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    omg I have tears in my eyes now. D: /emotional

    I feel so sad for Kyurem now. poor thing just wants friends, but... if that happens... :c
    I really like the writing style as well~ it's so silly and cute, and yet you can pull off a super depressing ending while still using it as well. that's really awesome~

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pancake-chan View Post
    omg I have tears in my eyes now. D: /emotional

    I feel so sad for Kyurem now. poor thing just wants friends, but... if that happens... :c
    I really like the writing style as well~ it's so silly and cute, and yet you can pull off a super depressing ending while still using it as well. that's really awesome~
    Thank you, honey I'm glad that even though the ending was quite sad, you could still enjoy the story and the writing style.

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    Well, that was sad...

    I really liked your characterization of Kyurem, though. It fits in with the Lacunosa Town tales as well.

    Tbh though, when I looked at Kyurem's sprite at first, it looked like it was smiling. :P
    I was forgetting to tell, but I'm still stuck in Route 2 in Pokemon Black. No idea about Lacunosa; just about the actual cave where Kyurem resides (talk about lucky )

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    Wow! very well written and the ending was touching... i like it though :)

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    Kayi, you do realsie that the words Pokédex and reality can not be used together, right?

    Or else, for every time that Entei escaped me in HG a city would go kaboom.


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    This is the trope And Call Him George, exactly as shown.

    Warning, TVTropes link.
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    noooooo! *sobs* Why?!
    Poor lonely Kyurem...

    That was great, I have to admit. You did a great job of portraying Kyurem's nature, and I love how you portrayed Reshiram and Zekurom as meanies.

    COMING SOON!

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    Quote Originally Posted by S-Blade View Post
    noooooo! *sobs* Why?!
    Poor lonely Kyurem...

    That was great, I have to admit. You did a great job of portraying Kyurem's nature, and I love how you portrayed Reshiram and Zekurom as meanies.
    Thank you, hon I did my best, and I'm certainly pleased you liked it!

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    This seems to fit in quite well with Kyurem's seemingly resentful and solitary nature, and in the games, it's rather cold greeting toward the player. But, its for that greeting why I've never caught Kyurem myself. This also seems to explain it's atrophied wings and likely battle damage (right horn and wing).

    Perhaps this should be the next move, based upon Kyurem's past. :D
    Last edited by Vraell; 9th August 2011 at 10:51 PM.

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    :^( the last couple paragraphs were very sad :^( but kyurem IS awesome in battels.

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    So sad ,but really fun to read! Nice job!

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