NOOOOO!! Why did you kill May and Prof. Oak? He wasn't even that old!!! T_T
Anyways, good fanfic. But if you want a word of advice try not to repeat that much the anime formula and plot. A few changes like actually fighting the Viridian Gym (now that is has a regular Leader, it should be open all the time) and make Gary lose and return there at the end of the Kanto jouney, or something like that, would be great.