:D YAY! This is really good! I knew Zak shot him!!!!
:D YAY! This is really good! I knew Zak shot him!!!!
As did I. I'd love to shoot that asshole in the face.
Great chapter <3 I loved it times like infinity.
"Be careful what you wish for, because you just might get it."
-- Narrator, Pokemon: Jirachi Wish Maker
"You can't change the world without getting your hands dirty."
-- Lelouch Lamperouge, Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion
"Do I have a stamp on my forehead that says, 'The National Spokesperson for the Plight of Black People'? How the hell should I know the black perspective on The Color Purple? That's it, if I don't change classes, I'm gonna hurt this fool. Teachers treat me like I'm some kind of Rosetta stone for African-Americans. What? Black people learn how to read, and we all miraculously come to the same conclusion?"
-- Victoria, Freedom Writers
"N's heart is pure and innocent. But there is nothing more beautiful and terrifying than innocence."
-- Concordia, Pokémon Black/White 2
Ohhhhh man i hope Ash is gonna be ok. This is so scary.

Hey thanks for reading everyone! I appreciate it greatly!
I love your fan fic, good grammar, good storyline, well, good everything. Maybe you can Hhave a read of mine?

I read it on Fanfiction.net last night. I really wanted to sign up just to tell you how good the latest chapter was! I hate Zak. He needs one of those cute little monkeys in the zoo that throw their poo at people.
This overall was exceptional.
I really like this fic!
You know, my favorite part was the medics working on Ash, it seemed very accurate. You either watch a lot of ER or you must've done your homework.
I'll be taking some pointers for my fic, can't wait for the next chapter.
Last edited by Thabet; 26th June 2010 at 05:20 PM.

When is chapter 10 due to come out?

Probably within a few days, I'm working on it as we speak :)
Thanks for reading everyone. I say it a lot, but it really means a lot to me!
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Cant Wait.
Ash's recovery( Yes, he will, he has to for the story to continue, right?) will probably have something to do with the coin/amulet thing, I think. I would love to see it's purpose later on.
Damn! If Ash wouldn't have tried to be all noble and win without the coin, he wouldn't be in danger of dying. The coin would just cure him.
I read back and I don't know that any of his friends besides that Lexi girl know that the coin can heal him! I hope misty comes to the rescue!!!
Please update now!!!
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