Here we go... some people may have seen this fic before but not many it's never been posted here and I want to see the response I get.
Before I get into it though I have one request...
Please please please tell me if there are major problems I want to know what's crap about this. The only way to improve my writing is to have it criticised so I'm asking you now, don't hold back!
Taking a leaf out of Damian's book:
Just a few procedures beforehand...
WARNING: This is a fic about war so there *is* violence, gore and death involved.
It's a futuristic tale with absolutely no reference whatsoever to the anime series apart from the pokemon themselves.
This fic was written before R/S so there are currently no R/S pokemon I may change that as I go through and do yet another edit on the chapters.
There shouldn't be massive delays in chapter posting except if I find that my previous writing is absolute crap and try for a complete rewrite.