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    Yeah, uh, unfortunately, ending in a cliffhanger like that is going to be hell for my rating. XD

    Of course, I've already submitted the vote for your category, so it doesn't really matter anyway.
    The word "quadragonal" is the only word with "dragon" in it where "dragon" is not a root word. That makes it awesome.

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    Wow. What an ending, GM. When you mentioned Honchkrow, I was thinking you were going to have Giovanni end up in Tohjo Falls, like in HGSS, but I was surprised when you didn't. I'll definitely be reading Dragon Days!

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    Amazing finale to the best fic on this site! Gastly's Mama, you are an inspiration to us all. Honestly, I try to measure myself against your greatness.

    Can't wait until the next story!

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    I better catch up... I'm currently at Chapter 45... In 3 Days :S

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    Amazing. Just amazing.

    Now let's get Rival's Story to 1,000 posts before it's moved to the archive!
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    i...it ended?

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    Fantastic chapter as always, Gama. I've taken the liberty of moving this fic to the Archive, BTW.

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    So can we still post comments on here in the archive?

    Edit: Okay good =D
    Last edited by Iris White; 16th October 2010 at 02:08 PM. Reason: Checking to see if we could still post on here

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    Pro'ly, plenty of people'll still wanna comment on the brilliant fic, and I doubt the admins will disallow that =P

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    Ah, Rival's Story is finally in the archives :') Great job on completing the fic G-Mama. Truly the Writer's Workshop's pride and joy. Not many fics that are started here get finished, but you not only managed to finish a 100 chapter fic, but a high-quality fic. Kudos G-Mama, I hope to see good things from you in the future :)

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    Curse you for ending on a cliffhanger! That's really mean :P

    But this story has been a joy to read, and this ending was very exciting as well! You are a very good writer, and I can't wait to see what your next big story is going to be :) Thanks for writing this, it was a truly great story, with a magnificent, movie like ending, so cheers :D

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    This is Sith Droideka, with my half-way report. In one day I have read chapters 1-52, and I'm hooked. The grammar isn't the best, but your interpretation is wonderful and I rather liked Red becoming a ruthless trainer (although I don't see how it's easier to make a pokémon hate me- I've never had that problem). That part with grabbing Pidgeot's leg was pure genius! And Blue's constant attitude is great. Yeah, he's still a jerk, but at it's really hard to hate him. I will now go and read chapters 53-100.
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    Discussion is allowed in here for the next three days, due to author request.

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    Finishing with a one-liner and a cliffhanger, you... you...

    I suppose it's slightly saddening to see Rival's Story in the Archives section, but it deserves to be preserved for all to see. This has got to be a prime example of what a Pokémon fanfic should be like. It's been quite the ride, and thanks for tying up some of the loose ends at least. The real fun about the ending is grasping at straws regarding the aftermath.

    Thanks, Gama. It's been fun.

    When's Dragon Days coming out? :3
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    i guess i'll put a link to that fic i'm planning on doing one day

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    All of your replies are really making me smile and thanks, Jabberwocky, for allowing discussions for now.

    I'm not sure when Dragon Days is going to come out just yet, I want to take a little break first. Also, I've started work on a few one shots that I'm going to release first. Basically, don't hold your breath, but it shouldn't be toolong.

    And again, thank you so much for all your replies, it's really nice to see everyone commenting on Rival's Story. I've really enjoyed writing it so it's lovely to see that people have enjoyed reading it too!

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