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    Default Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 11)

    I bet Ho-oh stole the gift. For some reason.
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    Pretty good chapter leg! Kind of sucks Misty went to all that trouble to break into the pokemon center just to find that the coin was gone. I'm wondering if that Lexi girl broke in because she is the only one who really saw that the coin could save ash's life like when it happened after zak used tentacruel on him the first time.

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    Default Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 11)

    Awesome chappie! I love how some chapters are high action like battles and stuff and others are more close and personal in the pov of someone. This is very emotional installment.

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    Default Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 11)

    Spectacular Chapter. I look forward to the next.

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    Default Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 11)

    Thanks for reading everyone! People who are reading, please comment with any suggestions or criticism. It really helps me as I move forward with this story.

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    Default Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 11)

    I pointed one out, but it ended up being the last post in the previous page.

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    Default Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 11)

    Quote Originally Posted by Flame Haze View Post
    Well I'm glad Ash woke up though I wonder how and also who stole the coin.

    Anyways, if I can point this out, I liked this part because it gave the other characters a chance get development and to actually do something, well Misty mostly. But it dragged out at some parts and also I couldn't help but notice that no one even care about Misty running out I mean as you said they noticed but, considering that everyone but Dawn has a close relationship with Misty I would imagine that at least Brock or May would chase after her to see what was happening, I know they were worried about Ash but considering how the anime always shows their bonds with each other I thought they'll be worried about Misty as well.
    Quote Originally Posted by Flame Haze View Post
    I pointed one out, but it ended up being the last post in the previous page.
    Thanks Flame Haze, I struggled with this very thing. But in the end, I figured that with the situation what it was, Brock and May were too worried about Ash to really care about Misty's appearance.

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    Default Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 11)

    I still wouldn't believe they'll just live I mean, if I were in their shoes sure I'll be worried about Ash but I rather go see what's wrong with Misty than sit down waiting for the worst to come.

    But hey it's your so don't worry about it.

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    Default Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 11)

    Quote Originally Posted by Flame Haze View Post
    I still wouldn't believe they'll just live I mean, if I were in their shoes sure I'll be worried about Ash but I rather go see what's wrong with Misty than sit down waiting for the worst to come.

    But hey it's your so don't worry about it.
    Yup good point man. I just think if it were me, yeah I'd be like, "WTF is she doing here and where did she go?" But in the end, I couldn't leave my dying friend's side. Agree to disagree tho haha :)

    Thanks for reading everyone!

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    Gee willakers this is getting good. I love the emotion and intamacy in this one mr legacy. I usually don't care for misty too much but it's hard not to feel for her. Excited to read on!

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    Default Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 11)

    Thanks yo. Chapter 12 might be coming up quick depending on how much writing I get done tonight.

    Coming up:

    Ash's apparent revival along with Misty's mysterious arrival causes further friction between Misty and Dawn.

    While Ash's health is still in question, the tournament must move on. Ash gets a special visitor who reveals the boy's next opponent in the tournament's second round.

    Stay tuned everyone.

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    Default Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 11)

    Technically I already know what's gonna happen, but I won't tell.

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    Default Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 11)

    Quote Originally Posted by Flame Haze View Post
    Technically I already know what's gonna happen, but I won't tell.
    Then why say anything at all? :p
    o/j
    I see this is progressing along well Legacy, if anything this is better than the original! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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    Default Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 11)

    I'm pumped! Ash has to win!

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    Default Re: POKEMON: The Power Inside (Chapter 11)

    Thanks guys. Chapter 12 should be up soon I think.

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