Thread: Pokémon The Extinction

Originally Posted by Kyuuketsuki

And I honestly think 45/100 is too good for this, I would've given it a 25.

Well, as I like to say, we authors always think of our own fics lower than other people think of it.

I rated Generation 2021 (my own fic) a 59/100 for the awards, but I'm willing to bet that there are people that would give it an 80/100, even on my scale.

And to prove my point, S-Blade gave it an 86. >_>

Chapter 9
True Allies – The Fourth Mystery

Sally was in an unknown beach with an injured Ursaa, she feared for Vileplume as well. She kept running towards the city in front of her, it was a normal city. Sally stopped to look at all the civilization that she hadn't seen in what seemed like ages. Cars are speeding down the streets and all the people were busy with their lives, only few noticed the girl with the Pokémon. They were surprised, not at the sight of the Pokémon, but the fact that she didn't have any Pokéballs, like anyone who has a Pokémon in the city does. A black-haired tall boy rushed to her "What's wrong with your Pokémon?" He asked Sally.
"She…" Sally recalled the events and wondered how to explain them to the boy "…had an accident." She finished when she knew there wasn't anyway that she could finish her story in short time.
The boy looks at the Teddiursa that is breathing heavily "It's nothing." The boy says and reaches into his backpack, grabbing some sort of a bottle and spraying it over Ursaa's body. Ursaa soon recovered health and open her eyes, she looked around, jumped from Sally's hands and walked around Sally. Ursaa then spotted the beach and ran off to play emitting a joyful sound: "Ursaaaaaa!"
Sally smiles then turns to the boy "Thanks." She said to him while blushing slightly "What is that thing?" She said as she pointed at the bottle.
"This? You never saw one of these before?" He asked and looked at Sally, who looked confused "It's a Super Potion. It helps restore a Pokémon's health."
"I never saw one of these before…" Sally said honestly "I'm Sally by the way."
"I'm Dan." He says as he raises his hand and shakes hers.

Sally and Dan were now watching their Pokémon play in the sand. Dan has allowed his 2 Pokémon out of their Pokéballs; Horsea and Chinchou. The 3 Pokémon were playing with each other happily, but Sally's mind was confused, thinking of a way to get back to the other side of the earth and saving Vileplume, along with all the other Pokémon being held by Rose and her minions as she preferred to call them in her mind. She looked up at the sky and an idea came to her head, she began searching her books for information about Salamence, but all she could find was in one of the books she never bothered to look at; a book about ways that the Pokémon can travel with, she has experienced two of them. After reading the whole book, she decided to find a Pokémon who can teleport, as it was the fastest way.
"Do you know anyone with a Pokémon that can teleport me back to where I came from? Sally asked "Like Abra." Another book was opened at the Abra page, it had many pictures of Abra, including a slightly disappeared Abra, and she guessed that it was teleporting.
"I know someone who has an Abra." Dan replied "She's a fortune teller."
"Take me to her." Sally said without hesitation "I want to teleport back to where I came from."
"I will, but what about Ursaa?"
"What about her? She's coming with me."
"I mean, why isn't she in a Pokéball?"
"You mean those round things? It's my first time seeing these things."
"It must be really bad, where you came from."
"It is. I have to go or else this mad woman is gonna continue her Voodoo magic."
"Huh?"
"She is trying to clone Pokémon and produce synthetic Pokémon eggs. I saw a Gloom that they experimented on and it was a mess. After she gave it to me, I evolved it, but she took it back."
"You lost me."
And so Sally told her full story to the newly met Dan in order to get him to take her to the fortune teller.
"I see…" Dan said after Sally had finished her story.
"That's why I want to go back."
"Over here. Pokémon are not in danger anymore. We have people who protect them; they call themselves the PRPL, Pokémon Rights Protection League. They have Pokémons in the hundreds, thousands, if they have only 1 Pokémon of a species, they breed it with another species. I'm thinking of joining when I get stronger. Anyway, let's take you to the fortune teller. Take this." Dan handed Sally a Pokéball "It's for Ursaa, if you want to."
"It'll certainly be easier."
"Don't worry; it's completely safe and comfortable for the Pokémon."
Sally dropped the Pokéball carefully as it rolled towards Ursaa. Ursaa looked at it strangely, she then saw Dan putting Horsea and Chinchou back in their Pokéballs and she knew what it was like, she knew that she would be safe and easier to carry for Sally. So she kept hitting the ball trying to go in. Sally walked over and did what Dan instructed her to, she pressed the button in the middle and the Pokéball enlarged, she hit it again and Ursaa was sucked into it.

"I see great dangers and great treasures." The fortune teller said "I also see…"
"I'm not here for my future." Sally interrupted "I need your Abra to teleport me back to where I came from."
"Abra isn't strong enough to teleport you back where you came from. Your future is here and nowhere else. Your sister's plans have been destroyed by- who is this? Gary?"
Sally looked shocked, Gary was dead and she had no sister "What are you talking about?"
"Gary. No. Gary's Pokémon. It has stopped her plans, her project failed. Your Pokémon was lost. A Gloom? No! A Vileplume."
"Are you talking about Rose?" Sally asked "She's not my sister."
"Oh yes… Rose… Your sister… Your twin rather… failed because of your grandfather's Pokémon."
"Gary?"

To Be Continued…

Chapter 10
Between The Rifts – The First Mystery Unfolded

"After Gary cared for Sally, Edhwin's daughter, He was teleported forwards to when she was 25, they fell in love, married, and gave birth to a twin, a boy and a girl. The girl later gave birth to twins, she named them Sally, that's you, and Rose. Rose was taking to Edhwin to care for her while he was alive, she currently has no memories of that, she was older than you which what them think that she was the one. But it was you." The fortune teller said while appearing as if in a trance.
"So much for predicting the future," Sally said "More like lying about the past. I'm outta here!" She said as she stormed off, followed by Dan.
"Why did you storm off?!" Dan asked "I know you don't believe her, but believe she is 100% a real psychic."
"Then what was that crap about?!" Sally screamed "She's saying that Gary knew Celebi personally and he knew I needed it! He even said he'd help me!"
"Who's Gary? And why do you need Celebi?"
"Well, apparently Gary is my grandfather from over 200 years ago."
Sally and Dan kept arguing as a man in a hood stared at them nervously, he removed his hood to reveal his blonde hair and blue eyes. He looked at Sally in confusion. He then removed an earpiece that he had on; it was connected to a bug beneath the fortune teller crystal ball "Could she really be my niece?"

Sally walked out of the city and was surprised to see that the area outside the city with the hot beach was filled with snow. She walked through it anyway, suddenly realizing that her homeland was not on the other part of the world, it was south. She continued heading north anyway, not wanting to face the city, Dan, the fortune teller ever again.

Chris, Sally's uncle was following her everywhere, feeling that she really is one of his nieces. They had now reached a very cold place; Sally needed something to keep her warm, so she began burning the book about Pokémon eggs. She then started reading about Celebi further more and writing in her book. She lifts her head up and sees a shocking sight, her heart almost stopped at the sight of the Pokémon before her; she was filled with boy joy and fear at the sight of Celebi.

Rose promised herself to hunt down and kill the Heracross that ruined her project. The eggs have failed to hatch and the Oddish were never truly an Oddish, they were just a bunch of mutated Pokémon who died in their eggs. She was riding her Salamence, searching for any sight of Heracross who was far away from the city she was searching in, the torn-down city couldn't hide Heracross that well, Rose found Sally's book on the floor, knocked from the table by the wind Salamence made as he flew up carrying Sally and her Pokémon. She flips through it and sees a picture of Edhwin with a young, but a recognizable, Gary. Her mind then recalled all the events missing from her life and she realized that she had a sister named Sally. She dropped the book in shock, Salamence sensed Rose's fear and if blasted the book, destroying it completely.

Sally looked at the Celebi in confusion, the Celebi smiled and looked at the book. It then began melting slowly into a pink liquid, much to Sally's horror. The Celebi then reformed itself to a Ditto from the liquid drops. Sally was disappointed and relieved, Chris then came out of the bushes "Hello Sally." He said as he looked at the confused girl, and recalled his Ditto to its Pokéball "I'm Chris, your uncle."
"What?" Sally asked.
"What the fortune teller said was true, and I know where Celebi resides, but I don't think it stays there anymore."
"What are you talking about?"
And so, Chris explained to her all of Celebi's involvement in her family, she was then convinced that what he said was true. So she decided to go with him to where he said Celebi resides. Along the way Sally intentionally broke Ursaa's Pokéball, causing Ursaa to have no Pokéball to be held in anymore, which looked like a joy to her. Ursaa then followed behind Sally carefully, afraid of losing her in the thick snow, she sometimes even grabbed her brand new jeans, that Dan bought for her along with a whole set of new clothes. After 2 weeks they managed to cross the snow area and appeared to be in a forest, a different one from where Sally found Ursaa. On her time with Chris, Sally felt that he was really her family; she sensed that he wasn't any danger to her whatsoever, much to her relief; her mother never told her she had an uncle, probably because he never visited or that she died when Sally was 10. They crossed the forest easily and went on to parts Sally never saw anything like them before in her entire life, Chris appeared to know the exact way as he never showed any sign of confusion or pausing when a road goes multiple ways. He was always looking straight ahead of him whenever he was walking, never turning his head to check his surroundings. They were finally in another forest.
"This is it." Chris said "It's the Mystical Forest. Where Celebi lives."
"All we have to do now is find it." Sally replied as if it was a normal thing to her, while her heart was beating like a loud drum roll that she even feared Chris could hear it.
"Well, search away." Chris said "I'll be going to deal with your sister."
"Oh but…" Sally said as Chris walked away carelessly, he then glimpsed Celebi to his side behind a tree, but he ignored it and walked away smiling. Celebi looked at Sally and then went to hide as she began searching for it. She looked like Maria with a different hair color. Celebi knew that she the great-grandchild of its owner.

To Be Continued…

Chapter 11
Ursaa's Quest For Evolution

"I'll go search south, you go north and be careful." Sally said to Ursaa, instructing her not to get lost "I'll keep a jar of honey with me for you to smell out."

Ursaa nods to Sally and goes her way, her right palm in her mouth. She knew that right now Sally cared about Celebi more than she could ever care for her. Celebi was the Pokémon she was seeking before she met her. Along her way she realized that even if she found Celebi she would be unable to take it back to Sally or convince it to come along.

"Where are you…?" Sally whispered to herself while searching for Celebi, who was watching her from behind the trees quietly.

Sally kept walking through the forest that was small, yet very confusing, the tall trees and grass gave it the feel of a rain forest, yet the sunshine added a shining element to the green leaves that seemed to fly without the help of any wind, Sally could sense the energy within this forest, she keeps on looking, heading further south. She came upon a small crate that, as the one in the city, had flowers in it, but this one however, was more blooming and much more colorful. Sally kept staring at it for what seemed like ages, captivated by its charm and mystical energy. From behind a tree crawled out a small Caterpie, it looked very proud and strong, and it even was looking at Sally without fear, which at those times was very rare. Wild Pokémon were afraid of humans, especially in the region that Rose had terrorized. With the thought of Rose in Sally's head, she snapped out of it and realized that she stared at the location for at least 2 minutes without closing her eyes.

After continuous struggling, Ursaa finally managed to climb up a tree. She looked around for Celebi but saw something far more fascinating, the Combees and the Vespiquens have migrated here; they had an area filled with honey which Ursaa could smell clearly. She felt as if, for the first time in a long time, going to finally have some fun. Her baby nature outdone her dedication for the search and she leaped out to the hive, falling on the ground. Yet the pain was no match for the tempting smell of honey.

Ursaa ran from one honey puddle to the other. Eating peacefully, that is until she heard a familiar sound.

"Ursaa? Is that you?" Heracross looked at Ursaa with hope "It's you isn't it?"

"You're Gary's Pokémon!" Ursaa exclaimed happily, suddenly remembering Gary and wondering if Heracross knows it or not, this showed on her face and Heracross understood it.

"I know he died." Heracross said sadly "He did his best to protect the Pokémon from Rose yet allowing her to help them as well. He failed to stop the cloning project. You should know, Vileplume didn't make it…"

"Oh…" Ursaa was sad at the news, Vileplume was one of the only reasons she wanted to get stronger "Sally is searching for Celebi, in this forest."

"Are you helping her?"

"I was, until I saw the honey. I want to evolve so I can be of much more help."

"If it wasn't for you, Sally would still be in the forest across searching for a random Pokémon."

"I will evolve, and I will help her!" Ursaa said as she set her mind on evolving, she then walked away from the hive, and the forest, looking for a place to train.

Sally has found the burned city she was in; she walked into it as she planned to go back to the forest for Ursaa as soon as she retrieved her book, she found it torn with an unconscious Rose and a Salamence near it, she ran towards her twin sister to check if she was alive, she was breathing heavily and then she finally talked.

"I… I'm sorry." She struggled to talk "You have to get away…"

"What are you talking about?"

"It killed Salamence…"

"What killed Salamence?!"

"The monster I created…" Rose said as she died in her sister's arms.

Sally looked in horror, wondering what did this to her sister, killing both her and her Pokémon. Sally laid Rose's body on the ground. She suddenly hard a loud screeching noise, it came from above her. She looked up and saw a pair of jaws aiming at her; she however managed to jump out of the way in time. She took a closer look at the thing that almost killed her, it was an Aerodactyl, and she read about it in Edhwin's book. Sally knew that Rose must have genetically changed it while reviving it from a fossil. With horror Sally began running as fast as she could into the Mystical Forest, followed by a hungry Aerodactyl.

Chris looked from afar and saw Sally running away from an Aerodactyl.

"Go, Pigeot!" He said as he threw a Pokéball high into the air and jumped down the cliff he was on. Pigeot was released and it carried Chris on its back with a speed that wasn't reached by normal a Pigeot, its feathers were colored in golden yellow instead of the normal coloring of a Pigeot.

"Come on… Hang in there Sally…"

Sally was still running, often dropping to the ground to avoid the attacks, she sometimes went through narrow space between the torn buildings, but the Pokémon managed to tear through it easily. Sally found herself cornered, she has reached a dead end, her hand reached into her bag, searching for anything that can help her, but all she could find, other than her books, was a Potion, given to her by Dan. She closed her eyes waiting for a miracle to happen, but Aerodactyl jumped at her, the narrow place she was in helped her survive the fatal hit, and the Pokémon only managed to his her shoulder, causing her to slam into the wall behind her and break her arm. Aerodactyl aimed again and this time, there was nothing to stop it, except for the Pigeot that slammed into it and drove it into a building with force that tore down the wall of the buildings, the two Pokémon ended up inside it fighting, slamming into the walls and breaking what was the floor and ceiling of the building that fell sideways long before. The noises they made seemed like whispers being drawn away from Sally's mind, and she fainted from the pain and the shock, hoping that whoever saved her will take her away from this place.

To Be Continued…

Chapter 12
The Fifth Mystery – The Forth Mystery Unfolded

Chris is looking through Sally's books, she had 8 left now. 1 were in a very bad shape so he burned it in order to cook some soup for Sally. He began reading one of the books in the process. The book that was burning had information about Pokémon travelling ways, which he knew them all. He was reading a book about fossil Pokémons.

"I hope you didn't burn the Celebi book." Sally said weakly after just waking up.

"I didn't" Chris Replied "It's the Pokémon travelling methods by Gary."

"Oh… I didn't know it was his."

"He's your grandfather you know, my father."

"Yeah I know all the family connections now."

"You must miss your mother."

"Yeah… I'm doing it for her… saving the Pokémon… that was her goal until she died"

"You only saw me once; you were just a baby then."

At the mention of babies, Sally leaped up and looked nervous "Where is Ursaa?" She said with worry in her voice."

"Crap… I forgot about her."

With that, Sally jumped out and began searching for Ursaa in the middle of the night after packing her 7 books. Chris was following her without words, knowing that there was nothing he could do to convince her to go back.

Hours passed and still no sign of Ursaa in the Mystical Forest; she had found the Combee hive but she there was nothing there except a bunch of sleeping Combees and Vespiquens. Chris was still following her although he looked very tired. Sally finally gave up to her own body refused going on before getting some sleep. Chris supported her back to the camp and she slept deeply.

Sally's sleep was filled with faces very familiar to her, the first being a blonde woman hugging her and kissing her as a baby; her mother. Her father came over to her with a baby Rose in his hands, he handed it to Celebi whom Sally giggled at touched its hands. Celebi then disappeared with Rose, never to be seen again. That is until her mother died and she glimpsed it at the corner of her eyes, she didn't recognize it back then, she thought it was one of the many statues her house was filled with, her father had abandoned them a few months before, leaving for unknown reason. Her dreams then jumped to when she encountered Celebi again, or rather, when it encountered her. Celebi was watching her read about it in the dim light of a candle, with an Eevee beneath the hidden basement sniffing at the hidden door. Sally then found Ursaa's egg, along with Gary, who found her. She remembered how he introduced her to the new world she is now in, how he cared for her and through him she met Rose. Sally moaned in her sleep as she found his dead body with the Celebi drawing. She was then attacked by Rose and later Vileplume was taken. She started sweating as the dreams became nightmares. She was falling down to the sea now, out of the sea came an Aerodactyl that bit her.

She forced open her eyes, the forest was silent, she was looking into the eyes of Celebi "Is this a dream?" she thought to herself "Is this Chris' Ditto? My imagination?"

Her thoughts overlapped and her heart began racing as fast as it has in her entire life, her shock was far beyond making any sounds. Celebi stared peacefully. Sally's body felt paralyzed, she wanted to grab the Celebi but couldn't. The Celebi reached its hands and closed Sally's tired eyes, despite her will, she fell asleep. Celebi then flew away.

The sun rose and the leaves gained back the mystical colors. Sally couldn't understand if Celebi was a dream or real. She told Chris her full story, from when she was a baby to the Celebi part.

"I wasn't in it?" Chris asked sarcastically "It's probably a dream; I don't think Celebi would show itself that easily."

"I guess not…" Sally replied "I hope it was a dream, or otherwise I missed my chance to get Celebi and fix the past."

"You can't change what happened. You can only control the now and the then."

"Strong words. But not new ones."

Sally and Chris went on their way to search for Ursaa after eating breakfast. They were now with their full energy, Sally searched for Ursaa in every possible location, hoping also to find Celebi on the way. Chris as searching carelessly, as though he knew where Ursaa could hide and where she would hide, that is if she was hiding at all.

Back at the building, which was now destroyed, the scientists began to leave as their project was shut down along with the entire company by their founders and their mother company.

In a small conference room, five people were discussing starting a new and a better company. Behind each one was a Pokémon, making a total of 5 Pokémons in the room. These were: Metagross, Gengar, Bronzong, Rhyperior and Crobat.

"What should we do with Sally and Chris?" One man said "Two of us will have to go and take care of Chris; he's already defeated many of us."

"Sally knows too much as well." Another man said "Maybe we should make sure she stays quiet."

"If we don't take there of them and the others now, the next project will fail." A third man said "Should we start a project to eliminate them?"

The other four men in one voice said: "Agreed."

To Be Continued…

Chapter 13
The End Of A Road

Ursaa wanders the streets of the burned city; she managed to recognize her owner's torn book, and the dead Rose. Salamence wasn't there, to Ursaa's relief. She still wondered why Rose wasn't buried like Gary. But then she saw a group of people approaching. They were wearing medical suits, they carried Rose away as Ursaa watched, she thought it was weird they acted like she wasn't there. A Metagross appears behind Ursaa, she turns to face the sudden present Pokémon. She felt small as the Pokémon towered over her; it grabbed her and flew away. She struggled to get away but failed, Metagross hit her on her head to keep her quiet.

Hours later, Ursaa waked up in a weird place, she was confined in a thick glass box. Her screams were muffled and a man was staring at her, a Bronzong was behind him.

"You want to get back to Sally don't you? What am I doing…? I can't hear you or understand you. I'll let you go back to Sally if you let me come with you" He said "Otherwise, you'll stay there until you are more useful."

Ursaa stared at the man in anger, Bronzong however made her anger turn to fear.

"Well… I'll be here whenever you want to go to Sally. He walked out of the room, pressing a button on his way out which started a countdown.

"10. 9. 8." The countdown continued, Bronzong kept looking at Ursaa coldly "1."

The countdown ended and glass box Ursaa was in went into the ground after the top part of it was opened. Ursaa was now standing on the floor of the conference room. Bronzong dashed at her and she knew what was going to happen, it was attacking her. But Bronzong stopped just before it reached her.

"You should just lead them to Sally. They will not harm you." He said to Ursaa.

"I want to go back to Sally but I won't lead you to her."

"You have to or you'll never see her again."

"No! You guys seem too dangerous! You took Rose's body to clone her!"

"They buried her, a proper burial. She was honored by everyone who went to her funeral. The cemetery she is buried in has many of the greatest people of this place."

Ursaa fell silent, confused more than everything. Does that mean that the cloning project was all Rose's idea? Is this the mother company? Ursaa just wanted to get out of her, she ran past Bronzong and jumped out of a glass window, not realizing she was on the 30th floor and is now heading for a concrete street. She suddenly performed a Seismic Toss, hurling herself at the ground, and then used Dig to go underground, she was surprised by the sudden rush of attack moves she did, but she didn't bother and started gigging her way underground.

"Ursaa! Where are you?!" Sally screamed throughout the forest, giving up on searching silently.

"Screaming won't bring her back." Chris said as he sent out his Golden Pigeot, who came out with a sparkle. This Pokéball was different than the one he originally used as it fell from the cliff he was on and never went back to get it.

"Pigeot, take Ditto and search for Ursaa."

Suddenly, Ditto jumped out of Chris' jacket as a pen and reformed itself to a Ditto, then a Venonat under Chris' orders.

"Use the radar eyes to find Ursaa. Pigeot don't fly too fast, try to hold yourself back, I shouldn't have fed you all those Carbos…"

Pigeot and the Venonat-shaped Ditto flew off. Leaving Chris with only one other Pokémon he had and a newly caught, but vicious, Aerodactyl. Sally keeps searching for Ursaa in another direction, Chris follows to protect her, he was sure his Pokémon could find him wherever he was.

Out of afar, Sally sees Ursaa running towards the Mystical Forest from the burned city, followed by a Bronzong and a Gengar, along with their trainers.

"Ursaa!" Sally scream, running out of the forest as fast as she could, she was surprisingly faster than when she was running from the Aerodactyl, she guessed that she cared for Ursaa more than she cared about her life. Chris ran after he but paused, he sent out a Rapidash and rode it. Along the way he grabbed Sally and lifted her up on the fire horse. They raced towards the Ursaa. One they reached the city, Sally jumped without any apparent reason. The speed of the Rapidash was forcing Sally to run in order to avoid falling on her face, with her own speed; she was now almost as fast. Her feet hit a small rock, it was enough for Sally to trip and roll on the ground, and she received many cuts and bruises. She got back up on her feet and ran again. She was so close to her Ursaa. Rapidash had already begun fighting the Gengar. Sally jumped towards Ursaa and grabbed her, her body was about to smash into the Bronzong, but she reacted quickly and kicked it instead.

She was finally still on the ground, her heart beating so fast it was as if she had been injected with a many adrenaline shots. Sally looks down to check on her Ursaa. But she wasn't there; she had jumped out of her arms sometime and is fighting Bronzong. Ursaa has shown more energy than she has ever shown, she was clearly affected by Sally's act to save her. Ursaa recalled when Sally fed it, for the first time, honey. She decided it was time for her to care for Sally, as she cared for her, she needed to evolve now.

"Ursa. Ursa. Ursa. Ursa."

To others it seemed like she was challenging the Bronzong, but she was repeatedly ordering her body to evolve. She has trained with Heracross before she found Rose's body; she knew that she is strong enough to evolve. And so her body began to shine, to evolve, just as she always wanted, she was no long the cute little teddy-bear like Pokémon. She is becoming a stronger Pokémon, an Ursaring. The evolution was now completed. The once cute Pokémon was determined to protect Sally, no matter what. It was now taller that Sally, and it was ready for its first Pokémon battle with Sally.

To Be Continued…

I always wanted a ursaring... !!! now, i want rose to team up with dan, put ursaa in a pokeball, since she cant carry it and it wont walk, catch new pokemon, take gary's heracross ,and destroys the earth!!!

I HAVE A QUESTION... WHICH REGION IS THIS??? WHERE ARE THE MAIN REGIONS???

Originally Posted by Shadow Raikou

I always wanted a ursaring... !!! now, i want rose to team up with dan, put ursaa in a pokeball, since she cant carry it and it wont walk, catch new pokemon, take gary's heracross ,and destroys the earth!!!

I HAVE A QUESTION... WHICH REGION IS THIS??? WHERE ARE THE MAIN REGIONS???

It's set in a post- apocalyptic future. The region is unspecified and isn't any of the regions from the games. And I think you missed something...

Rose is dead

But thanks for the feedback, I was very excited to actually see that someone has commented on my story.

Originally Posted by Kyuuketsuki

It's set in a post- apocalyptic future. The region is unspecified and isn't any of the regions from the games. And I think you missed something...

Rose is dead

But thanks for the feedback, I was very excited to actually see that someone has commented on my story.

Oh Sorry sorry! I did not mean rose, I meant sally!

I can't really promise anything at this point. Since the story is already fully-written and finished. But I can say for a fact that Sally won't destroy the earth, since it's kinda the opposite of her goal, at least she doesn't intend on...

it was a joke. but atleast the pokeball thing...

Chapter 14
A New Start – Secrets

Many Pokémon were walking around the forest, playing with each other. These many species seemed to all get along; none was left out or rejected. Celebi was among them, as well as many rare Pokémon, but Celebi was the only legendary there. Eggs were scattered across the forest, eggs with the same pattern were always together. No egg of a different pattern was in any other group than it's own, even if it was one of a kind, which was the case for many eggs.

During this, Edhwin and Maris got married and were expecting there first child, they planned to name the baby Chris or Sally. A knock sounded on the door and Edhwin went to answer it.

"Hello, old friend." Gary said to Edhwin.

"Hello, Gary." Edhwin replies "I thought you were doing some fossil-ing somewhere in someplace."

"It's fossil excavation, but thanks for caring." Gary walked past Edhwin and stopped in front of Maria "How are you feeling?"

Maria laughs at Edhwin's shock to see that Gary walked in uninvited, and the old friends started arguing again. Maria laughed at the sight that they both did whenever one doesn't see the other for too long. She guessed it was their way of saying: "Welcome back."

It was a peaceful time; Maria had still not befriended Celebi. Edhwin didn't write his books. It was…

160 Years Ago…

Celebi flew away into the city which would later be burned down. It looked through a window of a mansion, but then decided to go in. It looked like a mansion from a fairytale; the staircases were accessible from the end of the long hallway. It was two staircases, leading to the same place; one was on the right, and one on the left. The floor was shining with a bright light; it was a reflection of the crystal chandelier. Celebi flew to the top floor and went into a room, Maria was sleeping peacefully in the middle of the day, Celebi knew she was pure hearted and so it approached her, looked at her face the same way it looked at Sally's face when she was sleeping. The door opens and Edhwin walks into the house, Celebi hurries and flies out of the room through the window.

A few weeks later, Sally was born; Celebi had witnessed Sally's first breath from afar. Sally was a joy to the Ketnary family. The large mansion was filled with happiness as relatives from everywhere came to congratulate the couple. Maria always thought of this as a moment that won't last, for some reason her mother didn't show up. Wouldn't she want to see her grandchild in her first weeks? Maria was confused by that.

After all of relatives went to their hotel rooms, or to one of the many rooms in the house, Maria went to her brother's room, Kane.

"Why didn't mom come?" Maria jumped straight to her point "Don't you think she'd care that her daughter just gave birth?"

"Well, you know mom." Kane replied "She didn't care when I got married or divorced."

"It wasn't your first time getting married and divorced."

"Whatever." Kane replied as he kept reading a novel, thinking that Maria was done. His green eyes were moving from side to side as fast as a jet, he was a fast reader. He was also wearing glasses that he only used for reading, his sight was weak since he was a baby, but he could still see clearly.

"Kane, am I boring you?"

"Partially, but not too much. You know how she is, she will always be like this, stop worrying about it, and it's not her first time doing it."

"You'd think she'd care…"

"Yeah, and you were her favorite."

"I wasn't!" Maria denied what was very clear; her mother had always preferred her over her two brothers, that is until their father died.

"She probably had her reasons." Kane broke her thoughts.

"It was Mark."

"I'm not sure about that."

"What do you mean?"

"They got divorced."

"That's it I'm calling, she can't keep me out of her life like this." Maria said as she stormed out.

"Have fun." Kane said sarcastically.

9 Years Later…

Celebi was flying through the Mystical Forest, it was running away from something, the Legendary Pokémon had started their battles and were destroying large parts of the Mystical Forest causing it to be the small forest it is in the future. The Pokémon were all running away, circling around the city and going into the forest at the other end. It was night, and the people were sleeping, not knowing what disaster is befalling the Mystical Forest. All the Pokémon were carrying their eggs with them, some of the weaker ones couldn't carry theirs fast enough, which is why Celebi was driving Groudon away from the other Pokémon, Dialga and Palkia were fighting in another part of the Mystical Forest.

Edhwin, Maria, and many other people in the city wake up after one explosion caused by the time and space Pokémon, combined with an earthquake by Groudon, terror was shown by many who started running away from the city, but some were still, like Maria and Edhwin.

By the morning, reports of many battles were broadcasted all over the world, these battles have started 50 years ago or more, but they just started affecting humans directly.

The Pokémon were now in the forest on the other end of the city, an Ursaring dropped her egg into a lake, but couldn't go back to it. The egg was now peacefully at the bottom of the lake, waiting for someone to rescue it.

1 Year Later…

The battles now destroyed the city, it was burned to the ground, taking many lives with it, but not Sally's, she had escaped, only to be later rescued by Edhwin and Gary, who at that time met his Heracross.

150 Years Later…

The Pokémon was determined to get out, but just then, it felt someone pull it out, it was scared at first. The Pokémon had just completely grew, considering that it was in an egg in cold water for 150 years, it was only a few days back that it was ready to hatch. But now Sally rescued the egg, the Pokémon felt that she was safe, but there was something weird about her.

Celebi watched as Sally rescued the only surviving Pokémon from the Mystical Forest, it then flew back there, looking back at Sally to ensure she still had the egg.

Gary walks into the forest, into the pond, where they detected signs of a living Pokémon. He left his Heracross in the Combee hive to protect it. He walked towards the lake to see a girl, sitting next to an egg. He comes out of the bushes.

"Miss?" He said to the girl "Are you okay?"

The girl turns and looks at him.

"Yeah I'm fine." She responds "I was just resting for a while."

"Do you need water or food?" Gary replies "I have plenty of it."

The girl sits there silently, apparently thinking about something.

"Well..." Gary says frustrated "If you are going to ignore me..."

"No, wait." She suddenly said "I'd like some of that food."

"Alright then." Gary smiled "Follow me."

1 Week Later…

Chris walks around in his town; he spots Dan training his Pokémon, along with many other trainers.

"I see strange things in your future." The fortune teller said as he walked in "Your family…"

"Are all dead." Chris said, he was here only to bug the room, and he has succeeded in it, but not without getting the fortune teller knowing.

"Why are you here Chris?" Her voice suddenly changed "Just to bug me?"

"Yes." He said honestly "I have every right to."

"I understand." She said "But why?"

"I'll give you this Abra." Chris replied "Someone might come here, and I might need to know what you tell them. And you have to tell them all the truth. I know that Gary is out there, and he will seek you."

"You mean your father."

"He's not my father; he's not even my family. He teamed up with those people who clearly want to just experiment on Pokémon, not to mention that he killed my sister."

"I know nothing of the past. Only the future, you will find your family."

"I doubt it."

Chris then stormed out, walking towards the beach, and then looking at the 3 Pokéballs in his hand, he knew that he should seek out Gary, and destroy him, the same way that Gary destroyed him.

Present Day…

"Ursa. Ursa. Ursa. Ursa."

To others it seemed like she was challenging the Bronzong, but she was repeatedly ordering her body to evolve. She has trained with Heracross before she found Rose's body; she knew that she is strong enough to evolve. And so her body began to shine, to evolve, just as she always wanted, she was no long the cute little teddy-bear like Pokémon. She is becoming a stronger Pokémon, an Ursaring. The evolution was now completed. The once cute Pokémon was determined to protect Sally, no matter what. It was now taller that Sally, and it was ready for its first Pokémon battle with Sally.

To Be Continued…

great work, but i really get confused in time changes.

Originally Posted by Shadow Raikou

great work, but i really get confused in time changes.

So do I... That's why you have to be extra careful when using time travel in a series. When/if I rewrite this, I will fix all these problems (hopefully)...

Yeah, one of my fics died cuz of that and no visitors