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    No one's killing any messengers here, dudes, move along, move along.


    A lone detective takes it upon himself to solve the murder of a young woman, willingly diving into the dangerous web of conspiracies weaved by the feuding mafia families. But after the truth is uncovered, will that city of sin be the same ever again?

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    Haha we shall see. Perhaps I'll leave it in, but I'll definitely change it. I am excited to get to more of the brand new plot. Once I get further along it will really start to get fun :) hey appreciate you guys reading, I'll get to reviewing yours jab soon.

    Coming Soon...

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    I'm really hoping Ash wins the tournament this time around. When he narrowly lost to Lance in the old fic, I was really disappointed.

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    Yup I'm totally redoing the battles this time around, so we shall see how our hero does. Just hafta read to find out ;)

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    Great chapter legacy! Ash is soo cute when he's nervous around dawn! I'm not normally a pearlshipper but I may be converting. That coin thingie is probably really important to save the world...ash getti g it mysteriously is way intriging!! Can't wait till ch 3!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Legacy View Post
    I'll get to reviewing yours jab soon.
    Why can no one call me Jabber?! :P

    But I'll be looking forward to it! An' keep writin' yours, Legs!

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    Yup I'm totally redoing the battles this time around, so we shall see how our hero does. Just hafta read to find out ;)
    Niiiiice. Lookin' forward to that.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jabberwocky View Post
    Why can no one call me Jabber?! :P

    But I'll be looking forward to it! An' keep writin' yours, Legs!
    Sorry jabber! ;)

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    Sorry jabber! ;)
    That's better.

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    You change the ending a bit from last time and I like it better! =D You definately had iyt planned for us huh? Well... It was good... (secretly is happy) You put some good description in thats for sure. (I noticed you cancelled out the old beginning to that chapter as well, good job!) Well, its not much help since I didn't find much that was wrong... So we'll see next time right! ;) If there ever will be anything you can improve on...
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    Wow, the first couple of chaptes of this fic are amazing! So well written, such a good flow to the words, and so easy to imagine what's happening.

    I loved the prologue, setting up the extreme evil that will face ash. And the misty chapter was beautifully written, like a look into her dark life.

    Now the chapter with Ash and Dawn truly captured how awkward and weird life seems to teenagers. I love it.

    I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. You clearly have a good handle of writing.
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    HAHAHAHA! I love messing with people's love lives, and watching them mess their own love lives up! As deity of nightmares, and slightly egotistical, I watch over fanfiction. And I will ensure that there are no... wet dreams... this time around.

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    Thanks for the nice words everyone! There's got to be stuff I could have done better tho.

    Coming Soon...

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    Wow, really excellent chapter! I loved the pearlshippyness even though I don't really like pearlshipping, and I loved again the awesome detail. Keep up the good work Legacy.
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