiction writers were as good as you, I would never be bored again. Nice work! :)
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    I just finished reading this in two 12 hour periods, I liked it and I might try to write the yellow version of rival's story, but I'm not good at finishing my fanfics, in fact I've never finished one but I'll try to finish this one. stupid run-on sentences, I have horrible grammar.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Surferboy View Post
    Sequel? =3
    Gama stated himself that his schedule prevents him from writing much, but if it makes you feel any better, there's no rule against someone else picking up the torch!
    Last edited by Mr. Popo; 20th January 2013 at 04:23 PM.
    Pecking order

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    While I doubt that Gama will see this...

    The story is completely awesome! I never looked at things from the rival's view! I hope this doesn't keep me from fighting rivals in the games...

    I also find it funny how the anime Blue (though his name is Gary there) is clearly a jerk. I haven't watched a lot of that, but of what I've seen, I always had this view on Blue since. It's funny that I make this connection even though they have different names and Red isn't Ash here. Meh...

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    Omg! Magikarp! It's so amazing! I want one! (sarcasm) Lol.

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