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    Default A Lover's Tiff: Poke vs Pearl Shipping (Final Chapter)

    Hello there everyone.

    I posted this story on FanFiction.net late last year, and I got a phenomonal response! So I decided I would post it here to see what you guys think of it. :) Also, please don't start a debate about which shipping is better.

    Chapter One: Hot in the City
    The sun was shining like a fireball over the region of Sinnoh. Everywhere you went, it was scorching. Many wild Pokemon were snoozing under trees and in long grass, not even willing to bother passing trainers.

    Ash, Dawn, Brock, Pikachu and Piplup were slowly making their way forwards. The group was travelling towards Dawn’s next contest and Sunyshore City for Ash’s final gym battle. They should have been training, but it was too hot to do anything.

    “There is a Pokemon Centre up ahead.” Brock said, looking at his PokeGear. “We should be there soon.”

    “Finally!” Ash groaned.

    “I don’t think I can take another step.” Dawn whimpered. She then looked down at Piplup. “I have an idea! Piplup, use BubbleBeam on us!” She exclaimed. Piplup nodded, and leapt in front of the group. He opened his mouth, and fired four bubbles from his yellow beak. Ash and Brock sighed, but Dawn didn’t lose hope.

    “Ok Piplup, try Whirlpool!”

    “Pip Piplup!” Piplup said, and tried to create a whirlpool, but nothing came out.

    “I think Piplup may be too hot to make any water.” Brock said. Dawn sighed.

    “I guess you’re right, thanks anyway Piplup.” She said, and Piplup smiled. Suddenly, Ash gasped and grinned.

    “I can see the Pokemon Centre!” He yelled. He grabbed Pikachu and quickly ran forwards. Dawn did the same with Piplup, and the three friends and two Pokemon raced into the centre.


    As soon as they got in, the trio found the place to be crowded.

    “Why is it so crowded here?” Ash groaned.

    “I don’t know, but let’s find some water.” Brock suggested. They pushed through the crowd, looking for some sort of water fountain, or a Nurse Joy to talk to. It was difficult to move through, and the crowd seemed to be crushing them.

    “Pika Pika!” Pikachu groaned. It was very annoyed about the crowd.

    “Don’t worry, we’ll get out in a minute.” Ash said, smiling. But the Mouse Pokemon couldn’t handle that. Someone leant backwards, knocking their elbows into Pikachu’s face. The little yellow Pokemon glared at the person, and sparks arose around his cheeks.

    “Oh no.” Ash gasped, and lifted his Pokemon over his head.

    “Pikachu!” Pikachu cried, and released electricity from its body, frying his owner. Dawn gasped, and quickly rushed forwards as Ash collapsed.

    “Oh my goodness, are you alright!” She asked. Pikachu and Brock chuckled, and the crowd moved away to avoid any more attacks.

    “I am alright.” Ash croaked. “This used to happen all the time.” Dawn smiled warmly, and smoothed down some of his electrocuted hair. Suddenly, a shadow appeared over them. Dawn looked up, to see a girl standing there. She looked about the same age as her, maybe a bit older, with orange hair and pale skin. She was wearing a pale blue jacket, with blue cuffs and a blue lining and zip. Underneath, she was wearing matching shirt and pants. They were both white with dark blue lining. The look was finished with plain white sandals.

    “Was that some sort of signal?” The girl said, chuckling. Ash, Brock and Pikachu’s faces all lit up, but Dawn and Piplup were quite confused.

    “Misty, it’s so great to see you again!” Ash exclaimed. Misty bent down and hugged Ash, and Brock and Pikachu joined in. Dawn moved aside, smiling nervously as the friends reunited.

    ^^^^ The GalacticVerse Bibliography (Thanks to Blazaking for Banner) ^^^^

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    Default Re: A Lover's Tiff: Poke vs Pearl Shipping

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr.T
    I predict pain, foo'!
    What he said.

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    I really like so far :) Pokeshipping better win, or else I just hope Pokeshipping comes out on top
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    Thanks guys

    Chapter Two: Introductions
    A few minutes later, the four trainers were sitting on a bench outside, underneath a large tree.

    “So, you travelled with Ash and Brock back in Kanto and Johto?” Dawn said, smiling fakely.

    “Yeah, it seems like such a long time ago.” Misty laughed. “But we had such a great time, I was sad to have to leave, but the gym was calling.”

    “We all missed you.” Ash said, and Pikachu nodded in agreement. Misty blushed, and Dawn rolled her eyes.

    “Misty, you never said why you were in town.” Brock said.

    “Oh! My sister’s are all back now, and they thought that I should have a break for a few weeks. So I went on that cruise they went on.” Misty explained.

    “Has it been fun?” Dawn asked.

    “It has been amazing! I’ve been all around Kanto, the Orange Islands, Johto, Hoenn and now I’m here in Sinnoh.” Misty grinned. “And I’ve been training some of my Pokemon up as well.”

    “You specialise in water types, right?

    “Awesome! Made any new captures?” Ash asked.

    “Sadly, not yet. We are never in one area long enough to see any Pokemon.” Misty said sadly. “However, there is some issues with the engine, so the ship is going to stay here for a few days.”

    “Pika Chu Pikachu!” Pikachu said happily, and Ash, Brock and Misty laughed. Dawn chuckled, but looked away a second later. She was surprised to see a bandstand being built at the back of the centre, and more benches and tables were being carried around.

    “What’s going on over there?” She said, thinking aloud. The others
    turned to look at her.

    “Haven’t you guys heard?” Misty said, smiling broadly. When she got no reply, she laughed loudly. “There is a big festival here tonight, it is an annual thing. It is a beach themed party, and they have music and food and stuff like that, and there are lots of prizes. I presumed that’s why you guys were here.”

    “We just needed a place to crash.” Brock laughed.

    “But why don’t we go there anyway?” Dawn said, smiling. “Better than moping around here all night.”

    “Yeah, that would be a fun thing to do.” Brock said.

    “Then it’s settled! We’ll all go to the party together.” Misty grinned. Dawn grinned fakely. All of a sudden, there was a flash of white from Misty’s white and blue bag, and a Psyduck popped out.

    “Psy Psy.” The Pokemon said. Misty rolled her eyes, while Ash and Brock cracked up.

    “Get back inside your PokeBall!” Misty ordered, and quickly pulled it out.

    “Psyduck.” Psyduck sighed, and turned into red energy and disappeared. Misty joined in with Ash and Brock’s laughter, and Dawn just looked puzzled.


    Meanwhile, behind some bushes nearby, Team Rocket was watching the group through binoculars.

    “Looks like the original twerpette is back.” Jeesie said.

    “Yes, and the current twerpette doesn’t seem to be very pleased about that.” James said. Jessie giggled, and Meowth and James turned to her.

    “Care to share?” Meowth asked.

    “Well, it is obvious current twerpette is jealous.” Jessie explained. “Look at her face, her folded arms, crossed legs, how she is looking away from the others. We can use this to our advantage.”

    “Really, how?” James asked, and Jessie groaned.

    “If we trick that twerpette into battling her older counterpart, than we could steal their Pokemon. We would have a gym leaders Pokemon,
    and some more contest Pokemon for me.”

    “That is a great idea!” Meowth said, and he rubbed his paws together.

    “I always have good ideas.” Jessie scoffed, brushing back some hair. “We’ll arrange it tonight at that party.”

    “Right!” James and Meowth said in unison. Wobbuffet popped out, grinning stupidly.

    “WOBBUFFET!” He exclaimed, making the others groan.

    ^^^^ The GalacticVerse Bibliography (Thanks to Blazaking for Banner) ^^^^

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    i like this :D
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    Awesome second part! XD
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    Quote Originally Posted by Mr.T
    I pity the fool!
    Hey, wait, that doesn't fit! *gets killed by Mr.T*
    Also, this seems like an actual episode from the older anime, especially the (hillarious) Team Rocket scene.
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    Thanks for all the positive feedback everyone :)

    Chapter Three: Up Close and Personal
    Dawn pushed her way through the crowds, a room key in her hand. She was annoyed about not being able to get a room with Ash and Brock, and Nurse Joy had said that it was only a small one. Only one bunk bed, and someone else had booked that room as well.

    “Hopefully we can get the top bunk.” Dawn said, smiling at Piplup, who was nestling on her shoulder.

    “Lup!” Piplup exclaimed, smiling. Dawn grinned back, and realised they had reached their room. She put the room key in, turned the lock, opened the door and gasped.

    Misty was there.

    The red head looked up, and smiled. Dawn smiled back, but gave Piplup an agitated look.

    “You do know I am not blind.” Misty said, her back turned.

    “What do you mean?” Dawn replied, putting her bag down. Piplup leapt off her shoulder, and sat down on the bag. Dawn turned around, only to find Misty right in front of her, smirking.

    “It is obvious you don’t like me.” She said, hands on hips. Dawn scoffed, but Misty continued to smile.

    “And why does it matter if I don’t, I’ve only known you for about half an hour.” The co-ordinator replied.

    “Not only do you dislike me, I know why.” Misty said.

    “Which is?”

    “You have got a thing for Ash Ketchum.” Dawn gasped, looking horrified at the suggestion. She looked at Piplup, and even her starter was giving her looks. Dawn snorted and turned back to Misty.

    “So what, I may have a bit of a crush on him, so what?” She said, smirking now. Misty stopped smirking and walked forwards. She was slightly taller than Dawn, and looked down at her.

    “Stay away from him.” She said, breathing deeply. “May had the sense not to mess with him, and I’d recommend that you follow her lead.” Dawn straightened her back, but didn’t gain much height.

    “I can do whatever I want to do.” She growled. “And I don’t need some red head telling me what to do!” Misty stood backwards, her eyebrows narrowed, and slapped Dawn. Piplup gasped, and leapt forwards. Dawn collapsed onto her knees, clutching the left side of her face. Misty bent down, and stared into her tear filled eyes.

    “Leave him to me, and that won’t happen again.” Misty said, her eyes as fiery as her hair. Dawn let out a sob, and Misty smiled in success. She stood over her and opened the door.

    “I’ll see you around.” And left, slamming the door as she went. Dawn couldn’t hold in her tears, and began to sob more violently. Piplup leapt down and patted his trainer. Dawn looked at her stater and smiled.

    “Don’t worry, I am not going to let her stop us.” She said, and Piplup beamed. “Come on, let’s get ready for that party. It’s time to show her up.”

    ^^^^ The GalacticVerse Bibliography (Thanks to Blazaking for Banner) ^^^^

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    OMG Why's Misty such a bitch?! Anyways nice part, I still hope Pokeshipping wins
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    Misty isn't really being a bitch, she is more defending her territory against this younger predator. Both of the girls get a bit bitchy at points throughout the story :P

    ^^^^ The GalacticVerse Bibliography (Thanks to Blazaking for Banner) ^^^^

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    Nice, I hope pokeshipping wins. Great job so far!

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    Hey, can you have Mr.T appear? Just for the lulz. Awesome fic, anywats.

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    Chapter Four: Arriving in Style
    About twenty minutes later, Dawn and Piplup came out of the room. The coordinator looked spectacular. She had brought a white dress with a red frangipani print from a stall outside the centre, and had worn that instead of her normal outfit. And she had also tied her hair up, using a yellow-and-white frangipani hairclip. To finish it of, she
    had replaced her shoes with brown sandals.

    “Come on Piplup; let’s go show her what we can do.” Dawn said, grinning.

    “Piplup Pip!” Piplup chirped, smiling. Dawn beamed back, and the two friends walked down the hallway. Many people’s heads turned, and a couple of people wolf-whistled. Dawn giggled, but she knew that she needed to keep herself for her man. As Dawn turned the corner to get to the party, she froze in her tracks.

    Ash, Brock and Misty were in front of her, their backs turned and Pikachu bobbing on Ash’s shoulder. . Ash and Brock were both wearing Hawaiian shirts (blue for Ash and orange for Brock) and brown shorts, and Misty was wearing the exact same dress as Dawn! She could hear Misty telling a joke, and Ash and Brock laughed at the punch line. The group walked out of the doors at the end of the corridor, and Dawn instantly heard drums being played and the cheers of people having a good time.

    “Come on Piplup, I need to change.” Dawn said. “I am sure that that stall is still open.” Piplup nodded, and the two turned and raced off.


    The party was a great success. Almost everyone from the centre and the nearby town were there, enjoying the annual event. There were many food stalls and gift shops, a bandstand with live bands rotating, and a large dance floor for everyone. Flaming torches and hanging lanterns were the only light, and the ground was scattered with sand to give it a more realistic feel. The centre’s pool was open, and had been heated so people could enjoy it without freezing.
    Ash and Misty were on the dance floor, moving to the beat of the drums and ukuleles playing behind them.

    “This is so much fun!” Misty yelled, waving her hands in the air.

    “I know, I haven’t enjoyed myself this much in ages.” Ash replied. The two looked at each other, and Misty’s eyes twinkled.

    “I have missed you guys so much!” She said with a warm smile.

    “Same here.” Ash said. “We were planning on stopping at Cerulean City on the way back, but you being here is so- wow.”

    “Yeah, I always get that reaction.” Misty said, giggling.

    “Not you, her.” Ash said, his eyes bulging. Misty turned around, and her jaw dropped.

    Dawn had just entered the party. She had changed dresses, and was now wearing a purple one with a white hibiscus pattern. When she realised Ash was looking at her, along with the majority of the crowd, she began to walk forward, taking the hair clip out as she went. She let her hair fall down, then shook it around, making many boys jaws drop.

    “Hi Ash, hey Misty, how are you guys?” Dawn said as she approached them.

    “Fantastic.” Ash mumbled, staring at her.

    “I thought you were wearing something else.” Misty said, pretending to be interested.

    “Yeah, I was going to, but then I decided it would only suit some stupid cow.” Dawn laughed, and Misty forced out a chuckle. Then, Dawn turned to Ash. “Would you mind dancing with me for a minute?”

    “Sure, if that’s fine with you Misty.” Ash said, looking overly eager. Misty nodded and smiled fakely, and Dawn brushed past her, deliberately bumping her shoulder as she went. Misty stood there, rooted to the spot, and glared at the two as they started to dance. She looked down at Piplup, who chuckled and walked away.

    ^^^^ The GalacticVerse Bibliography (Thanks to Blazaking for Banner) ^^^^

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    lol war of the bitches xp
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    Chapter Five: Betting on Love
    Ash and Dawn danced for half an hour, while Misty sat sullen-faced until the band stopped playing.

    “That was a pretty good song.” Brock said, looking over at his old friend. Misty turned at him and smiled back weakly. Pikachu and Piplup exchanged looks, smirking.

    “Excuse me, would you like to buy a raffle ticket?” The four turned around, and saw a Nurse Joy standing behind them, wearing a simple red dress. She was holding a cardboard box with a plastic tub full of money and a number of raffle tickets. Within a second, Brock was down on his knee, grasping one of her hands.

    “I’d gladly buy a raffle ticket, as long as the grand prize is to spend the rest of my life with you.” He boomed, batting his eyes.

    “Oh… um....” Nurse Joy looked absolutely petrified.

    “Come on lover boy.” Misty groaned. She went to grab his ear, but leapt back as a Pokemon formed in front of her.

    “Croa.” The Croagunk said, his left hand glowing purple. He then stabbed Brock in the side, making him yell out and collapse. Pikachu and Piplup giggled as Brock was dragged away. There was laughter, and Misty turned to find Ash and Dawn walking over, muttering about Brock’s demise.

    “That always happens.” Dawn laughed.

    “I know, he has being doing it for a while.” Misty said through clenched teeth.

    “You still haven’t got a ticket.” Nurse Joy said, shaking the cardboard box.

    “What are the prizes?” Dawn asked.

    “The grand prize is a luxury cruise to the Sevii and Orange Islands.” Dawn chuckled, and stared at Misty.

    “You probably won’t enjoy another cruise.” She said.

    “I am sure I could survive.” Misty replied, and Dawn smirked.

    “The other prizes include vouchers, bikes and there are three VIP dinner packs.” Dawn and Misty’s heads spun around so fast their necks nearly broke.

    “I’ll take one!” They both shrieked at the same time. Ash, Pikachu, Piplup and Nurse Joy all jumped at their loudness. The nurse put her smile back on, and quickly issued them each a raffle ticket.

    “They’ll be drawn soon.” She said nervously, and quickly rushed off.

    “Come on Pikachu, let’s go look for something to eat.” Ash said.

    “Pika Pika!” The Mouse Pokemon smiled, and leapt up onto his shoulder. Misty and Dawn looked at each other as soon as he had left.

    “Let the best women win.” Misty said, standing only a centimetre away from Dawn.

    “Bring it on, ginga.” Dawn replied. Misty raised her hand to slap her, but Dawn grabbed hold of it. “Don’t even think about sister.” She growled, and slammed it down. She then spun around, her hair whacking Misty as she spun, and walked away, Piplup racing after.


    Over at one of the food stalls, Jessie, James and Meowth were buying some smoothies. Jessie was wearing a coconut bra and a short red dress, and James and Meowth were wearing red Hawaiian shirts and brown shirts, identical to Ash and Brock’s. All three were wearing thick black sunglasses. They watched as Dawn walked away from Misty, and smiled to each other.

    “Have you finished the robot?” James asked.

    “Yep, it’ll be ready and waiting for those two little princesses to start fighting.” Meowth said, rattling his claws together. The three began to laugh, and Jessie pulled out Seviper’s PokeBall.

    “If everything goes according to plan, we could probably even trick the others twerps there as well.” She said. James and Meowth looked at her curiously, but all they could see where her lips curled in a smile.

    ^^^^ The GalacticVerse Bibliography (Thanks to Blazaking for Banner) ^^^^

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