Oh my gosh another great chapter. I liked how you described Ash in his room in the first paragraph. Keep up the good work!
Awesome battle very detailed and imaginative! The ending made me :O
ash got shot? Did he take the coin or not??!
What a cliffhanger! Great job!
Great job Legacy! I've been waiting for this chapter for like a week ; - ; Lol, I'm eagerly anticipating the next chapter.
"Be careful what you wish for, because you just might get it."
-- Narrator, Pokemon: Jirachi Wish Maker
"You can't change the world without getting your hands dirty."
-- Lelouch Lamperouge, Code Geass: Lelouch of the Rebellion
"Do I have a stamp on my forehead that says, 'The National Spokesperson for the Plight of Black People'? How the hell should I know the black perspective on The Color Purple? That's it, if I don't change classes, I'm gonna hurt this fool. Teachers treat me like I'm some kind of Rosetta stone for African-Americans. What? Black people learn how to read, and we all miraculously come to the same conclusion?"
-- Victoria, Freedom Writers
"N's heart is pure and innocent. But there is nothing more beautiful and terrifying than innocence."
-- Concordia, Pokémon Black/White 2
Oh no! ASH!!! UGG...I'm dizzy now. Nice chap!
I love it. It's beast!
THIS SIG IS A PIECE OF HISTORY
Poor Ash. Did Zak shoot him, or TR?
ALL Pokémon Are EQUAL, But SOME Pokémon Are MORE EQUAL Than Others
Oceania is at war with
Eurasia Eastasia EurasiaEastasia, and has always been at war with them!
WAR IS PEACE. FREEDOM IS SLAVERY. IGNORANCE IS STRENGTH. GOD IS POWER.
Next PolySci/Econ Test: November 8, 2016; Your crash-course will begin January 2013.
Galvantula ≥ Kyurem > Mewtwo > Arceus
Ash got shot?! Oh no! Zak is a sore ass loser.
Question is...did he or didn't he take the coin. if yes, the coin will save him.
LOL, anyway I couldn't help but notice 2 leftovers from ASL...
1) "Silas threw his second pokéball onto the field and Hippowdon, a large, hippo-like creature with brown-skin and a big, black snout appeared. Brown sand trickled out of the large ports located on the ground-type’s dark-grey back and muzzle."
2) "'Laaaaaaaaaaaax!' the pokémon roared as it flew remarkably fast towards Hippowdon, despite its considerable mass. The attack ended with Snorlax doing a belly flop right on top of Silas’ Hippowdon, who grunted in pain and collapsed under the added weight."
You might want to fix that
Moving on, another great chapter my friend. Looking forward to reading the next one. DAMN IT ASH, DON'T YOU DARE DIE ON US NOW!!!
FORMERLY: The man with no name...
OK, I did my best, and I read the Prologue and the first chapter, but I swear I can't stand the anime, and I also admit that I just finished the first chapter out of guilt.
I'm sorry, Legacy, but I won't be reading your fanfic. I certainly did it to properly thank you for reading mine, but this is asking too much. I can't stand the anime, I repeat; I can't stand Ash Ketchum, and I can barely stand his Pikachu, and many others.
Again, I'm sorry. I'm certain your story is awesome, but it's just not for me...
I just love the anime, but I wanted to see it set in a more adult atmosphere with more complex plot ideas... so I wrote my fic. Anyways, thanks again for reading everyone!
And to those who liked it enough to nominate me for some of the awards, thanks a million!