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    Default Re: Ice Cream Date (ToxicBoltshipping Three-shot) PG-13

    Awww, nice way to end the story. I like how you didn't drag it out, you got right to the point. I also like Bill and Surge's interaction and how Bill asked for advice from Surge.

    And the ending was awesome :)

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    Default Re: Ice Cream Date (ToxicBoltshipping Three-shot) PG-13

    Quote Originally Posted by Paperhorse View Post
    Awww, nice way to end the story. I like how you didn't drag it out, you got right to the point. I also like Bill and Surge's interaction and how Bill asked for advice from Surge.

    And the ending was awesome :)
    Thank You!

    I'm glad people actually like my story!

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    Default Re: Ice Cream Date (ToxicBoltshipping Three-shot) PG-13

    For a second there I thought Bill was going to confess his love for Surge. But that would have been a bit too obvious wouldn't it?

    This fic was a nice little snapshot into the sweetness that is TBS. Good job Yoshi!
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    “ That was all I thought about ever since the war ended and I was sent back home to Unova.”
    I like this little detail.

    “Didn't you know? They call me the Advice Guru around these parts!” Surge exclaimed

    “I thought it was the 'Lightning American',” Bill responded. “I bet people only come to you when they're desperate!”

    “Like you?”

    “Hey! I'm not desperate!” Bill cried as Surge laughed.
    This exchange made me smile. XD

    As Surge walked down the road towards the town he smirked said, “I'm so sleeping in Koga's room tonight instead.”

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