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    Post MLG's Poetry.

    Is it ok to post poetry here, I didn't really found a suitable forum to post it. If it's wrong will a mod be so nice to move it? Thanks.

    Random Poems.

    What will come tomorrow?

    What will come tomorrow?
    What will come today?
    Will it be joy or will it be sorrow?
    Will it remain the same way?

    What will come tomorrow? Mother doesn't know.

    Do I have to cry?
    Do I have to laugh?
    Will I have to lie?
    Or will I have to love?

    What will come tomorrow? Father doesn't know.

    Will I fear pain?
    Will I fear death?
    Will I break the chain?

    What will come tomorrow?

    Will it be rain?
    Or will it be snow?

    For you will never know...

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    Another Poem


    Another Poem, I will make.
    Another Poem, reputation at stake.

    What am I saying? Reputation?
    Why am I staying? Transformation?

    I have no reputation, no title, no pride.

    Who will respect me?
    Who will destroy me?
    Do not ask, you will see.

    It is only a poem, another poem...

    Written by who?
    Written for who?

    Is it for me? Is it for you?

    It does not matter. It is only another poem...

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    Love


    How does it feel?

    Does it feel nice?
    Does it feel cold?

    No,
    It feels like gold.

    That precious feeling.
    My heart, is what you are stealing.

    Your love is what I desire.
    Your smile is what I admire.

    You love me on the inside,
    But hate me on the outside.

    Why does it happen?
    Why is it there?

    Love.

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    Suicide

    I'm sitting here. Watching, staring.
    Waiting for the time, that he will come.
    Waiting, ready to die.

    I'm tired of waiting. When will he come?
    How much longer, must I bare the pain?
    The pain of ignorance.

    I'm tired of waiting. When will he come?
    How much longer, must I feel alone?
    The feeling of pain, the feeling of destruction.

    I'm tired of waiting. He will never come.
    I must go to him.
    I must be free, free of all pain.

    I will go. Go to him.
    With only a minor movement,
    The pain will go away

    Suicide. It is only another step.
    A step towards total freedom, the freedom of us all.

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    One night

    One night,
    That night.
    It was everything I ever dreamed about.

    One night,
    That night.
    You were all mine.

    One night,
    That night,
    It was just the two of us.

    One night,
    That night.
    The world stopped before our eyes.

    One night,
    That night.
    Time froze, just for us.

    One night,
    That night,
    Is over, but not forgotten.

    One night,
    That night...

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    That girl


    There she was,
    smiling all nice.
    Sitting besides me,
    on the morning bus.

    She moves elegantly.
    As I watch her lips so carefully,
    Still smiling so gently.

    She had those populair friends.
    As they yelled at me,
    I watched full of suspense.
    Waiting until she reacts.

    The bell rang and she left.
    She left me there so lonely,
    so broken, so suprised.

    The little part of hope,
    was washed away,
    like a chalk drawning on a rainy day.

    That girl, so smooth she was.
    That girl, so beautifull she was.

    That girl, so inaccessible she was...

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    She 'n Me.

    She was so close, yet I didn't open my mouth.
    She was so sweet, yet I didn't look south.
    The south, the place, were she belonged.
    She did look, but I was afraid.
    Afraid of loosing that good moment.
    That moment of feelings.

    I watched a movie and felt confident,
    enough to finaly say a word.
    A gentle hello was all I desired.
    But then, just then, you were tired.

    Why does the real world struck so much harder then a movie?
    Why don't you want to talk to me?

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    Redemption

    Redemption lasts.
    It's locked in my heart.
    It will never fade.
    It is not difficult to find
    It's only to remind.



    Cinquians


    My Guitar

    Guitar
    long, expensive
    buying, playing, dying
    Will it work? It is hopeless.
    Scrap

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    Haiku's

    Unity

    The stream of water
    rushing down the waterfall
    To resolve in unity





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    I think I like! Thank you for posting them!

    (one thing, it's "haikus", not "haiku's")

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    These are all lovely. Although...

    Quote Originally Posted by MeLoVeGhOsTs
    The stream of water
    rushing down the waterfall
    To resolve in unity
    I was taught the structure of a haiku was 5-7-5, not 5-7-7. Heh.

    Still very nice poetry, though.
    By reading this, you have given me temporary control of your mind.

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    Oh thankies. Yeah I must have mixed up at the haiku. Uh. I'm retarded.

    Glad you liked them.
    [20:06:08] GaleonGirl: then I have a lot of nb bf's here
    [20:06:14] Spirit Evolution: you whore
    [20:06:29] goofbalI: she is a jynx

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